The Beast Master Said That He Vowed to Compete with the Gods.

The protagonist's character is really innocent and innocent. It doesn't feel like it has been 5 years since graduation, but more like there are still 5 years left to graduate... The awakening and evolution method is so precious. Maybe it is because the protagonist gets it too easily, so he can't bear to give it away casually and sell favors at low prices. This kind of world view puts beast control above all else. Beast control civilization cannot be kind and fair, because resources cannot be divided, and knowledge can be monopolized. Leaking money everywhere is simply reckless. Just because he is a new student and produces so much information, fools will know that there is something wrong with him. If those strong people don't come to torture him, his life will be in vain. Maybe the setting is a world of order, and the idealized male protagonist makes me feel like a fool...

After reading it, the subject matter is good, but the writing is hard to read. There are many points to read. First of all, the words of the second grade are repeated many times. Secondly, they always write some bland remarks about what to do. Then, to help the senior sister, everyone said that awakening is expensive, so you will charge 200,000. . . There is also a tie between the girl and the male protagonist. Why? The male protagonist increased his skill proficiency and awakened again. Although he failed, why is it still a tie? It was obviously the first battle and he was very passionate.

Chapter 7 died. 1. To subdue pet beasts, refer to Pokémon. It's not that this setting is bad, it's just that it's not suitable for this world. Humans can only be ordinary people forever. 2. In Chapter 7, the protagonist plans to give his senior sister the talent to awaken the pet beast. He is not afraid that his ability will be leaked. The reason is that the protagonist wants to sign a confidentiality agreement with the senior sister afterwards. Everyone knows how awesome this ability to awaken the pet beast is in this world. Why can a weak agreement limit a person's coveting of this ability? So at this time, it is up to the author to give wisdom to the characters in the article. 3. The world has been peaceful for thousands of years. What is the role of the beast master? Want to fight? Who is the target of the battle? And if there is a fight, how can a beast master, an ordinary person without extraordinary power, protect himself? The world is very real. During the battle, the enemy will know to attack the beast master, and it is too easy to kill a beast master. Just attack by surprise and that's it. He is just an ordinary person anyway. So ordinary people = beast masters. Points 1 and 3 are similar to Pokémon novels. I personally don't like this. This is a novel, not a hot-blooded anime, and it doesn't focus on human battles. Why not just write a Pokémon novel? At least the human world view is fixed, so 1 and 3 are no longer a problem. The most important thing is that point 2 is a bit outrageous. The above is the summary of Chapter 7 so far. I can only say that it is not suitable for me, yo~

The protagonist's IQ is a bit low. If you tell people how to awaken your talent casually, why should you choose to trust people so easily? In this kind of world, if the protagonist behaves like this, it will be a complete dead end.

What is the most powerful thing in this world? It's a thief If he steals your beast master bracelet, you will be GG.

It's really cool to give people random methods of evolution. It doesn't matter to you, the author, but in the eyes of readers, it's a mentally retarded protagonist and a fool's behavior. If it's an exchange of equal value, forget it. Giving it away for free is really disgusting. In many novels, giving it to a sister will cause discomfort to some readers. Not to mention this kind of people who have only been together for two days. Basically, whenever there is a fat man, a good brother, a best friend, or a sister in a beast-control novel, it is easy to write it as a poisonous point. The author and the reader have different perspectives on reading the book, so the results will be different. If you want to write better grades, read more books first.

The book has been idle for too long, and I died of poison only after Chapter 7

Laughing, your setting is a bit outrageous. Apart from having the talent to control beasts, a beast master is equal to an ordinary person. Killing an ordinary person is not too simple. For example, 1. Seeing a beast master unhappy and passing by him with a knife GG 2. Hitting a stone with a pet in a fight GG, 3. Using a bow and arrow to sneak attack GG. I suggest you strengthen the beast master, otherwise what use will you have when you fight more and more fiercely in the later stage? If you touch it casually, you will die 🤔

Authors who are brave enough to label "Three Views Right" are warriors

It is a miracle that the protagonist can become the protagonist, and it is a miracle that the protagonist can survive. In short, this book is full of miracles

The tiger that controls the mountains, the wolf that is good at fighting, the eagle with foresight, but I am the stick that stirs shit, the bucket that holds rice,

Hee Hee Hee

Not only is it second-rate, but all the plots are unreasonable from beginning to end. . Can't see it at all

Has the author never read the book? No advance notice for freshman lectures?

Less secondary, less directing the battle, animals have stronger fighting instincts than humans. The point is, it's really embarrassing and I can't stand it anymore. I can feel that the author wants to write about feelings, but the age of the people who read the novel is not suitable for Pokemon-style writing. Passion, justice, and explosion are all social people.

The man who dares to play tricks

The most annoying thing is to control the beast, directly targeting people, and taking care of your mess with one knife. Even if your beast can directly lift the continent, it is of no use. No matter how powerful it is, it is only a matter of one knife.

Xiaohong

After reading the comments, to put it simply, it is a novice author who did not consider all aspects when writing, so there is no need to be too harsh.

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Fairy Rose

Emmm, I'm afraid I didn't start writing it after thinking of some plots. It was purely "for this plate of vinegar-wrapped dumplings". It seems okay, come on.

Sea Soul Star

I think the reading resistance is okay: after reading Chapter 10, I felt that the setting of method awakening talents is not good; in Chapter 15, I saw the hidden evolution types and materials given and said them directly without even checking the data; millions of talent activation methods were prepared to be sold for 200,000, and the female reverse bargained to 1 million. The story disgusted me to death. The third time I talked to a woman after meeting, it may not have been more than 20 sentences, but I just gave it away without thinking, great reading point 🙄