A Strange Journey That Begins at Hogwarts

It is difficult to write about the current China in Harry Potter, because some situations in China have already appeared in the original work, which is basically similar to the structure of England and France in the story. For example, your book writes that in 1990, China had not yet integrated into the international wizarding world, but in the original book, the Chinese Minister of Magic even competed with Grindelwald for the chairmanship of the International United Nations.

Just by watching Journey to the West, you can see the cultivation methods and the halo effect of the protagonist! Look at the list of gods, what can you see? I'm curious about this. Is there any Shennong family? How is this novel?

Am I the only one who thinks the main character is weak? . The protagonist's sister feels much stronger than him. Teleport. Floating. The protagonist doesn't have a magic wand and can't use it. Are you kidding? It should be reasonable for the protagonist to know how to teach his sister. And the nature of magic is the soul. Then you can't even do this. Why. Anyway, it looks awkward.

It looked pretty good at first, and the plot was pretty good, until Penelo showed up. If you want to make her the heroine, that's fine, with less scenes, and having a relationship with a teenager? Sincerely advise you to quit

The author is really amazing😄. After living together for eleven years, I suddenly realized that my sister's name is Zhang Qiu when I saw an owl. What a shame.

If you haven't read the article yet, let me comment on the introduction first. You fucking don't know what your sister's name is?

The protagonist will be a heavenly master in the future, and his successors must not be of foreign origin, otherwise people in China will laugh to death 🙂, how does the author deal with this?

To be honest, it means bullying the Western practice system to no end. No, it should be said that every serious spiritual practice system is either linked to gods or devils. Either it is a bloodline sorcerer who transplanted his extraordinary creature. I know that all the Western cultivation systems summarized on the Internet are all edited by Chinese people. I am a Western cultivation system influenced by the Asian cultural system in a country (Japan) influenced by Chinese culture. Otherwise, how could something like magic be connected with something like Qi. Are they two completely different energies?

Please remember that people who are not from our tribe will have different hearts.

Can you practice the golden light spell by just thinking about it? Watch Journey to the West to learn magical skills? Apart from anything else, these two points are really poisonous! It makes everyone in "Under One Person" act like fools. A modern person can easily figure out the Golden Light Curse, but so many strangers around the world can't figure it out even if they have enough understanding of Qi?

This book is all kinds of crappy. But the restoration of practice skills from Journey to the West is really not nonsense. The story of Journey to the West hides the Taoist alchemy and immortality cultivation techniques, which is a very important school for interpreting Journey to the West.

I only want to watch the content of One Person, preferably the kind of plot where the protagonist realizes the cultivation. There is always a sense of separation between the plot of the protagonist in Hogwarts and the things he does. In the college story, I feel that the protagonist becomes childish, like a real child. Outside the plot but like an adult. Contrast discomfort

Author, I feel that the idea of ​​your book was cut in half in Chapter 28. You originally imagined a system that you created by yourself, but then you added one person into it and it turned into learning from the predecessors. Originally, you could have figured out a system similar to one person or something else, something special. But now there is no more

The parents of Zhang Qiu in the original work are both wizards. The parents of Zhang Qiu in the original work are both wizards. The parents of Zhang Qiu in the original work are both wizards.

The water before it is put on the shelves is not called water. 😒 It would be too much to add a song about the Sorting Hat singing after it is put on the shelves.

Too cluttered, the protagonist has too many inner monologues

When I was reading the first few chapters, I wanted to write some suggestions, but after reading them, I lost the motivation to write.

The ideas are good, but the writing is poor.

As the author, I would like to recommend my own book, "Hogwarts Global Project", which is a warm and joyful book with many self-created main lines and is not related to the main character. I hope everyone will like it. I shamelessly ask for it to be collected and read. It would be better if you have some pointers.

The writing is good, the story is very attractive, and the entry point of the two series of Under One Man and Harry Potter is very clever. Come on, Aoli! Just hold on, don't be a eunuch!

Ah, Qiu's brother, if Harry dares to give up in the future, he will break his legs and tie him to Qiu's bed. Then he went to steal Ron's wife, and then killed his entire family 🤓

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