In Inuyasha, Choose Infinite Devouring at the Beginning

It was fine in the front, but later on when he had cloned three women, one of them actually fell in love with Mangu, which was a bit disgusting. Naraku can clone women, The man and the child are because he is an aggregation of monsters, and the protagonist himself grew up from a tree 😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓😓

Hehe, to be honest, I want to be Cao Cao. Immortal Fairy Lingyue doesn't sound good. Anyway, my husband is dead. My wife, twin tails, can be ridden in her original form, and can be "rided" in human nature. Author, go for it 😏

Is the author a student? High school student? The rewards of the selection system are so boring. It's rare to see Inuyasha written in this book, but your content really makes me want to watch it again and again, and it makes me feel frustrated.

What the hell are you writing? You might as well write about humans.

I kept seeing underwear and underwear, and I chose to look for women everywhere. I was a little speechless and gave up.

What a boring novel. Low level. A flowing article. The wind was blowing hard. All poison

The time is a little off! According to the plot, General Inu should not be dead when the ocelot first appears. General Inutai rushed back to save Izayoi after finishing off the ocelot clan, so at this time Inuyasha had just been born, not to mention Naraku, and the Ghost Spider had not even seen a shadow yet. The second time the ocelot was resurrected was the plot of the ocelot leader, but by that time the plot was already halfway through. Inuyasha was the ocelot leader who was killed with Sesshomaru. In addition, it's disgusting that this unscrupulous system always takes the personal belongings of platycodon from the parallel world. Even if it's a cool novel, it's quite disgusting to always use women's personal belongings to write about it.

So far. No one can write Inuyasha well. Blind

The idea is good and the storyline is not bad. But it was too hard to watch. After watching it for a long time, my head felt like it was all messed up.

The main character has become a human being in just two chapters, so it's better to just write a human being

I said, brother, your swallowing setting is just a decoration. Except for the beginning, you can swallow the Dragon Bone Essence first and then upgrade it to the Great Demon. Is there anyone who doesn't know how to practice? Also, in the anime, it took more than a hundred years from the time Inuyasha was sealed to the beginning of the anime. During this time, the protagonist's strength did not grow at all, and he was not like a time traveler at all. In your book, it seems that he came out less than a month after being sealed. It feels like he wants to be waved but doesn't have the strength, and you can completely create your own in the future. Inuyasha's world view is quite big. I feel like you are just following the original work. I am suffering from aesthetic fatigue. I have already read the original work. I read this book because I want to read something else. I am not asking you to lead us to review the original work again. When the protagonist is weak in the early stage, he will not be able to catch the big demon first. The stories in between can be written much better! ! !

It was written in a mess, and the fragments were released in advance! Run away decisively

1. The system is messed up. I'm really speechless about the ghs rewards. 2. The timeline is wrong. Inuyasha was at least 200 years old when he met Kagome. Because the scabbard had sealed Kumoya for 200 years, Inuyasha was at least 150 years old when he met Kikyo. 3. The plot is speechless. During the battle between cats and dogs, the protagonist meets Naraku who appears for the first time. He actually says that it would be boring if he kills Naraku now? This is what normal people think. I am speechless. Why did you let Naraku show up so early? It's not necessary at all! Moreover, Naraku's two strongest skills are plotting and escaping. During the cat-dog battle, Naraku probably couldn't even defeat Sesshomaru, so how could he show up?

I originally wanted to say that it was rare for Inuyasha. Why do you want to imitate Nairo and create a clone? It kind of reduces your desire to read...

There is a problem with what I wrote at the beginning. What does a war between two monsters have to do with humans? They were mortal enemies, okay! I'll just say it. No one has ever been able to write Inuyasha well.

Oops, there are still many people watching~(*/ω＼*)

The plot and characters were not handled well. Sesshomaru was like a different person. The characters in it are very stiff.

The main character is really disgusting and looks like a pervert. The rewards given by the system are either underwear or underwear. The most disgusting thing is that the protagonist always collects the underwear of the women in the show, but he doesn't go out to pick up other people's underwear. He only sniffs other people's underwear at home. How perverted is this?

It was fine at first, but suddenly they made a scene of letting the tiger go back to the mountain. Naraku offered his head and rode on horseback to let others go. This thing is like a cockroach mouse hiding in the sewer. You put yourself in the light this time to scare him away. How will you find him next time he hides in the dark? You don't think that he will be so stupid that he doesn't consider your existence and acts like the original plot, do you? Such a disgusting thing hides in the corner and plots against you! Even if it doesn't kill you, it can still disgust you! So are you short-sighted? Or if you don't want to offend me, just kill me and get clean! Indecisive and indecisive!

It looked pretty good at first, but I can't stand it anymore since I got fat.

Nothing to say, just read the chapter about Platycodon, it's really disgusting that the character is broken.

What do you mean by choosing a system? The gap is huge. I don't have a choice when choosing wool. It's just a joke. It's better to travel through time and directly give the devouring ability of tree roots. The system text is still hanging.

This cover

There are many novels with this cover. Are they from the same author or the same studio?

Platycodon platycodon, Kagome is the one who is really upset.

Please, be nice to Platycodon Shangxian, she is already pitiful enough, powerless and unable to choose😔There is also Kagura, I just saw it and I really cried to death😣

The protagonist thinks Naraku is a hodgepodge, so he doesn't devour it, which reminds me of five-nut mooncakes. It's good to eat separately, but together...

Don't read, it's a waste of time This author doesn't even read it after he writes it To complete the task, just think of a fragment and write it out Seeing that the middle is full of waste cases, I thought it was some kind of interlude, but in fact, I just can't write, and I don't want to waste time designing the plot I just start writing when I think of a picture I don't explain the next picture clearly, write a detailed outline and treat it as the content

Take a seat first and collect it. In fact, every author does not seek to make money with his first book, because it is not popular. The author must learn to be patient.

I didn't think much about it when I wrote it. I really recommend revising it again.