Senior Sister, Please Be Honest!

Small theater! ! !

Xdm, keep reading and start reading, rush, rush! (The picture I just picked up in the book review section of another big brother, the situation is probably like this)

Congratulations to Xiaojiu for successfully putting it on the shelves Although the process is not as ideal as we thought, and I should have posted this yesterday. When I first read this book, it only had more than ten chapters. It has been a long journey. This was also my first novel of this type. I really wanted Xiaojiu to break out of the siege, but unfortunately there was too much competition. But come on, Xiaojiu! I always support you! Your writing style is very good, and I like it better. I have never read books by other authors of this type. I don't know what Ji or Jiang you are talking about. This does not make me lose interest in discussing with you. I hope we can make progress together (I call this the Xiaojiu development plan, and I hope we can leave a name together). I will always be there. Come on! Come on!

I originally thought it was pretty good, but why did I write it publicly and be discovered by everyone and then post it on Douyin Kuaishou, and also post a couple vlog? I can only say that plain love is good, but I have to do this and that kind of fancy stuff, I feel dizzy.

From Mi Zhiji, he is too short, I hope you can satisfy me 😌

After reading the introduction, the male protagonist is so skinny, 183,132 pounds 😏

If the future is successful, how dare you laugh at Huang Chao for not being her husband

Senior

To be honest, the author's writing skills really need to be improved. I recommended it from Honey Chicken Chapter, but now I can't even order Honey Chicken. The author's imitation of honey chicken is obvious, and the characters and language are quite embarrassing😓. From the novel, I can feel that the author is very serious about writing, but the level is really not high. The Honey Chicken score is good, but the constant control of the rhythm is really disgusting. I posted a review there and many people agreed with me. The author should improve his language expression. There are also some values ​​​​that are revealed inadvertently, and there are many mistakes in pronouns and typos. Very bad impression. I am picky about reading books, and this book definitely did not meet my expectations. Haste makes waste. The author has worked hard to hone his language, but if he doesn't have the basic skills, no matter how well he grasps the rhythm, no matter how attractive the title is, it's of no use.

This book is more realistic than other love books.

After watching it for ten minutes, I suddenly realized that I had no investment quota, ahhhhh

The author used this name, cough cough cough, he was really afraid that Aunt Gu Man would come from a certain river next door and rush at him. The masterpiece of the female channel master, Why Silence the Flute, Here Comes Shanshan, Smiles Allure, You Are My Glory (both popular TV series). Regarding the plot in the novel, it is the same as the heroine Ena Komiya in the drama Just Because, with pictures

To be fair, everyone should hold on for Xiao Zhaoer, you don't want him to cut you off, read on, read on, read on, say important things three times

This book is written more realistically, maybe the author wrote his own inner thoughts into it. For the time being, the sweetness of this book is not very high. After shooting the vlog, the sweetness should be increased. Overall, it is still acceptable. Although the results of this book are not very good for the time being, I still hope that the author can persist in finishing it 😏

It's very sweet. I'm chasing you. Come on, baby.

Keep at it, it will get better in the future!

I passed by looking for a book and came in to read the comments 😁

9 Tips, come on, hold on 🤓

Already submitted. Come on, author, my aunt is laughing throughout the process.

Dear author, you have to believe in yourself

I have nothing to say, just post it.

As long as the author likes Wang Jiasi, we are good brothers and must subscribe!

Come on, author bacteria. Actually, there is a lot more that can be said, but I don't want to say anything more. It's probably not good for you to say too much and start a fight. But I still hope you will study Sister Hua and Kissing Pig. I think these two are much better than Honey Chicken, even if their results may not be as good as his.

Stop watching it, stop watching it, update every day

If rated out of 10, I would give it 6.5 At most. I originally wanted to give it 8, but the final ending was too eunuch (4 points deducted). The relationship setting with the male and female protagonists is okay, and I can add 0.5 Points back.

😆Why hasn't the new book been released yet? !

Isn't this ambiguity a little too much...