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The first ten or so chapters were good, just drawing comics, but then it fell into a cliché. A beautiful girl from a big family, she was touched by all the boys in the school when she was a child; I worked in a scrap wood factory and was unloved, but after I made some money drawing comics, a beautiful classmate appeared and only admired me; Anyone would attack me crazily with words, and I was forced to slap him in the face with a car; A random person is a good-for-nothing disciple of a big boss in the industry. He paints a painting and is so impressed that the big boss insists on buying the painting for 150,000 yuan; He was challenged on Weibo just after he was about to release a new work. I didn't see the rest of the story, but the routine is just that; Looking at the author saying "I really wanted a single female protagonist at the beginning", it turns out that there is still a harem in the back? There will definitely be a lot of audiences if I write it this way. After all, it is all proven routines, but it does lose the surprise.
I really don't know what the author is writing about with a hammer here and a stick here and there. Instead of drawing comics properly, it turns into a pretentious business war?
I can't quite understand what it is about; the main line is vague and the branches are vague. Everything in the story seems to be talking about itself, some are related, but there seems to be no connection.
The writing style is very good, and the writing techniques are also very sophisticated. This writing style is considered clean at the beginning of today's primary school students. Unfortunately, the rhythm problem is too big, and the priorities are not clear. The copying is generally 82 points for daily copying. At most, the number of words and adjustments are added, and at most, 20% is added for business. You have completely reversed this, and the rhythm of copying is not good. Every time the feeling of pleasure has not climaxed, it will change to daily life. It is very torture.
The author is born in the 1980s? The reasoning style of writing exudes an air of old age, a sense of having experienced the vicissitudes of life and seeing through the world, just like Astro Boy in the work, a sense of being born at the wrong time. , ,, There is no exhilarating feeling of successful counterattack at all. It is better to transfer it to the work. It will be more satisfying if the readers share the common love for the work and achieve success. Try to deal with the emotional line as much as possible, it feels weird.
I have read dozens of chapters. Maybe the theme of reading comics is like reminiscing about my childhood, but I always feel that you have too much daily life, and I can't feel the love for comics.
If you want to see comics written in novels, they will all turn out to be pedantic. If you want to write about business wars, just come up with a name that is relevant to you, but stick to other genres. The audience will be different after you finish writing. Will the results be good?
Talk about drawing comics. . . But what kind of human sufferings has the protagonist experienced? I didn't have the writing power to write so many irrelevant characters, including relatives, friends, brothers and sisters. . . Moreover, as soon as I wrote a character, I asked the protagonist to go up and pretend. No matter what others were doing, the protagonist came up and started pretending awkwardly. I was convinced. . .
If you draw comics, you just draw comics. What kind of J8 stuff is this? What does it mean to buy a fat blue guy who has not studied Chinese painting for ten thousand years?
How can I put it this way? That lawyer failed as the heroine. The protagonist is not suitable for her because of her sexiness. One wants to control everything and the other doesn't. How can they be together? If you miss it, don't get back together. Moreover, most people who read this book want to see what the protagonist is copying from comics, not love and love, so they have to figure out the priorities. ,,? ,,,,
??? What does it mean? Is your cover from Guizi Academy?
It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away
The writing method of the novel is relatively unique among cartoonist novels, but there is too little content about the comics themselves, especially old comics like Astro Boy. At least some plot and introduction content should be written (even if you copy it from Baidu), because not many young people nowadays have read Astro Boy. If the author doesn't show the charm of Astro Boy, how can it interest readers who have never read the comics? How to resonate with readers who have read comics?
Is this a comic-related novel? I can't understand it at all.
I don't understand the latest ones. Hero, it's none of your business. They licensed it at a low price. They didn't get paid yet. They defaulted on their debts. They went to avenge others. They didn't care about their biological parents who died. The protagonist listened to a taxi driver and helped others. He drove a taxi and acted like this. He was really a bitch. 1
Author cover The thief looks like one of the characters from My Devil Academy⊙⊙
I haven't seen Dragon Ball in the manga and I'm not interested in reading it. I only saw pirates in Sea of Death. Is Inuyasha not good? The more popular it is, the more people will watch it, even if it's hot, it won't
None of the long comments are normal
It gives me a headache, it's so poisonous
The author's writing seems so incoherent! ! ! It takes too much brains
Big data is given to me, because I have the same name as the protagonist in the article. What kind of mood did I feel after reading it 😄
The author's writing is okay, but the writing style is too sophisticated and the style is too realistic, which seems to have the flavor of a bitter drama. It is not refreshing and capable enough, and is more suitable for detailed reading. To be honest, this style of writing may not be popular with Internet readers who like to read refreshing articles, but at least the protagonist is seriously drawing comics. He was almost dismissed by the comment section, but now he can It's really hard to find a novel that can seriously draw comics. I just read one: Rebirth of the King of Entertainment that Started from Comics: It has this problem. If you don't write comics well, it is just a daily routine, and it has almost turned into an urban entertainment novel. I think the readers who read the book with this title are expected to be urban entertainment novels, right? I hope the author will not make this mistake in the future, and add more exciting points, such as comic plots and real-life feedback. Isn't this plot very easy to write? Now this style of writing seems a bit dry in online articles, which means it is not attractive enough for readers to follow.