The Great Achievement of Film Variety

After reading more than ten chapters, I couldn't stand it any longer. It was a bad batch.

Can you please not write about Salena? A person who works as a secretary for a drug dealer can be clean. So many years of anti-drug education have been passed on to dogs. Anyone who has anything to do with drugs deserves to die. Nine out of ten will be shot without any injustice.

I don't think this novel will exceed 600,000 words. Hong Kong comprehensive novels are not easy to write because they integrate so many world movies, but now they are even more integrated. Various fantasy martial arts and power systems have changed beyond recognition. The author will definitely write it down later

How can I put it this way? The last time I saw such an old pretense was in high school. Does the protagonist have no tutor or never go to school? Isn't it a life-changing dog? The first time you met, you were not polite at all? Go to school and pay like 25,000 to 80,000 yuan? Beijing University? In those days, who in Hong Kong was interested in mainland China's high-mathematics competition? Who will take advantage of you? Besides, people should at least be polite, right? If you can't stand it, the author can enjoy himself.

The most annoying thing is when the little guy who beats people tells people that it's his fault, how about you just cut the grass and get rid of the root?

The profile says he was smuggled in, but it was Uncle Da who picked him up, so he could do it openly and without smuggling.

I subscribed until the kidnapping chapter and no longer wanted to subscribe. In the beginning, I felt pretty good whether I was writing about technology or cultivating immortals. The system in the world of cultivation is quite interesting. But later on, he actually started to fight with the Black Society himself, and the fight was not over until more than 170 chapters. The problem is that what I wrote earlier seems to be that despite his awesome status, he still ended up personally facing problems in the end. What is the use of his identity and interpersonal relationships? I wrote at the beginning of my book that the facts of the case are determined in accordance with laws and regulations. The previous plot can be understood and whitewashed, but the subsequent behavior is nothing... The money you win in the casino cannot be seen! For someone, kill the underworld alone? ? People? No matter whether you were forced to fight back in self-defense before, it can be seen from the chapter names that there are black spots that cannot be washed away, and as long as you find the right spot (someone), everyone will know that he is a suspect. Has your brain been eaten? And looking at the names of the later chapters, you still got the custom-made weapon from the front, 999... Of course, I didn't read the chapters after the kidnapping and only read the chapter names. I also guessed the subsequent plot based on the names, maybe there is something wrong.

The plot is too long-winded, and the main line is too vague. Does the protagonist want to continue practicing cultivation, or is he going to show off his talents in academia, or is he going to kill everyone in business? He is a gangster who can't be on the stage all day long, and love, the cheats are so big, but the pattern is not improved at all.

Have you forgotten your talent as a mathematician? I've been stupid all day fighting with monsters and monsters.

I read Chapter 256 and learned skills from a teacher. It feels really fucking disgusting. I am not a vegetarian, except for other things that are very disgusting. But you damn summoned someone else. There is no means of control at all. If you are not strong, someone can slap you to death. You can also look at the memory or control it. tmdWhat is learning from a teacher? You enter Buddhism. He is also the head of a fucking sect and has become a lay disciple of Buddhism. The location has changed. You, the head of Taoism, can't compare to the lay disciples of Buddhism. This one feels disgusting.

I feel really uncomfortable when you set the protagonist like this, a family member of a martyr, a genius setting, instead of going to a top university in the world to show off, he goes to a high school to fight with the underworld? Low is not low.

The sea! ! ! You are all water! ! !

The setting is okay. After reading dozens of chapters, I couldn't help but complain that the author is too verbose, with a lot of explanations, theories, etc. As a result, there were dozens of chapters and not a single plot was passed. You must know that Hong Kong TV dramas are all a big IP, and you are still a movie TV series. There are so many plots to write. If the author is so procrastinating, it will be difficult to have the desire to follow it 😂. There aren't many Hong Kong variety shows that are outstanding at the beginning. I'm just complaining about the plot progression here, and I hope the author can improve it a lot.

Is the author's irrigation too serious? Chapter 150 Irrigation Channel Chapter 191

A rare trash book with an old-fashioned plot and complicated and useless systems.

A master of mathematics can boast of being omnipotent, but he can't compare to the God of Gamblers. You can't even break the cards of the Gamblers, not to mention the layers of tricks of the God of Gamblers. After reading these chapters, I don't think the author's writing skills can produce such high-end IQ suppression.

You really haven't watched a few movies and TV shows before you were reborn. As long as you have some impressions of what you watch, you won't be able to remember a few characters. It's really embarrassing for the time traveler to open such a big cheat and act in such a different way.

The plot of Poison Dragon Village is too slow, smelly and long. You've run away from me and chased me so many times. It's disgusting to see. The enemy runs so fast, and Cao Wei deliberately drags him behind. How deep is this cave? Deliberately delaying the plot?

Instead of cultivating immortality, practice martial arts instead.

The golden finger is set too high. In this setting, you can usually become rich in the world after 20 chapters, and you need to consider breaking out of the earth at chapter 30. After chapter 100, if there is a planet in the galaxy that has not been occupied by humans, it only means that the protagonist has wasted his talent. With such a big gold finger, you only use it to fight with Young and Dangerous? ? ? Wow, have you ever played LoL? Your level one team is equivalent to the blind monk with unlimited firepower. He took ten kills, and ended up with a bunch of AP equipment to apply foils to his teammates. In the version where the shield was slashed, you were still supporting a cat. It's outrageous, outrageous.

I have been reading novels for ten years, and this is the first time I have been so disgusted.