Traveling Through the Holy City

There are 58 chapters in total, and more than 30 chapters are all settings. The plots of other novels are interspersed with settings, but this is a setting interspersed with the plot.

Good guy, I wrote a manual for The Adventures of Jackie Chan

I feel that the Nine Ghost Corps are relatively weak. It seems that they all combined accounted for Japan? The eight demons combined occupied the earth and the moon.

The pictures of the Hunting Pincers found on the Internet had watermarks. I couldn't remove them so I didn't make them. As for the Nine Generals, I didn't have their personal pictures so I didn't make them. Readers can send them if they have them. I will make them then

Pictures of the last eight evil wizards

It's not that cool, it's all about setting. You can set it up in Dagongli, or you can write it in the preface. If you don't draw a big picture, I can't help but read it. For example, about the eight demons, just writing about an invincible pie in the future can still motivate you to read it. But in the end, you just write the setting and describe how strong he is... Anyway, I'm a little irritated after reading too much I'm going to complain.

It doesn't mean that if you write a lot of settings in the free chapter, people won't be offended. You should write these things in the work related to it, not in the main text. In the text, you only need to write what it is and what it is used for. Not everyone will want to know the detailed settings. And the question-and-answer setting you used in the text is supplementary. I don't know what other people think, but I think the protagonist asks too many questions, which makes me feel that he is not thinking by himself at all, or that he is lonely thinking about it. In this case, it would be better to let the system pour the beans directly and tell them all.

Yu-Gi-Oh is a failure, because Yu-Gi-Oh is incompatible with others. You can write a kingly and passionate type, such as Naruto, One Piece, and Bleach, but if you choose Yu-Gi-Oh, it will be awkward. . . The style gap is too big. You can write a Yu-Gi-Oh DT card story or a Star Relic card story, but the playing style is too bad. You can use Yu-Gi-Oh as a plug-in and summon monsters like Pokémon to fight, but it will be very inconsistent if you go to Yu-Gi-Oh with a mysterious test cultivation level.

The complete version of the Holy Lord has the personality of Bagua Li. The power in his body is not formed in the form of 12 spells, but completely belongs to him. At the same time, he has thousands of years of magic accumulation and magic knowledge, and the magic energy has not been divided due to the birth of the demon dragon.

To be honest, the author's writing is very messy. How can I put it? There are so many punctuation marks that are written randomly. It's really confusing. Moreover, The Adventures of Jackie Chan is very messy to begin with, which makes it even harder to understand. There is no other book that is so clear at a glance. Although I have read it very slowly, there are still many things that I can't understand.

Various explanations were prepared crazily in the front, and in the next 50 chapters or so, I just beat him up a few times and then ran away... I felt pretty stupid at the time. The clone magic that Xiaoyu accidentally used was able to defeat Bogon just by relying on the number of people... When I arrived at Zhujue, it was really Zhujue. I thought that the Thousand Shadow Warriors couldn't be a child. But it turned out that he really didn't do anything. He ran away so coldly that I ran away too. There is also a problem that normal people know about the Tiger Talisman. He just explained it in about 5 chapters, isn't it even more outrageous? Everyone wants to say that I understand, I understand, don't explain, teacher, I know, don't explain. I want to write a novel, called Water God Arrival. I really read novels to feel happy, just like watching beautiful women, and the writing is good. Next time, I will write other explanations, such as Honkai Genshin Impact. No one said that you can read it even if everyone understands it... After all, the "plot" is skipped 🙂

I am not here to read the novel to listen to you talk about the settings. It is all your settings and I have not read the content of the novel.

The world of Jackie Chan's Adventures came to an abrupt end. If you didn't write about the climax, wouldn't this be a eunuch in a different sense? I'm really worried about the possibility of you failing in the future.

The readers are here to read the novel, not to read "The Adventures of Jackie Chan·Setting Collection". The whole text is basically the setting, so what do readers want to read? Set up? Then readers might as well read the original work! Yes, indeed, the protagonist is an ordinary person, and his reaction also proves that he is an ordinary person, but are the readers here to see ordinary people? ! Of course, if you are writing for fun and don't need grades at all, then that's fine. "Ning" can write whatever he wants, even if he copies the original work over, it will be fine. After all, it is "Ning"'s freedom.

Just follow the introduction, because the world is a balance of yin and yang. So all the immortal gods will be resurrected, the Saints will awaken, Jackie Chan will be able to play big tricks, or it will be something forced on the world...

I couldn't get into it after reading half of it 😂 A few separate chapters might as well be set up to explain a large section of the setting. It's a bit uncomfortable to mix it into the novel. When I write it, it's more like a commentary.

Good guy, you can say that 9 out of 10 sentences are settings. Is this an explanatory text?

I didn't understand the plot of the last few chapters. Did the protagonist turn into an earth tiger? Or did the protagonist give the Earth Shadow Stone to Kun Zhong, or did the protagonist directly become Kun Zhong?

The stronger the demons that are created by black energy are, the stronger the gods that are created by righteous energy are. What's going on?

I am constantly writing about my fantasies...

I have tap water. To be honest, I haven't read Yu-Gi-Oh very much, so I don't have much interest in Yu-Gi-Oh. I read it sometime, so I'm still reading it. Maybe it's because I prefer to watch passionate and straightforward films. To put it bluntly, I'm a novice. But I haven't really watched Yu-Gi-Oh!, I've only mentioned it among my neighbors and friends. Sorry🙂

There are forty chapters of murals in the first fifty chapters

It's too wordy, the first ten chapters are all about setting.

I just read the first few chapters. It was good at first, but the various settings and discussion thoughts affected the viewing experience too much. Occasionally, there is no problem in adding a little bit of plot after a plot, but it is not enough to use a large chapter to explain the protagonist's thinking process in detail. It is a bit putting the cart before the horse.

The first 20 or 30 pictures don't even have any interesting points. What do you want me to think? Why do so many authors always use this invincible name to write slow-burning books? Even if they add the word "slow-burning" in the introduction, it will be fine. (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

Not only that, Yu-Gi-Oh is not a good match, but there is also a time traveler. The protagonist's system didn't even remind him that although the protagonist knew there was this person, he was so wasteful? Everyone on the other side knows that the protagonist is coming, okay? ←_←

They are both magic demons, but Curse Blue is much more powerful than west Mu.

What does Yu-Gi-Oh! Raise your hands if you haven't seen it! I didn't get a sense of immersion or experience after watching it.

So, the twelve zodiac animals of the Dragon Talisman are the Holy Lords

Come on, author, I don't want to read the setting, so I just rush in. It's not like I haven't watched anime before.