Keeping a Low Profile Started When the System Pissed Me Off

Build a building and see how many living people there are!

Dear brothers, because I am a newbie with no experience and no one to comment, I don't know what is wrong with the writing. Some brothers said it was too bland. In fact, I wanted to be as reasonable as possible. I had not used the system for decades before rebirth. It is impossible to change my mind directly after rebirth, so the pace was a bit slower. I solemnly declare that it is definitely not hydrology. What the protagonist did and said was to portray his character. Maybe the technique is not good and everyone did not see it. I welcome your comments. It is really difficult to write silently by myself.

Dear brothers and sisters, thank you very much for watching, but I don't know how many people are watching. I hope you can leave a mark and give me some motivation. Thank you! Ps: Comments, recommendations, rewards, and monthly tickets are all acceptable! ! ! Thanks again

I have a system but I don't use it, I just play 😁

Great author, keep up the good work. This novel has many advantages so far. There is no hard-nosed pretense and slap in the face, and there is no such poisonous point as classmates getting together, and then the system immediately gives away shares in the hotel at the party. Moreover, he did not interfere with the abnormal love affair of his third uncle's cousin. For female characters, the god sister is a tool, and there will basically be no exciting plots in the later stages. It would be nice not to drive a sports car in Changzhi to attract school beauties. However, the role of Mengyao came very unexpectedly. It seems that there is no good combination between the previous life and this life. It would be better to write it as a story about meeting Mengyao, a junior high school student, after graduating from high school. Then added qq. But it's just that the lover is not satisfied yet. Later, due to chance, they met frequently in Jiangcheng, which led to their love affair. Bu Fei, the role is great, mainly because the character stands out. She is a girl with very good emotional intelligence, but she comes from an ordinary family, so she has a lot of stuff in her head. In the follow-up, it would be better not for her to seduce the male protagonist, but by chance the male protagonist saves her, and she can't help but kiss him. As a roommate, she quietly acted as a lover and never crossed the line. For the follow-up plot, the cousin of the third uncle's family needs several chapters of the story. My cousin Jiang Sen was admitted to an undergraduate university in Wuhan. In short, everything must unfold quickly. You can't just drive the X5 and go to class every day. Yu Lu can have a thrilling plot, where she is drunk and drugged, and the hero rescues her.

Come on, the author is great. I have read a few chapters. The writing is very good and the plot is also good. Keep up the good work!

I don't need the system. Hey, I just play. You can die and leave the money for me.

Dear bosses, use your little hands to add to your collection! Kneel down and thank you! If you think it is still eye-catching, you can also recommend two, and we will send red envelopes from time to time.

Author, I read your book and want to say a few words. It took me about 4 or 5 minutes to read more than 10 pictures. The feeling it gave me was just watery. It's very bland, with too much dialogue and doesn't add much to the plot. The content of more than 10 chapters can be compressed into 4 or 5 chapters. After all, you are writing this kind of cool article about local tycoons. If you don't see anything cool after a few pictures, not many people will be willing to read it. Of course, I don't want you to be slapped in the face by pretending to be cool. It's about pretending to be unconventional. Come on💪

Tsk tsk, there are more than 20 billion in the account, but the bank didn't even call to say hello or come to kneel down. . .

Zhang and Yao can be finished. They are better than their own parents. They are providing housing and opening a store. Their parents are still working.

Great, it's very well written, I like it, it's interesting, I like reading it, keep it up

Two chapters a day feels like it takes a long time to read

This woman is a bit poisonous in these chapters. Although women in reality are like this, they push themselves too hard, want to take advantage but don't want to pay, and are pretentious. But the main reason for us to read God's novels is to be happy. We can imagine that we are rich and happy. Writing this kind of woman is very poisonous. Why should women be bothered by women if they are rich? It is only natural to use their own money to help outsiders. She is a holy bitch who has never been beaten by life.

... The author probably feels that the description of the male protagonist is more in line with the anxiety of an ordinary person who suddenly gets the system. . Maybe you think it's more unique to write this way? 😅 Then why didn't the male protagonist simply hand him over to the state, and why could he really be sliced ​​into pieces? You can't be so ignorant, can you? What does this mean? Obviously, there is still reluctance. Greedy and timid~ The author portrays him deeply. If the purpose is not this... Although the novel must have a basis in reality, the author's novel is too close to the truth, making it seem as if this is really the case. It's a bit embarrassing to be so serious...

The starting price is 20 billion. I don't believe that any bank will not find the customer. Where did the money come from? Is it money laundering by overseas elements? You can't even explain the money clearly. What should you write?

My defense has been broken. Fortunately, I have been writing for a month. I admit that I am a little confused, but as soon as there are no comments and no subscriptions, let alone rewards, I am ready to work hard. It is too uncomfortable to play alone. I would like to apologize to the friends who are still reading. I am going to start a new book. This one started to write randomly, I am sorry!

It's not poisonous, it's just rotten. It's not attractive and the money is not spent.

Come on, come on, come and collect, the author, please come on (✪▽✪)

I can't wait for your first one. It's strange that the bank doesn't pay attention to you when you change bank cards so frequently. You're just trying to make a good name for fear of being discovered. Brother, what do you think? ! !

More than 20 billion at once, I don't know what to say. How many years did the author write this?

The heroine Xu Mengyao? I'm sorry to disturb you and say goodbye. This woman is really poisonous.

Adding a revenge system at the end is really uncomfortable to watch. It caused me a myocardial infarction and a cerebral hemorrhage on the spot. I personally didn't like it, so I gave it up decisively 😤

Come on and drive, let me sit still and watch the scenery, if you don't come on I'll whip you

So, if the system is intelligent, maybe there are individuals behind it.

It's interesting and interesting. Come on, author. It's obvious that the author is constantly adjusting his ideas. This is how his writing skills are developed step by step. Come on, come on!

I have a suggestion, please don't criticize. Zou Zhen's role changed too quickly, or the protagonist was too harsh on his change. The previous conflict was handled just fine, and then even if they met again, they wouldn't give him their contact number even if they knew each other. Maybe the author was preparing for the next conflict. As Wang Yanpeng's friend, there was so much foreshadowing, and the other one The female protagonist, I don't know whether to call her innocent or love-minded, her personality is a bit fragmented and she is selfish, just like the male protagonist. If she goes out with her boyfriend, of course shopping does not count. She also takes her girlfriends with her when she simply goes on a trip or something. Of course, these are some problems that I think, and they may be subjective. I hope the author can give me some advice if I think something is wrong.

I bit my lip to commit suicide after breaking the update🥰🥰🥰I really like your writing style. I used to watch female videos, but now I suddenly realize that your writing is so beautiful.

There are tens of billions in a bank card, even if it is fully arranged, the bank will not care about it, right?

I have seen many similar plots in this book~...~