The Auspicious Son of Super Seminary

Hasn't the content changed? It's changed. I'll watch it again.

I don't know what's going on. Maybe it's because I lack maternal love. When I saw the things the author wrote about Kesha, I could easily put myself into them and give birth to a sense of happiness...

Come on author, I will always support you.

Author, don't you plan to sign the contract?

3 Days, more than 100 chapters? ? ? What's the reason? Did you just go to the starting point, or...?

You might as well just revise and improve it and open a small account when the new book is released. Mix in the contract and get started. You have nothing like this, and you can't even sign a contract. .

If nothing else, I'll just talk about this. Talking about this kind of writing, it's ten years old. The second thing is that the writing is incoherent. Each dialogue plot must be added with the name of the protagonist. A novice among novices.

It's rubbish. I'm really impressed by the early settings.

Why is it always free? Is it generating electricity from love?

What era was this written in? ? ? Talk to the system. A kind of funny salty fish temperament. When did charlatanism become fashionable? All four of us must like that kind of mature and steady. Who would like that kind of laughing and joking?

I have read more than 100 chapters of this novel, and the overall relationship seems very comfortable. There is no strong love between life and death in other novels, but there are bits and pieces of life details that make people feel full of emotion. It is good not to have a relationship that is instantaneous. The author's writing style needs to be improved. I won't watch it since the heroine seems to be added later, but it shouldn't affect the relationship between the main character Kazuhiko. (Mainly because I don't really want to watch multiple female protagonists. Before Chapter 120, just treat it as a single female protagonist)

Look no further! What a piece of shit, the dialogue is clueless! Looks like a SB

I'm a little speechless. After you finish writing, can't you read what you wrote? Some necessary dialogues do not have double quotation marks, and there are double quotation marks where they should not be. Sometimes the plot jumps to the next section!

After reading it completely, it is obvious that the author has made little progress. There are indeed some shortcomings in the early stage, but there is indeed real progress in the middle and later stages. The description of emotional details is also well controlled. The development of the emotional line between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is like a stream, flowing into my heart little by little. It allows readers to feel the sweet love between the male protagonist and different female protagonists, and at the same time, it can clearly highlight the characteristics of each female character. It is really rare to see it clearly on the page. The character descriptions still need work, but the performance is still good. The descriptions of Kesha, Yan, Zhixin, Leng, and Liangbing are quite good, and the focus of each character can be better expressed, which made me feel the vividness of each character. They are spiritual beings. It is dynamic, which is very rare in the era of brainless bulldozers. Although the ending cannot be said to be rushed, it also makes the images of the characters Hexi and Ainecid who appear one after another not very prominent. The emotional line is also hesitant to express, blurred, and it is very uncomfortable to see but not touch. But I still want to encourage the author, come on. Although there are not many words, it is a rare masterpiece in today's fan harem novels. It is very rare to be able to write something like this. Unfortunately, I cannot subscribe and can only contribute a few recommendation votes. Speaking of the author, do you have any news about your next book? 👍👍

The generation of super soldiers in your book has such a short lifespan? Only a few hundred years? The lifespan of a generation of super soldiers is 1,000 years!