Time Travel, Ultra World

The writing style needs to be improved. It is too fast in some places, the battle process is not detailed, and high-level characters are not written. It is recommended to slow down the pace, describe the characters in more detail, describe the battle process in detail, and describe the post-war environment. Write the scene after the alien invasion.

I read the introduction and it said the main character's name is Ling Feng? The smell is so strong, it instantly reminds me of the era ten years ago when wind, dragon, sky, morning... All the powerful forces were raging hahahaha

Wow, author, the Yabo people showed up and blew up the building. The protagonist, as a member of the defense team, didn't go to assist in the rescue. Why not report the Yabo people to their superiors when they showed up? The first step was to go eat. Can it be a little more outrageous?

Ultraman's names generally have some meaning or significance, such as Zeta, which is Greek. People named with this name deep down long for a stable and loving family. Are you Ruota? ? ? ?

Come on and write. Very pretty. It just feels like there are a few team members 🙂

What does the protagonist's transformer look like?