Azeroth Civilization: Starting with the Great Pyramid

I suggest the author reorganize it, otherwise the result of the book will be worrying. In terms of content, plug-ins like Civilization 6 are mainly reflected in the leap forward in farming and technology, using the power of wonders to accelerate this process. But now not only the cycle is lengthened for the sake of rhythm, farming and construction are also sketched out, focusing on politics and so-called diplomacy. It is like no longer writing about prompt rewards for establishing diplomatic relations with new countries or city-states, because you are already addicted to it. We are not opposed to a broad mind and uniting all races, but the process of promoting the development of civilization should be the main line. How can you lead and change the world when your country is not strong enough? From a world view, Azeroth is a typical world where great power belongs to itself. Mortals must form a joint force to shake those extraordinary powers. This is the meaning of civilization, and it is also the interface where the Civilization 6 plug-in is embedded. But now there are two skins, the vast sea has not grown up, the dividends to the world have not yet been revealed, and the exchange of ideas has not impacted the old continent in the war. If the power of mortals cannot rise, how can we talk about the power of civilization evolution. The author must be clear that the most magnificent power of civilization lies not only in the beauty of individual lives, but also in the great power of individuals to change history and change the world. It is superficial to only focus on the former. In terms of character creation, when you wrote Civilization 6, you didn't pay much attention to ordinary people. Instead, you kept writing the stories of these heroes. The epic feeling and the creation of small characters were not interesting. The reason is that Azeroth is originally a world of heroes. This is understandable. It just needs to be interspersed with more mortal stories to let readers intuitively feel what the light of civilization is. At the same time, since it is a heroic world, you have weakened the description of personal power. There is no level difference, no description or sketch of the power system, and there is no obvious path for the protagonist's personal growth. This feels torn from this world. From an audience point of view, you wrote the plot of Warcraft but weakened the personal power, did not deeply integrate into the exploration, the protagonist experienced major events and did not grow, and the final gain was not personal but diplomatic. This kind of writing is a low-magic medieval type. You write that the lord manages it, but the territory develops slowly, and you deliberately slow down the pace of expansion. You write about the power of miracles in Civilization 6, but you delay and delay the process of building miracles. You write about time travel, but in the description, you deliberately avoid contact with important characters who have not yet grown up, such as little Arthas, little Gianna, and little Thrall, which is against common sense. Taken together, this way of writing is very unpleasant to two important audience groups, Warcraft players and Civilization 6 players. Finally, the author suggests that if you want this book to do well, you must think carefully about what you want to use the wonders of Civilization 6 and the concept of civilization evolution to bring to the troubled but powerful Azeroth? How to combine the charm of civilization with the magical epic world. Of course, if you just write casually, then feel free to do whatever you like. It's really fun to embed Warcraft with civilization, come on!

To be honest, the saying that power itself has no right or wrong is bullshit in the context of Azeroth. Advanced evil spells will always drain the vitality of the user, other lives, and even the land. Is this kind of power not evil? The undead resurrected by necromancy outside the Shadow Realm naturally hate life. Large-scale necromancy will cause the land to wither. Is this kind? The presence of these forces affects the mind.

The layout is good, it is neither the imperial road nor the specious light of communism, but is expressed in terms of civilized fire, so that there is greater room for error in various attempts, and there is no fear of writing mistakes.

Just rely on the plot and cause all kinds of troubles for the protagonist without building any wonders. You really shouldn't waste money watching it.

I can't write such a poisonous thing without drinking three pounds of paraquat.

The start is amazing and the more I write about it, the more I praise it.

World of Warcraft is really a paradise for heroes. Fight if you want to fight, plow if you want to plow. Combined farming and war, the world is invincible. The vast world has a lot to offer.

What the hell is this written about? The title of the book is a wonder. There are only two wonders in more than a hundred chapters? It's better to change the title of the book. It's really a rip-off.

At the beginning, the demigods are slashed with their hands. By the way, aren't the demigods on the troll side all Loa? The trolls are written like humans, without any special features. They create a pyramid out of thin air, and the trolls are just like meeting their biological fathers. They just bow to each other when they come over. The most outrageous thing is that the protagonist also established a god-killer cult, and then the trolls believe in you, and the trolls believe in humans... Are all those Loa gods just eating for nothing? They are good-tempered, but isn't this name a bit...

Let's return to the protagonist's territory construction as soon as possible. This negotiation plot seems a bit boring. One thing to say, when I played World of Warcraft, I was also a blood elf player, but the high elves were really made by myself, and they cannot be saved by gods.

I'm so dizzy. What is the Goldfinger protagonist running around doing all the time? Can't he develop his own territory? A lord writes like an adventurer and soldier

I hope we don't engage in political games, it's disgusting. If we really want to form a force, many peace-loving but brave and warlike races in Azeroth can unite. Tauren, bears, pandaren, and bearmen are all much purer than the dirty and smelly human nobles.

Is the protagonist a time traveler? Why do I feel like it's not the time traveler who brought Goldfinger, but Goldfinger who traveled to Azeroth and found a host? The position is very strange. Do you really think that you are from the Kingdom of Storm?

The political system with the protagonist's strength is not good. Just like Yugoslavia before, it is just a loose alliance, each with its own little 99. Once the protagonist has an accident, it will immediately fall apart.

To be honest, what is the purpose of persuading peace between elves and trolls? Isn't this the same as a shit stirrer? The war between the two sides has been resolved. Has the conflict been resolved? No! I will still fight if I should fight after you leave! In order to satisfy your temporary mother's heart, the war that might have ended completely has once again turned into a tug-of-war. . . It's really yours

I gave up the book when I saw that culture was to be introduced in Zandalari. Introduction of culture is not just about introducing a few literary works. If something goes wrong, just ban the works. The introduction of culture is a national proposition. It requires the entire country to evaluate and control and accurately introduce it. It is not something that one person can do. In those years of radical introduction of culture in the country, how many sequelae were caused by the mud and sand, and how much energy the country spent to solve it. Up to now, it has only treated the symptoms but not the root cause. It's not that I look down on the author. Any culture is viable, good or bad. The entire country is not ready to introduce culture indiscriminately, even if it looks good. Why does the author think that he can control it? If the author could really control it, he would be a national think tank, or at least a national cadre, and would not be writing novels here.

What a pity. This book could really be written by the author. If you change your mind, you can artificially postpone the plot of Warcraft. Everyone wants to see you farming, developing and creating wonders.

I would like to give some suggestions to the author The initial establishment of Hanhai from scratch can be said to be very amazing, but it began to change after returning to the human kingdom. In the early stage, it attracted readers who wanted to see farming, but in the middle, it suddenly began to interfere in the politics and diplomacy of the human kingdom. This contrast is particularly awkward. Regardless of whether the protagonist was from Stormwind City before, but now that he has brought a group of people to Kalimdor to work alone, he should focus on the development of Kalimdor. Whether it is accepting other races or pioneering development, it is much better than continuing politics and diplomacy. Moreover, the setting of system upgrade wonder productivity consumption * 10 is too bad. Even if additional restrictions are added, it is better than directly multiplying by ten. In the past, it only took a few hundred to admit a race, and to eliminate a single digit of a geek. Later, it cannot be hundreds of thousands or millions of points at a time. Data collapse is a very fatal poisonous point in the novel. I hope the author will consider it. There is also "Civilization with Time". I think this should be the core of the book, but the further I look at it, the more I feel it cannot be reflected. It can be written from a personal perspective, such as the life of an early immigrant, a troll, a goblin, an Alterac immigrant, what changes have taken place in their lives, their integration into the vast sea, their understanding and identification with civilization, etc. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better.

The trolls are Li De's allies. Don't forget that Zandalar and the desert trolls are on Li De's side. On the contrary, the high elves know each other. You can't push your allies away for Lothar! This is the true Holy Mother

I haven't read Chapter 33. Where is your wonder?

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