
General Waste Material
将门废材
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 405k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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197Chapters
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As long as the intelligence of the characters in the book increases a little, the book can be upgraded to a higher level. . . It's a pity that they are all mentally retarded
My surname is Xiao. I started the test and the results were unsatisfactory. I have a tendency to be useless. Is this smell a bit harsh? 😁😁
The fox is too short. I raised my paw in agreement.
I wish you all happiness and hope you all like this book!
The direct descendant of a great general of a country was called a loser in front of everyone in public? How much hatred and injustice is this? Look again!
When will I be able to write another book called The Coast of the Land? Stop being so short
I opened your book and hung up for half an hour, and found that the investment one didn't pop up. I thought he had to move to pop out, so I slowly scrolled through the pages, and kept scrolling. After ten minutes, it still didn't come out, and I discovered that I could invest, but he didn't pop it out for me. I had to click on it myself. I used to get 200, but now it's only 76. I'm losing money.
The protagonist's IQ is extremely low, the plot is boring, and he was confused from the beginning. The setting is quite good, but it's a pity that the author doesn't know how to write it.
The protagonist's subordinates are so poorly written that they have no sense of existence at all. There are only a few students from the college showing off throughout the whole process. If you ask me to say that there are thousands of soldiers in the army, no matter how bad it is, one person can become a creek if he pees.
The daily descriptions are relatively bland, using the simplest words to describe a prosperous world. The protagonist grows slowly, and there is no good spark at the moment.
The subject matter is novel, the story is poisonous, and the writing is adaptable. The author has ideas and reads the comments, but that's all.
Too much grinding and procrastination. At this pace, you have written 1,000 chapters without even getting to the main theme. You are still asking questions in 800 chapters. Subscriptions are a waste of money. All of this is skipping and reading. It all feels like a waste.
I will milk you when you sign the contract 🤓🤓🤓🤓
Elf! ! !
Reader: Is the fox sometimes this short or is it always this short? Fox: Always so short
First of all, I really like this subject matter, that is, I would like to make some small suggestions, and I hope the author will adopt them. The most detailed thing the author has written now is the talent development of the protagonist, but it is a bit too detailed. At first, the indigenous protagonist did not understand it, and the slow development is understandable. But the elves have appeared, and the protagonist still thinks about it himself, and then the elf explains it. . To be honest, I understand that the author wants the protagonist to grow up, but it is indeed a bit watered down. The appearance of the elves is not to help the protagonist develop his talents. . . Then regarding the Four Kingdoms War, the author's writing is a bit too general. There are about 20 chapters of war scenes in total, and half of them have the talent of the protagonist. That is, such a big scene, it is gone in more than ten chapters. The description of the war is how many people are on my side, how many people are on the opposite side, and then the balance of power, disadvantages, and advantages. . . This is how I understand it. Since the liberal arts college has writing about the military field and talents that can improve intelligence and planning, then on the battlefield, it is okay to write about strategies and intrigues. And I really can't understand the war scenes. When the Three Kingdoms fought against Chen State, was Chen State defending the city or directly finding a plain to confront the two armies? Just mention the number of people and then write down the advantages and disadvantages. . . Also, the description of the protagonist's father is a bit too general. In this regard, I think the title of the God of War can actually be reflected. Is he the strongest or has a more powerful strategy? Another thing, the author's description of the four countries makes me feel that the Lu country has the most powerful equipment, the Qiang country is the strongest individually, and what about the Chen country? Many people? Anyway, I don't feel how strong Chen Guo is. The author can write more about this aspect. . . . Finally, let's talk about the author's latest chapters. Since they were written three years ago, it's better not to write so much about specific talent development in the past three years. Instead, just use two or three chapters to summarize the results in detail, and then start a new plot. I always have a kind of author who wants to write ten or twenty chapters to write out all the details in three years. . . It's better not to skip past these three years.
Fox, please hold your hand first and wait for me to invest. You are signing the contract. There will be investment opportunities tomorrow
What are you doing to reward yourself?
The writing style is too ordinary and the characters cannot stand out.
The protagonist has been vigorously cultivated by his family, and his IQ is worrying. The author has written 10 chapters of trying to play the lord game, and he still looks like an idiot! What are you telling me to cultivate vigorously? Everyone else has a rough idea of the basic status of their talent awakening, but the protagonist is completely different! He wants to go to the battlefield, but his strategies are worse than those of an idiot.
It would be nice if the protagonist was a time traveler. It looked boring. I quit.,,,,,,,,,,
I really like this type of novel, so I'll give you 500 coins, come on!
Is the protagonist of this book a time traveler? First of all, in addition to singing some modern songs that have nothing to do with the local people, it makes people suspicious, and the style does not look like a time traveler An indigenous child being tortured like this is called experience, and the parents call it careful cultivation. If a time traveler is beaten by dozens or hundreds of people and has no temper at all, I personally don't believe it. If it is an indigenous child, a child has no personality at all and is completely a puppet, even if it is shocked by the Goldfinger Legion? I really don't believe it if the time traveler has never played any strategy games (except for the poor ones who don't even have electricity and have to dig wild vegetables in the mountains to eat) It's the natives who asked the author to make the protagonist's IQ more normal ( If the protagonist's IQ is equal to the author's IQ, then I didn't say it.) After reading dozens of chapters in this book, it is not interesting at all to read it for free. If you charge 100% to abandon the book, and the quality of this book is recommended by the editor for a fee, it seems that this website is going to be gone.
This is uncouth. Liu Yu and He Jin.
To be honest, I didn't understand it. The author should continue to work hard.
Little fans of the previous book are here to report! 😁
The last few chapters have been too intellectual, with the protagonist acting like a fool. In order to start the plot of wandering (the kind of wandering in the main city of Leduli), did he lose his IQ?
It's about to end, let's sprinkle flowers when it's over🌸
Come on! I feel that the subject matter is quite good, but it lacks a bit of character collision and timeline. Come on! Hope it gets better and better!