I Am Brushing a Copy in a One-Person World

The setting is reasonable, the ideas are clear, and the character descriptions are on point. However, some branch plots seem a bit draggy, and the review can be called good.

The plot of the original branch is too stiff and a bit fake, the character development of the protagonist is a bit like a virgin, the existence of the heroine is a failure, and the help of the copy system needs to be further improved. Generally speaking, the setting of the dungeon is interesting, but the protagonist should be ruthless enough, and the heroine does not need to exist. The pace of the first thirty chapters seems a bit slow, and the overall excitement is a bit lacking. The author still needs to work hard.

Tang Mu: Master Heavenly Master, have you ever been defeated? Master Heavenly Master:? Me:?? Everyone:???

Write well, just give me 10,000 words a day

Ending: The protagonist secretly learned martial arts from another sect and was besieged and died

To be honest, it seems very good. Nowadays it is more physical, not like that. Feeling fucked up. Although you gave him a golden finger. But it feels okay. Not so perverted.

The author is a bit too self-indulgent, and looks like a running account, which is very boring to watch.

The appearance of the heroine and the promotion of the heroine's plot are too awkward, too blunt, and it feels too coincidental. If you don't know how to write, you can just not write it first, but it is not good if you have to write it forcefully. For example, if a mushy dish is served at the Manchu-Han Banquet, the reviews will plummet. People will not care about how delicious the other dishes are, but how unpalatable the mushy dish is.

The outline of the work has been initially written, and will be gradually and steadily updated later. If you have any suggestions on the content, you are welcome to submit them.

The writing is quite good, I have collected it (≧∇≦*)

I think you have a flaw here. You coded too little.

Brothers, I can only say that the writing style and setting are super beautiful. It is absolutely top-notch among fandoms. Except for the original heroine, I personally think it is a little bit undeserved. Everything else is very good.

There is a logical error. The previous episode was still a children's version of Bu Yao Bi Lian, without sanity. How could the corpse chaser appear in the back? Underestimate the enemy. Unexpected. Didn't react. These situations.

Entered the palace before reaching 50 pictures→_→

Alas😔, I found out that most of the Under One Person fans have to learn the Golden Light Curse, can't you have some imagination?🥱

It's outrageous. In the chapter thirty or so, the protagonist goes out in the middle of the night and his father doesn't react at all. So useless? Doesn't it mean that he is also a master? If you write something like this, the assassin can kill indiscriminately.

This has been discontinued and I still have daily guides.

The writing is very good, why don't you write it again?

Dear book friends, because I just wrote it on a whim at the beginning, I didn't think too much about the various settings and outlines. Now the author is also very uncomfortable writing, so... Please forgive the author for cackling this book... I will treat the next book well, and hope that we can meet again.

So do you still plan to write? If you're looking for inspiration, please post a notice. Otherwise, I might as well delete it if I leave it gathering dust on my bookshelf. It's actually very well written. I just need to find a suitable entry point into the plot.

After just reading a few chapters, I wanted to know how the protagonist would explain a bunch of skills from other sects through dungeons?

Another novel where the heroine becomes a lesbian

Update quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Is the heroine bad? I think it's pretty good. Except for the fact that I was not very ruthless when playing a dungeon character at the beginning, which made my blood pressure go up a bit, everything else was fine. This one-person fanfic is boring to watch, and there are too few climaxes. It is recommended to add more original plots and plots with a heroine. I am tired of reading eunuch stories without a heroine. The worldview under one person is pretty good. You can never satisfy everyone.

Building a building here requires the author to comment twice a day

Just one compression, no one else can compress it?

Beautiful! Come on, come on, come on!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~