I Have a Roll of Parchment

This is just my little impression. After all, it is only 3 chapters. The details will depend on the follow-up. So you won't give the protagonist the 5,000 yuan? You gave all the 20,000 to one person without authorization, and then the parchment judged that you were done (of course, it may be that Hu was absolutely unnecessary, but Hu didn't say it or for other reasons?), And you planned to end it like this? As the person in charge of a courier company, the male protagonist is not calm when talking to a rural woman. Don't you have any words? Also, can the author be more detailed? When delivering express delivery, the plot is ridiculously fast. Can you have some professionalism? Isn't this your job? Three chapters and one wish, don't you think it's too fast? Well, the above is my first impression, maybe I said something wrong. However, the setting is novel, and it is easier to write some tender and healing plots in the Yin and Yang Realm, as long as they are not expanded too much (for example, the male protagonist has superpowers in the later stage, and then the main plot goes towards the superpowers). After all, this is too much, so it is better to be ordinary. At most, the male protagonist later learns some secrets of the world, and then establishes a foothold in this world. Don't write about the protagonist being invincible in the later stage, and then others kill him, and the male protagonist fights back. This kind of plot is okay once, but it is really poisonous if it is too much. I personally feel that this type is still suitable for the protagonist who is a bystander, and mainly writes stories about people separated by yin and yang. Your first express delivery describes too little in this aspect (of course, it may be written later). Write more stories about the protagonist learning about various people separated by yin and yang, the living and the dead, through express delivery. Of course, if the writing style is sufficient, you can also try to leave blank space (personally, the writing style is still very good), but the blank space must be controlled. The best, I am very optimistic about this novel, please come on, author! (I hope I won't keep it and forget about it) (Actually, the first paragraph was originally put at the end, but after thinking about it, I put it at the front) (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)

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The subject matter is very novel. I haven't seen anything similar so far. Come on and update it soon. I'm really looking forward to the next plot. If there are any other signings, I want to give you a big reward.

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The subject matter is novel, the writing is smooth, and the plot is interesting.

I have seen similar themes. They are presented on a virtual electronic screen and cannot be seen by others. Can you just change the parchment so that only you can see it? I put it in my pocket for fear of being stolen, and I was scared to death when faced with strange things. The whole person looked nervous and very unhappy.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is messy. Not a courier store owner? Then he said he would fire the boss? Go back and resign? Also, the parchment roll is a failure. It makes you nervous to put it in your pocket. There are too many scenes in the express delivery store and it's too confusing. Look big. The protagonist's personality also has problems. He is startled, sneaky and neurotic, a bit like a psychopath.

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No. 151 On the new book signing list. My guess last time was right. I will fight for three short stories. No matter how well you set it up, the beginning will be like shit and it won't retain people. I had no desire to click in and continue reading. I just refreshed the book list and saw that I came in and took a look at the homepage.