Yang Jian's Life Simulation in the Heavens

It is recommended not to follow the plot. I have only used the golden finger once so far. The dungeon is better than the reality you wrote. It should be the climax when you put it on the shelf. For example, enter the dungeon to change your character and gain the power to lift the table instead of playing tricks. It is only now that I am disappointed with Chen Xiang for the second time. I also pay attention to it. It is certain that your grades will not be very good. You are writing novels, not literature. There are many ways to make up for regrets. You are right to choose to follow the original plot. It is not easy to jump, but it is also uninteresting. From the perspective of novels, I hope you can set this Yang Jian as a low-ranking partner in the world of Zhutian Hengsha. , And then upgrade all the way through various mythological background dungeons until you match the True Lord Erlang in the prehistoric era, instead of grinding and grinding in a world where the highest level is no greater than Daluo. Your emotional drama is mediocre, and listening to thunder in silence is more effective. All the feelings and emotions of Yang Jian in your writing are complete It's a narration or Yang Jian's inner confession, but you forget that sometimes a look, an action, or something you do can make the character fuller. Currently, Yang Jian is like a paper man. Don't introduce yourself so much. Some things are not for you to say, but for others to see.

What it is written seems boring. It talks about love and love. It is just like those soap romance dramas. I am not here to watch romance dramas. I have become a god and am so ignorant. Shouldn't I pursue the avenue?

The writing is okay, but am I here to see the torture? Your jb profile is deceiving.

Tell the truth! I came here just for Yang Jian and the simulator, but I was very disappointed. 😓Did you write the story of Life's Growing Hate in the East again? Then why don't I watch Life Grows and Hatred Flowing East? It's an already depressing book, but you read it again and it's very annoying 😡Besides, do you think your writing of the original plot is better than the original? 😓😓😓 Next, let's talk about this kind of depression. When we look at fandoms, what we look at is breaking the original trajectory and breaking the fate. You follow the original fate again, which is terrible.

Why! It is not as enjoyable and enjoyable to read as "Life and Hate Water Changdong". In the book, Yang Jian sweeps all over the world, has beautiful women in his arms, and enjoys life. Yang Jian in this book is too depressing, and he needs to learn how to write a refreshing and healing novel like "Life Is Ever Hateful of Water". Come on! !

It is recommended to keep the Queen Mother. You don't even watch current TV series. Without the Queen Mother to control the rules of heaven, it's all about love 😂

Recommend a refreshing article [Life is long and water is long and the water is long east]

I can't stand this novel at all. It's too depressing. I'll put it harshly. There is only one truth in fantasy novels like this. Whoever has the biggest fist will listen to whoever has the biggest fist. So Yang Jian's random thoughts are of no use. You should work hard to break through and practice hard instead of relying on tactics.

Finally I know what feels wrong. Yang Jian is too strong, the simulation is useless, and the simulated world is not exciting, resulting in no characteristics. It feels like Yang Jian is just a tool for Da Luo. Unlike Lu Bu's book, every simulation can bring growth to the protagonist's life. Judging from the title of the book, only the one written by Yang Jian is good, and the simulation part is quite awkward.

The character Yang Jian itself is a typical example of Chinese mythology. Until the Lotus Lantern series, works such as Life and Hate and Water Changdong appeared in front of the public, they directly filled Yang Jian's character, character, loyalty, and various excellent qualities. How many of China's millions of online writers can write about Yang Jian well?

Without the Queen Mother, everything is about love now. It makes me sick.

Brother, I hope I can write something different. There is no need to follow Shui Changdong all the time in life. Now it seems that the original Yang Jian has a plug-in. It is understandable that the change is very slow. It was excessive in the early stage, but don't keep dragging it. It will be very frustrating.

The most hateful ones are Yang Jian, his sister and his mother. Write these two bitches to death.

Good guy, just finish the book, you are indeed disgusting enough

I never thought the Queen Mother was wrong. Why do many Baolian Lantern fans think the Queen Mother is wrong? Author, tell me, where did the Queen Mother go wrong? Do you have to rebel against her?

Added bookshelves. I read seventy chapters, and just these few thoughts, moth, moth, moth, moth, moth...; Chenxiang is still a child, child, child, child, give you another chance...; I can't beat, I can't beat, I can't beat, I can't beat...; It's all my fault, my fault, my fault, my fault... It's similar to the Sims of Lu Bu I read, in that it slowly changes from the original character. It will inevitably lead to frustration in front of S, because Lu Bu's life and Yang Jian's situation are inherently in a whirlpool, and they are in a dilemma.

Speaking of which, if gods can be influenced by living beings, Erlangshen should be Jiao Enjun's face now, right? If Jiao Enjun is dead, will Erlang Shen go to the underworld to beat him?

The author broke up. I suspect it was because of Eunuch. Is there any other book about the two? It would be better if it is from Wanjie Ryu.

After reading more than ten chapters, I suddenly realized that this seems to be a fan story about life's hatred. Looking at the comments, it's true. . Forget it. I came here for the Second Master's journey. Although it's understandable to see people growing in resentment in life, it makes me feel aggrieved when I see it again. .

Yang Jian

Can't we make a side story and leave the outline?

Are you a eunuch? Okay, delete it

As long as you resume the update, I will order all the subsequent chapters. This will forget the second brother's regret.

So, my money was spent on a eunuch again?

Yang Jian is too arrogant, and this arrogance will become a hindrance to him. He is not down to earth. Like "Wang Lin", he has to go through the process of transforming into a mortal and then recovering.

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Update

Emma, ​​it's over. The monthly tickets I prepared are all in vain.

It is recommended that the author should focus on writing the plot of Yang Jian's world, and try to cover the simulated plot as early as possible next time, otherwise the original update will not be enough, and everyone will mainly come here for Yang Jian.

It's hard to keep up with what you're doing. Since you want to write again, then you should write well.