The First Emperor Who Covers the Sky Rises Again

I feel like it just bears the name of the First Emperor. The characters are too ordinary and the proper temperament of the First Emperor is not captured.

Finally someone started writing about Qin Shihuang, I support you in writing it

This novel is just trying to sell dog meat on the head of a sheep. Is there a good earth with so many resources that cannot be developed and become a grandson (metaphor)? If you can't write about the First Emperor, don't forcefully write about it. Aren't you just copying Ye Fan No. 2? If not, let's go get some screws! !

I haven't started reading it yet. I only read the introduction and table of contents, and then I didn't want to read it. You actually used Qin Shihuang as the theme, so shouldn't your main plot be on the earth? When I looked at your catalog and your title, I thought you were writing about the rebirth of Qin Shihuang before he unified the six kingdoms, and he slowly cultivated it in the process. Spiritual energy still existed during the Qin Dynasty, so the Qin Dynasty can also be said to be a dynasty of cultivating immortals. Then wait until Qin Shihuang becomes stronger and becomes the Great Sage (the earth has a lot of resources) before entering the Star Ancient Road. But if you want to write about Qin Shihuang, enter Beidou directly, and then slowly grow up, then what do I think you are doing? Isn't this the path of Ye Fan?

I saw that someone was inside Zhe Tian to calculate the fate of the First Emperor and even his future. As a result, one's vitality was severely damaged, tsk tsk. Does the author know that there will be consequences for such a character? It's outrageous that he's not dead yet. Abandoned🤫

Like Shi Hao and Lao Tzu, they protect the Tao and prove the Tao, the Immortal Pond and the Great Luo Immortal Sword, the Xuanhuang Pagoda and the Diamond Bracelet. Two weapons

Wearing the cloak of the First Emperor, it is a perfect example of Ye Fan. What should I write? Just read the original work. Does the protagonist match the three characters of the First Emperor? I originally wanted to see the First Emperor farming and fighting for hegemony in Zhetian. Haha, I didn't expect that without the First Emperor of the Qin Dynasty, would he be the First Emperor?

To be honest, none of the pre-Qin qi practitioners were fine. They were either great sages or quasi-emperors. Moreover, people like Ge Hong who were at the back of the Qin Dynasty were also prosperous. As a result, Ying Zheng died when the earth's resources were still there. Emm….

Isn't it? Are the twelve little golden figures the First Emperor's tools of enlightenment? No way, right? Is this too low? Is Tai'a sword bad? Isn't Yuxi bad? Seal of the Human Emperor? The twelve little golden men give me the same feeling as the eighteen bronze men with a bald donkey.

I originally read about Zulong and thought it was a good subject, but after reading more than 20 chapters, I realized that your protagonist is not worthy of being called Ying Zheng.

After changing the vest of Zulong, he is no longer domineering at all. Let's change his name and stop Huo Huo Zulong.

If you write about Emperor Qin, you can write down the growth history in one go. Wouldn't it be better to start directly as the emperor? Now you are just copying Ye Fan, practicing and growing, establishing the heaven, and destroying the restricted area.

I came to see the emperor farming in Zhetian, not to see someone named Qin Shihuang pretending to be slapped in the face. The world would be the same with or without you.

How to say it? The writing style is nothing like that of Zhe Tian, ​​and it doesn't have the domineering power of Zu Long. It just feels like an ordinary time traveler traveling through another world, fighting monsters and leveling up, without the feeling that Zu Long is Zhe Tian.

When I read Chapter 2, Ying Zheng accidentally entered the valley when he was young and was baptized with dragon blood. I just want to say that my son Ying Zheng (Wang Teng) has the appearance of a great emperor. I don't mean to curse, but I feel very similar to Wang Teng 😰

The first emperor without the Qin Dynasty or the first emperor? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head

Ancestral dragon is not worthy of a true dragon magic?

The title of this book doesn't match the content. It's just a time traveler fighting monsters and upgrading. It doesn't have an eye-catching feeling. It's content for the general public.

I don't know if you have watched "Xian Qin Multiverse Empire"

I personally feel it is insulting to Ying Zheng.

Why do you think Qin Shihuang is famous? It's because of his great talents and strategies, brave counselors and millions of soldiers under his command. You haven't written anything about it.

You can eat Qing Yusheng and give it to the Chaos Body clone

When you wake up, you go to the Kunlun Mountains to transform and resuscitate the soldiers of the Qin Dynasty. When you wake up, isn't it the time when foreign invaders invade? It's time to rebuild the Qin Dynasty. It would be great to unify the earth and let the earth's spiritual energy recover and accumulate a wave of development to other ancient stars. You can do it like an interstellar travel. You have visited all the Beidou 5 domains and then went to Ziwei. Then you went to Eternity and added an original Western fantasy planet. On the ancient road to the human race, I returned to the earth, and then I went to Beidou with Ye Fan on the Nine Dragons to pull the coffin. It was like an invincible stream of garbage.

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I hope the author will respect Emperor Ye Tian and give him more opportunities to protect Emperor Ye Tian! Emperor Ye Tian's enemies are your enemies! You can refer to the strongest protector of the sky.

Why does it smell like martial arts?

And when you enter the Divine Forbidden City, don't other great emperors also enter the Divine Forbidden City? Isn't this even more unlucky? Have you read the original work?

The writing is okay, but the ending is terrible.

What is the author doing, this is the end?

How about this one? After reading some, I feel like the author doesn't know much about covering the sky.