Marvel's My Hogwarts

It's pretty good, but updates are too slow.

This adds too many things and is a bit complicated.

Emmm, why do I say that the writing is very good, but there are too many things added, it is a bit complicated, and I feel a headache after reading three chapters. I hope you don't add too many things, just add Marvel.

One update before the contract is signed, two updates after the contract is signed, this is the current arrangement~.

This Harry Potter is the protagonist, right?

To be honest, Kingpin was so weakened that Harry in the original book would have been dead long ago.

It feels so confusing, I don't know why

I haven't seen the protagonist for half a month. The protagonist is made into an upgraded version of the White Devil similar to Dumbledore. He has many more scenes than Dumbledore. The other book is called Harry Potter. The protagonist of your book is the backdrop. He occasionally appears in other people's legends. Every time he rarely appears, it doesn't last long. The title of your book might as well be called "The story about me being the protagonist but only appearing as a backdrop in conversations."

Isn't this book about magic? Why is the label Future World/Mecha?!

It's so confusing. It's League of Legends, World of Warcraft, and Harry Potter.

The writing is good, but the characters are too many and complex, and since it is my Hogwarts protagonist, it is too unclear. Multiple protagonists would be more confusing and require more writing skills from the author.

Both of his parents died, he was suppressed for three years to hone his mind, he had supernatural powers, and was saved by an expert at a critical moment. When he entered the academy and started training, he also had a beautiful girl to take care of him. Harry: "Sibberlace is just a ball, he is just a tool. No one understands the real protagonist better than me✋🏻🤟🏻☝🏻."

I read the whole text aloud. It's quite appetizing. Come on, author.

Alas, I quite liked it, but ended up having it cut off like this.

There were two similar books that were cut off before... Well, I guess this one will also have to be cut off.

I seem to have seen similar novels, the name and introduction 🙂