
Yunzhongjun in Douluo
斗罗里的云中君
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.3M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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531Chapters
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This is a very well-written Douluo novel, well worth reading. The essence of this book is not a combat novel but more like a ideological essay. When reading, sometimes it can make people think because of the truth brought out by the words in it. At the same time, it will make people refreshing and trigger some deep thoughts on the nature of things. It will bring some new insights to the readers from the perspective of a young man who has ideals and hopes of his elders. There is no doubt that the author of this book has really good views and is well worth reading!
The introduction is indeed a bit...,, I clicked on it several times a few days ago but I didn't read it. When I read it today, I found that the writing is very good, but there are a few people 😜
Thoughts after reading
I have read Chapter 85 so far, and I feel that this is a good Douluo fanfic so far. The rhythm is very relaxed and comfortable, and there are no big poisonous points. At present, it seems that the real heroine is a spirit beast. I don't know if it is a harem, but I hope not. If I continue to watch and find some poisonous points, I will complain about it.
To be honest, when I first saw the title of this book, I really thought it was the Lord Yun Zhong in The King (it turns out that I just got dizzy from playing too much pesticide) Nowadays, almost all the fans of Douluo 1 either completely suppressed Shrek from the Wuhundian camp, or the Shrek camp and the Wuhundian fought to death, or they were invincible and suppressed these conflicts forcibly. However, I feel that this book has taken a new route, changing the personality and behavior of the main characters in the original book to change the overall plot direction (it may also be because of ignorance). Because of the appearance of the old time traveler Fan Zhe, the world has undergone tremendous changes. The original scumbag Yu Xiaogang no longer wavered and directly chose Liu Erlong, breaking the two love triangles. Bibi Dong, who originally planned to take revenge, put aside her hatred and worked hard towards the ideal country because she had the ideal country in her heart. The original little witch Ning Rongrong is no longer as unruly and willful as in the original work, but has truly become a noble lady. Wait... These are all the effects of the old man. The protagonist, like Bibi Dong, is now the inheritor of the old man's spirit and knowledge. Bibi Dong is at the pinnacle of power, using policies to change Wuhun City, thereby changing the world. The protagonist is at the grassroots level, using the knowledge and ideas given by the old man to change the inherent thoughts of people in the world. So, when you read this book, please don't substitute Yu Xiaogang, Tang San, etc. From the original work. And some people say that the protagonist gives things to the Seven Monsters. As a teacher, isn't it normal for him to be kind to his students? What you need to know is that the protagonist is not a time traveler! Not a time traveler! Not a time traveler! (Say important things three times) He is an out-and-out native. He doesn't know the dirty things about Tang Sanyu Xiaogang in the original work. Even the old man doesn't know. He is just doing what a good teacher should do. The Duke of Zhou was afraid of the day of rumors, but Wang Mang was humble and did not usurp the time. Xiangshi died at the beginning, who knows the authenticity of his life? I feel that this poem still makes sense and is worthy of reading by some diode readers.
Is anyone watching? If so, could you please let me know? I want to know how many cuties are reading this book😂
Aren't today's fandoms trampling Yu Xiaogang and Tang San to death?
After thinking about it, let me talk about the heroine issue. First of all, the male protagonist Fan Yun definitely has his own emotional line. You don't need to worry about this. After all, he is not a robot without emotions. But as for who the heroine is, one or more, to be honest, I am a little unsure now. Before I started the book, I actually planned to have a single female protagonist, but as I kept reading, as different characters appeared in my writing, the story gradually became fuller and more complete, and I was not sure... Then I understood why some authors said that their characters were out of their control, because sometimes the story really pushes you along 😂. In future stories, the male protagonist Fan Yun will have his own female protagonist, maybe one, maybe multiple, but not too many, at most three. These female characters will not be Fan Yun's vassals. She or they have their own ideas, pursuits, ideals and goals, and have their own stories. That's about it for the description of the heroine. Anyway, I hope you will like the following story.
Image reference of the old man
Actually, there is a bug in this story, Tang Hao is actually a mad dog in the original work. . . He wants to kill everyone in Wuhun Palace... In this case, I don't know how to reconcile the contradiction.
I have to say that Mr. Fan is a true master. He has his own pursuits and ambitions, and he is never for himself or a certain group of people. His eyes are the whole world, a completely real and living world. He hopes to change the status quo of everyone and even all living things! But at the same time, he is also a relatively tragic character. His tragedy is that he is lonely and a complete loner. Who in the world knows me? At the same time, because of his own talent, in this world where great power belongs to himself, it is difficult for him to grasp the real power and power, so he made changes and struggled! I, a traveler from another world, am just like this! Compared to a fake product named Jade, it's a huge difference! Finally, I hope the author is so popular that he can give us a more exciting story!
Image of Pope Bibi Dong
Fan Yun's image reference
The treasure novel, the three views reflected in many details are very in line with my appetite. It really tells a story with heart and describes different Douluo from a different perspective. I will support the author to the best of my ability, come on! Keep writing, even though it may be niche now, your writing will definitely become popular in the future.
What a beautiful novel, why is it that no one is reading it? It's not brainless, it's easy to read, and it's reasonable, but no one is reading it.
Okay, it can be said to be the masterpiece of Douluo fans in the past two years.
First of all, I would like to apologize to the author, because I read the latest chapter through a pirated copy, but I still want to say that what you wrote is really good, at least I think it is really good. Although the story of this novel is not particularly refreshing, it is definitely good-looking. It depicts another side of Douluo Continent with either warm or cold writing styles. The author's perspective on the subject is very unique, and it completes the whole world. Moreover, I found a lot of content in it very rewarding, and I can feel that the author really worked hard to conceive it. I am very grateful to the author for bringing us such a story, but for this reason I would like to say a few words about some situations in the book review area. I can understand that some book friends have serious inherent impressions and prejudices against characters like Tang Sanyu and Xiaogang. After all, the character creation of the San Shao guy has some problems and is getting more and more outrageous. However, this book has reshaped these characters. They are not as annoying as the original book. They feel alive. The characters are much more fleshed out and concrete, and they are no longer so disgusting. I hope that later book friends will not bring their resistance and resentment towards the original author of Douluo into the characters in the book. This will easily miss many wonderful stories, such as this one.
A breath of fresh air, Douluo is a teacher. Although it is less exciting, the content is very rich. The author's writing style is very comfortable to read, and the protagonist does not have the hostility and domineering air that are common in online books. The author makes me feel like a teacher? The tone, viewpoint, and handling of characters and plots are a bit like my high school Chinese teacher. . .
First of all, the author's writing style and logic are pretty good among fans. Secondly, the three views of this book are too correct, and the pattern is too big. How can I put it, the protagonist wants to change the entire Douluo world, turn a god-only world into a materialist world in a very short period of time, and turn a slave society into a republican and democratic society. As far as I am concerned, it was very uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist's spontaneity and freedom in the front are very attractive, and that's how I was attracted to it. But later on, to put it bluntly, he seems to have become a pioneer in the world, and he has taken on the responsibilities of many people. If you are a reader of a larger picture, this is a good book. I haven't finished it, but what the author wants to describe is that the protagonist creates a harmonious world. But I am a small person, and I cannot represent the protagonist's world view, or in other words, the later world view. My ideal protagonist is free and easy-going. I am happy today and can do good things within my ability that do not affect myself, but I will never bear the responsibilities of people who have nothing to do with me. The protagonist considers survival and ideological issues for too many people. He just wants to change the entire worldview. The pattern is too big. I respect it but I can't stand it.
I just read it today, and the writing is actually pretty good. I just didn't feel anything when I saw Yu Xiaogang and Tang San. It's not that the book itself is not good, but that the character image of Tang San has been completely ruined. Being associated with this image will make people feel sick. I can only say that it is worthy of the rebirth of Tang San Chang Gongwei.
I didn't dare to look at it, for fear that it would be another protagonist who went to Shrek to be a treasure-delivery boy. That would be quite disgusting.
This is a novel worth recommending. Based on the original work, the author has added a lot of his own thinking. It is not a brainless combat novel, nor is it a complaint. The author did not interfere with the growth of the protagonist and supporting characters because of the original author. On the contrary, the author is more like a "restorer", using his own knowledge to tell a different world of Douluo. Of course, this is also the reason for the emergence of the butterfly; If Douluo is a few strokes of color hastily painted on the scroll by the original author, then the author is trying to restore an objective Douluo, a humane Douluo, and a living Douluo through these strokes of color. The above only represents my own point of view. If you don't support it, please read it and think about it before speaking. Please don't let the original author affect your appreciation and mood of the fan work. I wish the readers all the best. The author is in good health and does not want to be a eunuch 😁 (To be honest, the last fan fiction I liked was "My Years as a Hero at Marvel")
I really like a Douluo fanfic. It is really novel. It is the first time I have seen such a Douluo. The author's three views are very good. This book is a book that I have always wanted to read. Recently, I really want to read a Douluo fanfic. I really think this book can be regarded as a masterpiece, but it is not well-known. I hope that people who will follow will be patient and read it. It is really good. Don't be persuaded to leave because of the introduction or some minor problems. I hope the author will update it more. I feel that it is not enough. Haha
The writing is very good, especially in the last few chapters, which have become a bit in-depth. If you want to truly "reform", you must first understand the current situation of Douluo's world. It is rare to have such patience to write and describe the process of ideological awakening. Compared with the main plot, the contradictions caused by modern ideas in Douluo's world are more attractive to me.
The author's writing style is considered very good among Douluo fans, but as Teacher Shrek, he also takes great pains to train them... I am afraid that three to four tenths of the readers will be persuaded to give up. There is no way, the current Douluo fandom is to step on Tang San and step on the master to torture Dai Mubai, which has already formed a fixed impression on many readers.
This book carefully describes the process of ideological awakening and an objective understanding of the world before thinking about changing it. Those who say it's bad to write bad reviews and say that being a teacher in Shrek is a bad thing, but they haven't taken it seriously. This is a world that has been transformed to a certain extent by the protagonist's teacher. The characters' personalities are also described in detail. There is no blackness for the sake of being black, and no one is whitewashed. It is just an objective description, and the protagonist also wants to change the world, so it is acceptable to go to Shrek. Finally, the author has written about the brilliance and ugliness of human nature. If it weren't for Douluo, it would definitely become popular. . . . . .
If nothing else is said in this book, the portrayal of the Star Luo Empire is really good. It completely brings out the appearance of everyone in a ruthless and machine-like empire (so cruel, but very realistic, and the author portrays it very well). If the Elder Hall led by Qian Daoliu in this book means the church of creationism, and Bibi Dong leads the Wuhun Hall after being changed by her husband, it is the change of the world, then the protagonist is Bibi Dong's companion and supervisor. Although Mr. Wang has left at the beginning of the book, he is like a stone hitting the decadent worldview of Douluo Continent, breaking many restrictions, completely changing the direction of the story, and making himself the kindling that starts a prairie fire. This book shows that the author's writing skills are very strong. Douluo's worldview limits the direction of the story, but Douluo's worldview also makes this book have a different style from other messy fans. There are no myths, no systems, no cheats. There is only the most ordinary time traveler who has worked hard throughout his life and tried his best to bring new ideas, knowledge and changes to the world, so that others can accept this flame and ultimately change the world. (I haven't finished reading it yet, but I hope I can see the changes in the world at the end.) Mr. Shang is like Shang Yang. Although his life was rough and uneven, he only turned into fire due to various reasons, but he gave future generations the opportunity to become the First Emperor.
The part that overlaps with Shrek is about becoming a teacher, so you can dive in with confidence This book can be regarded as a clean book for Douluo fans. The writing style gives people a very comfortable feeling and is very smooth.
I was attracted after just reading a few chapters. I hope the author's next book will be better, and then I hope to write some romance. I'm very curious about what the author will write.
I lost interest after seeing the introduction. Douluo is a fantasy world where power is paramount. What are you doing in modern society?
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