I Really Didn't Choose Randomly.

First of all, let me say that this book is really creative. The Genting system has been around for a long time, but it is the first to combine it with the coach. It is also very interesting to write. It is indeed possible for ig to choose some weird combinations, so this book has great potential. But I don't know if this book is a new author or something. There are many details that need to be improved. If these details are not perfect, a good idea will be wasted. Here are the areas where I think the details need to be improved: 1. If the character plot is real, just tell a simple detail, how much is the monthly salary of the protagonist, and whether he will want to find a partner when he gets rich in the future, such as a certain anchor who is a commentator (it is not natural to find a partner and then look for it from the circle around you). He has a very good relationship with wsc, so wsc would often ask him to drink and go to nightclubs. These are all natural details. 2. The protagonist should be smart. Readers don't like stupid protagonists. This stupid refers to being brainless. It is against the norm and boring for a person to gain happiness through brainless processes and cheats. In what ways does it show that he uses his brain? First, the protagonist of Goldfinger will test it crazily, just like a child taking a toy. These processes need to be written down. This is the process of the protagonist using his brain. For example, this Genting system is triggered during a game, but what counts as a game? Should I rank these 5 players at 5? If not, can I let them play in-house training matches? If not, can I let them participate in external training matches? Then there is the bond of the hero. Genting is a game that will be constantly updated. The skin and bond requirements of a chess piece before and after the update may be different. How does the system identify this situation? For example, the fire man was an elementalist before the update, and he was a zombie after the update. The skin is also different. So if the player chooses the fire man, which bond does he wear? Is it all or one of them, or does it trigger different bonds depending on the skin selected by the player. The details of these explorations are natural and interesting. And in terms of being a person, when Su Xiaoluo said it was a blind pick, the protagonist should directly say that the blind pick was not good enough, otherwise how could ig win? I see there are many voices of support on the Internet, and other team coaches are also starting to study my BP. As long as ig continues to win, public opinion will naturally turn on our side. The audience also likes to see these novel lineups, which will make us more ig fans. The protagonist should refute the point of blind selection. It should be explained that these BPs have made a lot of preparations to select the ones that can make the team win. The protagonist's answer is not on point. After all, what Su Xiaoluo said about public opinion and winning the game are not conflicting. E-sports competitions must be based on results. Good results and public opinion will naturally be good. The protagonist wants to give reasons to give Su Xiaoluo the confidence to let him support him, because the protagonist's BP is really incomprehensible. 3. The game and competition process must be real. This not only refers to the inside of the game, but also outside the game. For example, the VN top laner has been around for several seasons in both Korean and Chinese servers. How could Brother Shy not know that? The question that shy brother has should be: can this be used to play games? Not whether this can be used. Also, the commentator is not a fool. How could he not have seen Lucian's top laner? The Korean version has been ahead of others and has led to the emergence of many national service competition servers. Korean players have already practiced it. It's just a matter of arriving at the arena early under the guidance of the protagonist. The players and commentators the author writes about seem silly if they don't know enough about them. It may be that the author himself is not segmented enough and has not read enough game commentary. The commentators can also check the players' instructions for heroes, and they will also do various homework in private. Therefore, most of the people selected by the players are already prepared even if they are fresh commentators. The author has written problems with these details. I feel that if the author can perfect these details, he may lead to the genre of system coaching flow.

So beautiful

Did the author make a mistake? What is attractive about this book is the novel program effect of combining the Genting bond with the competition. It is essentially a whole thing. Sapphire's robot, um, Minato Five Forest and Scarlet, are all repeated now. Your bond itself is a surreal thing. As a result, you start to pursue reality here. Really, what is the point of saying that the S-match cannot be reorganized? The opening game is too important to be reorganized. There are many books focusing on technology and overall deduction. You are selling half of the mutton and then start selling dog meat. How can you compete with others? What is the difference between you and a Japanese harem manga whose protagonist has been ambiguous for 200 episodes but is still a virgin?

After reading your last book, I would like to give you a suggestion. The protagonist is a coach. In order to highlight the protagonist's awesomeness and to have fun, the role of the protagonist in the outcome of the game should be maximized. That is, you can go to any weak team and rely on the protagonist's ability to compete for the championship. Since it is a coaching article, the competition can be appropriate. To simplify, just focus on describing the aspects involved in the system, and then add some slap-in-the-face plots, such as being rejected for a salary increase after winning the championship, the management thinking that the coach is not as important as the players, the strength of the original team plummeting after the defection, internal conflicts continue, but the weak team newly coached by the protagonist has won consecutive victories and won the championship.

S9FPX has never beaten SKT. Why does the author think that FPX cannot beat SKT? Are you really going to expel FPX from the championship? It really goes with that sentence, spend money to find disgust. When I read this novel, was it because I wanted to take advantage of SKT? I read this novel to watch the LPL finals civil war. If you want to write about playing SKT in the finals, you write about s5 and s6. Why did SKT in s9 enter the finals? Not to mention comparing with FPX and G2, whether SKT in s9 can beat IG is a question.

Although it is a cool novel, there are a lot of disgusting parts. Abandoned. 1. Although Baolan is a loser, there is no need to be so aggressive. To put it harshly, Baolan is almost the strongest support in the history of IG. 2. FPX stopped at the top four. Forget it if you lose to IG, isn't it disgusting to lose to SKT? If you really want to play SKT, you don't need to arrange it like this. That's not as good as grf in the top eight, FPX in the top four, and playing SKT in the finals. 3. The tendency of explanation is too obvious. Just writing a cool article, if you really need to choose a stepping stone, you should find a better one.

I was dumbfounded by the first BP when ig played v5. Kindred beat the prince with 100% chance. How could it be possible to pick the prince from behind? The top, middle and jungle picks are on the way to a comeback. Writing lol e-sports articles does not require the author to be very high-level, but at least he has a basic understanding. You can choose the protagonist casually, but don't treat other professional teams as fools.

It's very uncomfortable, and it's written a bit like a cloud player, maybe even worse than a cloud player. Not to mention the operation. What impressed me the most was the following

Not to mention anything else, the total number of fans is over 500,000. Do you still have 10,000 subscribers now? It turned out that when I looked at the equipment, it felt much better to have equipment when I had less equipment. Now that I have a lot of equipment, I don't feel the effect of the equipment at all. They were originally a championship team, and then they got so many bonuses, but they were still at a disadvantage. To be honest, it's not surprising that there are so many bonuses for sewer heroes to fight T0 heroes. Just like those with unique skills, their heroes are strong, but they can c. With so many bonuses, how can you enhance the level of people with top-level skills? Doesn't the author really have no idea? To put it bluntly, just look at the front and subscribe for unlimited water.

Your coach hides it for his opponents, for the audience, and even for other coaches. I can understand it. You hide your lineup for your players? Tibetan? ?

Now that I know that equipment is important, I don't feel how powerful it is later. Since winning the championship, I have received various gifts from disgusting people, such as Xiao Leyan. What's the use of that equipment? Caught in various ways. I don't even feel how powerful the equipment behind it is. The team is becoming more and more regular. Do you think you compare to others without relying on equipment and bonding cheats? It makes no difference whether the protagonist has a plug-in or not. If I don't write about how powerful the cheats areヾ(Ő∀Ő๑)ﾉIt's so annoying, I feel like I skipped reading this book. Because what you wrote is not much better than others, but if you can win with any lineup, I feel great watching it, reverse version. What now? Since Xiao Leyan, I have been disgusted by all kinds of things, so I want to complain about it. At least I am a legitimate reader! That's it.

Let me tell you, there are so many lol articles now. I first read you because your ideas are very new, the plug-ins are very exciting, and I am very happy to read them (such as Baolan's robot). But I don't know when you started writing more and more towards the player's ability. And the way you write about the transformation of players is also very different. It still feels like invincibility, just like most lol articles. I hope the author can highlight the cheats more and stop making it seem like winning the game is all about player ability. I am neither a fan of the team nor the players. When I read this book, I mainly enjoyed reading the memes.

The idea of ​​this book is really good, but it suffers from too much content. Everyone knows that if ig is in normal condition, he is super strong and can win the championship without a golden finger. If you write too much on ig, you can only rely on suppressing the golden finger effect to achieve the continuity and transition of the article. Otherwise, the article will be flat and straightforward, which will make people abandon it more. However, suppressing the golden finger will naturally lead to the collapse of the golden finger. The data listed in the end cannot achieve the statistical effect at all and has no practical significance. The normal writing method should be to only win the championship once in ig, quickly develop the protagonist, and be detailed and appropriate, and write less words. Then change the weak team to reflect the strength of Goldfinger while developing, without affecting the ups and downs of the plot.

Collapsed. It was originally just a flow of ideas, and I went to write tactics It turned into four different things

Basically, the system function is invisible. Although every BP will also introduce what bonds are triggered, it has no impact on the game. The bonus is so high that it is still a waste. No matter what bonds are changed, it will be written as the shy in every game.

I found that many people have misunderstandings about Sapphire. S9 S9 still has highlights, but I don't know why it gets worse as it fights. S8 and S7 Sapphire are not weak either. I'm really convinced. Many people also say that the champion of S7 and S8 is lying down. Roland in S7 and S8 is stronger than you think, and the hero pool is deep. He even used Kennen as a support. Nami's Q never failed to hit, and she showed off her strength. She is particularly reckless. S8 changed from a reckless man to a support with a shield, and I rarely saw him playing offensive support. After that, he still had highlights when he won the championship, but everyone knows later. If you don't believe it, I have a video from station B. If you are interested, you can check it out: BV12A411e7GX It should be this one. The kind of person who is really black for the sake of black is really disgusting. Where is Baolan from the deputy dean period? Where is S8's Sapphire? For example, in the famous scene in TS where the gods descended from the earth, he took control first. When the wind went against him, he was also the one who started the group. I really don't understand that group of people.

No, after reading the last few chapters, is there any misunderstanding that the author is from s9 Europe? Were the four World Championship spots in S10 obtained through bad practices? In s9, European g2 was the favorite to win the championship. I think the author always takes advantage of Europe and the United States. It seems that the only opponent in the world championship is SKT. Let's at least say this in s11 😅

The cock is free... It turns out that he has been at IG for 7 years

Where should broiler chickens go? The transfer period officially ends in less than a week. None of IG's five championships are left. In the past, I could blame Su, but now I don't even have Su anymore.

Is anyone else watching? I was quite comfortable watching it in the early stage until I reached about 300 chapters, but I was finally disgusted. What equipment and buffs really made me feel lonely? After all, I am also a top professional player. The more I read, the more awkward and uncomfortable I feel.

In the past, the equipment bonding effect was reflected in the game operations. Transformers, ninjas, and robots were all interesting. Now that they are full of equipment, it seems like they don't exist. And this is an e-sports article, not an infinite upgrade stream. Once you reach a higher level, you can completely crush your previous opponents. E-sports is always unknown, and a miracle will always happen when a weak team defeats a strong team and makes a desperate comeback. IG also won an s crown. Author, are you thinking the same as Miller's evaluation of s8's rng? No matter how strong 3c is, it is not the absolute number one. Even if the bonds are full, they will be a challenger from the beginning in every game, not a ruler. After stepping on Xiao Leyan, stepping on Sapphire Blue, and playing Ah Shui again, the team members have not grown, and the tactics have not changed. I can understand that the author wants the plot to be more ups and downs, but this routine has been used so many times.

The subject matter of this book is quite novel, but it can only be read as a no-brainer, and even sometimes it is a bit uncomfortable to read without a brain. The first is that the author always makes typos, and the other is that the word "water" is always used. Although I cannot guarantee it, I think the words introducing bonds account for at least more than 10% of the whole text. Every time I finish the bp, there will always be a paragraph. In addition, I feel that the book written by Baolan and Leyan is really disgusting. I am not sure whether these two people are really so exaggerated in reality. If so, why can't they be replaced by another person? Leyan may be more suitable for the current version, but Baolan is a magic thing. Is it true that Baolan is indispensable?

I'll go, I'll save it, I won't lose it. Two friends said that the equipment in the later part of this book will not have any effect. I haven't read the back part yet. If it is true, then the book will collapse, so it's still unclear. . . . This is just like the expansion of combat power in fantasy novels. The protagonist upgrades very fast, but it is useless. The enemy is also fast. The enemy is brainless and strong and suppresses the protagonist. This is bad.

I voted for 4 monthly votes, please improve 🙂

There are so few updates. I think it took me several months to update, but I haven't even updated a hundred chapters yet...

The idea is good, but the effect of the creativity is not written out in detail. It was written out in the early stage, but later it was just a bonus on the panel, but the effect was not mentioned. The main reason is that there is no distinction between whether the player's outstanding performance is a bonus from himself or the system. This one has no subdivision and no sense of substitution. Another point is that the entire book is about competition, daily life, ranking, interaction between team members, and interaction with the protagonist, none of it. This gives me the feeling that the protagonist is playing a single-player game alone, and the players are all role-playing characters of the protagonist. It feels like the protagonist is playing a computer game, and the players feel like game characters.

The bonds in Season 7 feel very practical and can be used as a reference. In addition, the audience barrage becomes tired after writing too much. The author needs to keep it updated and at the same time refine it.

It's really bad character to write about handshakes.

This break is even more unexpected. It seems that it's time to finish with another update.

Before you know it, it's the end! One of the few lol novels I like recently. Just looking forward to a jdg tomorrow. The lack of comments in the last few games is too fatal. A lot less fun than before!