In the Prehistoric Times, I Am the Original Heavenly Deity

Just looking at the system makes me want to vomit. Nowadays, every novel really needs a system. It can't be done without a system.

Yuanshi Tianzun still needs to be systematic. Is it like the saint who takes one hundred meters at a time?

Will the original Tianzun still need a plug-in system?

Diss system, why can't the system be used as another magic weapon? Later, the other person is the origin of Dao, but he was influenced by the protagonist and turned into a person who is more likely to accept and grow better.

If you fail to complete the mission at the beginning, you will die! It's really poisonous! ! ! !

It's okay for novice writers. There are so many systems out there. It's okay to have a system that's not too troublesome. Besides, if you read the details carefully, this system is probably not a real system.

Inferior prehistoric times, Chapter 60 is too frustrating to look back on. Six saints have to restrain their hands to fight against one Taiyi, and the realm of Taiyi was forcibly created by the dead Rahu (a dead Rahu can How powerful it is 😂, I can only say that the author forcibly cheated), if you are afraid that the fight with Taiyi will affect the prehistoric world, then you drag Taiyi into the chaos to fight. Don't tell me that 6 saints can't do it. Are you really a low-level prehistoric person? Or a halo of wisdom? ? ? (Just complaining, don't criticize me)

Although I haven't read it yet, after reading the introduction, I was wondering, what kind of thing can be used as the golden finger of Yuanshi Tianzun?

After reading a few chapters, I only saw the diaosi flavor. Why are all the novels nowadays like this?

His name is Yuanshi Tianzun😅😅

I've listened to one or two pages of this book, and I feel so embarrassed. I really can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

Tongtian and Yuan Yuan have different ideas and paths. Besides, the disciples from the first day were also good. How could Yuan Yuan be allowed to bow to Tong Tian? The author is also a talented person. If you and people at your level have different ideas, do you bow your head at all times?

There are no good people in Jiejiao and they will be destroyed sooner or later.

Wow, another retro article.

I just read the first chapter and it feels redundant. I might as well not write it.

Let me tell you this, the systematic prehistoric times are not the real prehistoric times. I don't know why, watching this kind of prehistoric stuff makes me vomit a little bit, and I just want to see that kind of supreme prehistoric setting, which is quite interesting.

Good guy, Di Jun turned out to be the second child, and Tai Yi turned out to be Di Jun's elder brother. What the author wrote is really a different kind of prehistoric period.

Once I saw the system, I had no motivation to open the book and read it. . . .

Yuanshi Tianzun belt system? Are you kidding? What kind of prehistoric system should Yuanshi Tianzun be equipped with?

System: numb, slap in the face. Let me remind you, I am not against the system. As I said before, it can be used as a magic weapon to assist cultivation or some kind of functional tool. But you started to wipe it out, and then you leveled it up. If you say it, you will be obliterated. If you don't complete the task, you will be obliterated. If you don't complete the task, you will lose level three. How can you bear this? This kind of books about prehistoric times and myths generally strive to improve the characters in the book and make the world a grander. If you lower this thing from the beginning, at least 30% of the readers will be disappointed. Except for this, now erasure, downgrade, or this unsolvable deus ex machina practice has been eliminated. When you say obliterate, you can say that knowing the specific situation of the system will lead to unknown disasters, which are currently unstoppable. When you talk about dropping a level, you can say there are obstacles to breaking through. If you can't do it, your cultivation level will be ruined. Try to change the consequences to external conditions rather than the system, so that readers will be more accepting. There are also tasks. You want the protagonist to do it. Similar to what I said above, if you give a direction, it doesn't matter whether you do it or not. But if you don't do it, you will have the result of that direction. If you do the task, you will know what the result will be, and there will be rewards. Character: There is also character, I think it has also been improved. Of course, I don't know that the author wants to ignore the protagonist's transformation years and transform the protagonist's character through the three of them traveling together. Like this, readers actually already have an imagination of the protagonist's character. For example, if you write a primitive character with a hippie smile, no one will recognize it. If you write a protagonist with a loser character, no one will recognize it. The original subject should be more intelligent, mature and steady. If you want to write a more skinny character, you can use an avatar. Anyway, there are many gods and goddesses in mythology who have incarnations, so it doesn't matter if you write about the protagonist's character through incarnations. Just like in Naruto, the protagonist has little skin, but the shadow clone is very skinny.

My evaluation is not as good as Tomato's one😅

He doesn't have the aura or character of a strong person.

If you want to write a heroine, write it, but if you write a protagonist who has a relationship with Fengzu, but the protagonist doesn't want this relationship, you write it like this, and the protagonist looks like a scumbag. You either have to be a female protagonist, or you don't write it. She obviously has a relationship with Fengzu, but the protagonist feels that the relationship is useless and doesn't want it. Are you trying to write the protagonist as a heartless man?