Tomb Robbery: Start by Signing in to Kunpeng's Bloodline

The writing is okay, please give it a try, author, update it quickly, and just don't go into the palace. It would be great if the author could add some rewards to the protagonist, such as (the abilities of General Jiuyou, the Taibao of Guanshan, etc.) Have you ever thought about what pets to reward? How about rewarding a puppy that looks like a dog (it will become a rhinoceros after it evolves) 😁

They were all poisoned by the TV series. In the novel, Chen Yulou is the leader of Changshengshan, with more than 100,000 brothers under his command. He supports the warlords and is called the grass-head emperor! If you are not domineering and powerful, how can you intimidate your subordinates and warlords? Don't tell me that you are a bloodless person! Although it is not a book, your nine-sect bundle is not as strong as him! Even humbled!

Is Chen Yulou so humble? Chen Yulou is also arrogant. No matter how powerful you are, you are not so humble.😅😅😅

There are signs of falling in love in Chapter 8. Why can't we just take risks and let nature take its course like a ghost blowing out a lantern?

It's a speechless plot, why should we write an emotional line if the flower spirit refuses to be accepted? Just to make the pig's feet look good and then you don't understand emotions and just want to practice Taoism?

The writing is so disgusting that I held it back 😐

It's not interesting to read too many Tomb Raider fanfics. It's just a very awesome protagonist who has read a copy of the original work. The key is that such an awesome protagonist has been hyped up like a tiger, but nothing has changed in the end. The main plot is exactly the same as the original work. It feels like reliving the original work.

The whole book has a faint flavor, like a fantasy-loving boy looking up at the sky at 45 degrees and imagining that he is invincible in the world, exuding an unrivaled elegance that makes beauties blush and fall instantly with heartbeats at just one glance.

Hu Bayi and Partridge Whistle were really 6 in one era and died of poison.

Author, if you can't control your writing style, don't force yourself to write. What a beautiful flower spirit you wrote to look like a female anchor. . . What a drama! ! ! I have read so many fan fictions, and even if their writing skills are worse than yours, they are not as out of touch as yours, and their characters have changed beyond recognition. 😂😂 Can you get a little closer to the way the characters speak in the original novels, so that readers can feel more involved? ? ?

The author's writing style is very immature, the details of the article are too rough, and someone next to me suddenly conjured a knife out of nowhere. And if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. There are many typos and many sentences that don't make sense.

You are also drunk. What era is Hu Bayi from, and what era is Chen Yulou from? Can you tell the difference? What a mess

You must be single, thinking about a girl every day and liking you. 🤤🤤🤤🤤

The author's writing is actually quite good. The only flaw so far is that he is in love! An epiphany is an epiphany, and there is no need to find a target. Articles of this type really do not need such a thing as a target. Some have Aning as the heroine. Aning can at least help the protagonist rob the tomb and has the demeanor of a strong woman. What does Yi Xinyue have? Apart from that store, she also has a bit of a princess disease, and the protagonist is not short of money, so what is the use of her? What's more, the protagonist wants to live forever, right? At least it's longevity, right? Author, do you want to freeze Yin Xinyue? Or borrow the protagonist's blood to kill her? Now Tomb Raiders Notes has begun. The protagonist is still young, but the protagonist's wife is old. Would you like to change it for you? (So ​​I don't feel good, little brother? [Whisper bb])

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Shirley Yang. The author just ate it for decades.

Hua Ling's little brother's calls made me so embarrassed that I almost got cancer. I can't stand it anymore. It's too poisonous.

According to what you write, it won't be popular for a few years.

One by one, they don't want to be human anymore. All kinds of bloodlines are registered as human beings. Goodbye.

If you can't write about women well, don't write about them. If a woman writes about you well, it will be so disgusting that you will die. A man's waste is to be a eunuch

Looking at the fanfic, it's the first time I've seen such a messy writing. Shirley Yang, when can a person appear at this time? According to the original work, this time is not even in the mother's womb. The main plot is too confusing! Besides, the protagonist accepts one after another? Too poisonous

Bloodlines such as Qinglong, Suzaku, Phoenix, and Kui Niu have all been written about. What else has no bloodline? 🤔🤔🤔🤔

I wonder if Xue Li is the granddaughter of Partridge Shao? Also, the timeline is so messed up. Xue Li and his grandfather Partridge Shao are on the same timeline, and Hu Bayi is on the same timeline as the people from Lao Jiumenmen. How funny is that? Haha, speechless! Highly toxic.

Putting aside everything else, the fact that the protagonist stops talking when he meets a woman would have to drop two stars on a five-star rating scale.

To put it bluntly, the protagonist of this book is a bit too pretentious, and the emotional scenes are too embarrassing. Personally, I feel that it is better for tomb robber fandom to focus on mysterious tomb robberies. Goodbye everyone, I personally don't like the later plots and I will cancel them first. I still hope that the author's performance will get better and better. After all, writing is still not easy!

The plot is messy, Yong He is forced to be together, and the protagonist is a scumbag Hua Ling. After waiting for the protagonist for two years with no results, she and Yin Xinyue discussed getting married once they met.

He has no sense of time and rambles here and there. Time comes and goes for decades. He forcefully pulls it together and writes things from different eras.

I feel like the protagonist is too childish. What is Kunpeng bloodline? Qilin is an auspicious beast. It is naturally able to restrain Yin ghosts and insects. The four major mythical beasts are on the same level as Qilin. However, Kunpeng's bloodline seems to have been a speed bonus since ancient times, as well as a little attack bonus. But Kunpeng should not be able to restrain Yingui, right? What about Kunpeng's bloodline? ? I'm drunk too

I'm rambling here and there, ugh~ it feels like a lot of patches

After the protagonist cultivates, he is no longer a human being and does not care about anything. If he cultivates the ruthless way, is there any point in still living?

The Good Guys ended directly in the memoirs and entered the factory.