
I'm Laying the Foundation in the Orc World
我在兽人世界打地基
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 549k Words
- Genre
- Ancient Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Primeval Wilderness
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After reading it, the work is quite good, but there are some areas where it can be improved. As a reader, I would like to make some comments. First, anything you do, such as building a house or glass, seems to be described as smooth, so smooth! Everything you do can be accomplished at your fingertips, at no cost, and it even feels a bit strange. Secondly, although there are conflicts in the work that lead to plot development, such as relocation, they are almost all passive conflicts, that is, external conflicts, such as poor environment, relocation of animal herds, etc., And lack the main plot driven by internal conflicts. Such stories are not "exciting" enough. Third, there is a lot of interaction between the male and female protagonists, but when will there be substantial development? I can't wait to see them cuddle and have babies! The description of emotions, such as psychological description, has yet to be... Well, has yet to be described. Finally, I lamented that the orcs are really so diligent. Most people don't have two monks carrying water to drink. Three monks have no water to drink. Where there are people, there are people who are lazy and do not work (human beings are so shameful!)
I've finished watching it. The heroine is so amazing.