I Have a Martial Arts Corrector

If the book has five stars, this book can only be rated three and a half stars. I don't deny this by taking a concubine in exchange for martial arts. The description of the main wife later was too deliberate. She happened to be chased and she met her, and she had to discuss marrying a concubine. I didn't think it was necessary to marry her. Is it necessary for the protagonist's talent? To be honest, most people really can't handle this kind of emotional description.

After reading Chapter 53, I personally feel that there is no problem. It can be seen that the overall story is a bit dull. However, after Chapter 53, it begins to enter the beginning of the resurgence of gods and demons and chaos in the world. It may have a climax. Of course, I don't know if it will be good or not, but it should not be poisonous. The author feels that it is stable after all.

It would be much better if we didn't write the heroine. Watching the heroine now is like watching an urban drama, it's just weird.

The system I created does not have any specific explanation, and it feels very watery.

Break through when it's time to break through, and don't stress about levels later. There are too many cultivation systems and it's very confusing. It's best to just stick to the three of essence, energy, and spirit.

When will it be updated? I don't know how to be a eunuch anymore, do I?

I won't mention the typos, the news for Chapter 20 is out. Were there news broadcasts in ancient times?

It's good, but there's nothing exciting about it. Usually, one of the great things about this kind of article is that it helps the protagonist's father and master improve their martial arts, so that they can advance to the next level for the first time after being unable to break through for many years, and they don't share any of the money with the family.

Nowadays, everything is stable. It takes the protagonist three days to sense Qi. One day is really too fast.

This main wife is of no help to the protagonist at all, so what's the use of writing it? It's just a drag

Food and grass, tasteless food, massacre of families, slave background, recklessness.

It looks ok, but it hasn't been updated for two days. . . .

The writing is quite good, two a day would be better

After reading the first few chapters, I felt a little ink-stained.

It's not too poisonous, the outline is like a novel. . .

Chapter 8 has too many flaws, I don't know how to complain about it

Recommendation votes are given. The author will update as soon as possible.