I Am Cultivating Immortality in a World of Tomb Robbers

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In the opening chapter, you write the protagonist scolding the ancestor, and I feel that this protagonist is not very reliable. Or maybe his IQ is not very high

There is a method of cultivating immortality in the tomb, but the owner of the tomb is still dead?

Shennong's trumpet is here... I'll open a post first, and I'll leave a detailed comment later. I hope there's no system or bloodline. These poisonous points also record the author's current 70,000 words. If these happen to be in the outline, the author is advised to think twice before committing. Then I would like to give some small suggestions to the author. Is it illegal to rob tombs? Write more about battles of wits and less about battles of courage. Introduce more about the mountains, rivers, geography or architectural features, and write less about love and love. If you can do this, then your book can be guaranteed to be safe.

The protagonist is a Taoist, right? He also said that this world can cultivate immortality. He dares to rob tombs. I'm afraid he will be tricked to death.

There is a problem with your setting. Wouldn't it be poisonous to put the method of immortality in the tomb of the dead?😅😅

Signed, feel free to invest😁

... After reading it for the second time, I saw the third chapter... How can I say... It has been changed, but not completely. The problem is still there. It's very uncomfortable if you make it legal or public... Besides, the encounter between the protagonist and Wu Xie and his group is also a problem. Just say that, for the reason you gave me, if I were the third uncle, I could use a hundred excuses to get rid of it. If you continue to struggle, I will find a place where no one is around to deal with you. Not to mention impossible, not to mention the real world, even in the original text of Tomb Raiders, Wu Xie was almost solved by others many times. So watch less of today's mindless dramas...

Already invested, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Many of the scenes of the main character in the fanfic are scenes from the original work. It is hard to understand who is the main character. Also, the little butterfly in the main character does not affect the direction of the plot. It completely follows the direction of the original work and the main character is marginalized.

I feel like I'm watching Tomb Raiders Notes. . .

Is this the author of Tomb Raider Notes opening a trumpet to fill the hole?

Is this a 90+% copy of the original text? Are you kidding me?

After reading Chapter 9, it seems to have nothing to do with the protagonist.

The first one is so poisonous, and the character of the protagonist is just a loser.

Diaosi character. An ordinary person can become much calmer when he grows up to middle age. Why do cultivators become losers? To cultivate immortality and practice martial arts, you must learn the scriptures and endorsements, and learn about luck and muscles. Why do you think an ordinary person is less educated than them? Why are you such a loser and extremely poisonous?

Your innate treasure is so rubbish! If you have such a good start and still want to rob tombs, why not cultivate immortality! Why are only tomb robbers capable of cultivating immortals? Many of them do not fit the development of the story.

By the way, does the state encourage tomb robbing? And such a family of tomb robbers and Faqiu Mojin, Guanshan Xiling, they are not all immortal masters

What is the realm of the core of a family of tomb robbers like Xiang Wu Sansheng? No matter what, I want a golden elixir, a god with the blood of a mythical beast like me.

This is a narration with the protagonist, not a novel

After reading the comments, it seems unreliable!

Damn it, is the protagonist a fool? He has to learn Taoism without practicing. Do you have any cultivation? Just use it. The author is also fucking stupid.

Are you a eunuch?🤔

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