Devouring the Starry Sky, My System Can Click on Everything

Seeing this lottery thing, I have no desire to read any more. As long as it systematically devours fans, there is no one I can read.

Updates are too slow, please work harder, two chapters a day and five thousand is not too much, right?

It's the same as those eunuch novels. It was good at the beginning, but then got worse and worse, until the author didn't even know what he was writing, and then he became a eunuch. I think this book is not far from the eunuch.

It's so chaotic. The Xiongbing Company's combat strength is so unbalanced. How dare you write to persuade them to retreat?

I've read more than 20 chapters and can't stand it anymore. Let me tell you how it feels. Question: If you suddenly traveled through time and a system suddenly appeared, the planet was full of monsters who could kill you, and the streets were full of people who could kill you with one punch. You had ten draws from all realms at the beginning, what should you do? Answer: If you don't draw a lottery, just let it go. For the warrior assessment, just go up and fight by yourself, just for fun. . . This is your answer. I believe that not one out of 10,000 people is like you, but why did you write like this? Because you know that the protagonist is not in danger, you know that the protagonist will not encounter high-level monsters that unexpectedly enter the city, nor will you encounter high-level warriors with inexplicable AoE, nor will high-level monsters break into the warrior assessment. Until the lottery, the protagonist does not improve his strength. Because you are the author, you write the novel from such a perspective. The general direction of the plot seems reasonable, but in fact it is extremely unreasonable. In the end, it feels like the whole world is accompanying the protagonist in filming.

The main purpose of this book is to experience life as a rich second generation delivery person

Brothers, is there any heroine named Janet?

The plot and story are okay, but the character development of the protagonist is a bit childish. For example, the protagonist is a stupid young man who has just traveled through time. This kind of character is okay, but the shaping is too vague and has too few changes. This kind of character is only suitable for the first 10 chapters. In the follow-up, some events should develop and then gradually change. However, in the later chapters, there are small and big events for the protagonist to think about, but after thinking about it, he always looks indifferent. I feel that such ineffective writing is really unpleasant 🤫. Then there is the writing technique that is too expressive. . . . It feels a bit too mindless and cool.

Luosuo Water The protagonist is childish

I thought it was an upgrade, but I didn't expect it to be a second-generation stream, and the monsters wouldn't be killed.

The protagonist needs to change, this character won't last long