Traveling Through the Water Margin: Choose to Slash Wang Lun at the Beginning!

Compared with the previous book, the author has changed a lot this time. The previous book can be regarded as a dream come true. The story of the dream come true is exciting. We looked at the "natives" in the article from God's perspective and were shocked. After the climax, it became as dull as water. The protagonist was a tool and was criticized by others. I found this book, Water Margin fics are mixed. Chapter 5.6 Is written very well by Sha Tianhong. I like the protagonist this time. The weak scholar carries the spirit of a general. I love it 😍 Looking forward to the following chapters, how to intervene without violating the agreement. Liangshan, the friendship between brothers, the battle between officials and bandits, etc. All require hard work to write, come on ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧ The first Naruto fanfic, the second Water Margin fanfiction, the author's writing style is getting longer, and the vast literary sea, the book is not supervising, and the book friends follow each other 😊

I am an old bookworm, and this is my first time reading the novel Water Margin. Now that I have read it, I will give you some insights. The author's writing style is very good, compact and delicate without losing the process, and his ideas are also wild and wild. Many plots are very interesting in my opinion, but maybe it is just such wild wildness that some places are too loose. I have not read the original work, but Wang Lun can be the leader of a village. I think it is impossible to be a character who was so frightened that he dared not move when he saw Song Yi slashing at him with a knife. Was Wang Lun's death and the aftermath of his death handled a little bit? Due to various reasons, the protagonist revealed the story of 108 Heroes without warning, and even made a Water Margin version of "Three Kingdoms". It was both dramatic and fascinating, especially when he was drunk and talking about heroes... Let me put it bluntly, this plot is full of loopholes. Fortunately, you don't need to use your brain too much to read the novel. But when I read it, I felt slightly uncomfortable. It was like a subtle show off. It's cool to pretend, Song Yi, for fear that others wouldn't know. As readers all know, you, the author, deliberately brought it out to show off to the protagonist. Emm, I can't express my feeling. The author also spent several chapters repeatedly emphasizing this point... Later on, I don't know if Pang's sister is like this in the original work, but the portrayal is not good, and it is a rip-off, which is not pleasing to the eye. The two of them, Jin and Xiao, were obviously in a hurry to save people but still had time to do this and that. There was also a scene about rescuing people, but it was too loose. The plot should be conceived more carefully. When writing historical articles, be more rigorous and write in a broad format. As the saying goes, heroes cherish heroes, so you don't have to be so hasty in recruiting people. Sometimes, once your reputation is out, heroes will come to you. There is no need to collect all 108 of them. If they can't be used by me, then I will kill them. Since he wants to be the leader of Liangshan Village, the protagonist must have the courage, temperament and strength. It would be interesting to follow the template of Boss Cao. The Song Dynasty was a humiliating dynasty, so let's show our blood. If the Song Dynasty can't take care of it, you Song Yi will take care of it; if the Song Dynasty can't kill it, you Song Yi will kill it. History is at our feet. If you are a hero, why not leave your mark in history?

The plot of the protagonist giving artificial respiration to Lin Chong's wife should be changed. If you want to accept Lin Chong and continue to develop like this, you will dissuade many people. What do other people in Liangshan think? They don't know what artificial respiration is. Even if they know, at that time, they thought that you had soiled their innocence, that as a leader, you kissed the wife of a subordinate.

What a crap thing, Lei Fa is also out, this book is absolutely cool

Okay, I just saw a single chapter cut. It's a pity, then bless the author,

Is your name true? 😏

Come on, author, I haven't read the Water Margin book for a long time.

Attracted by the super cute girlfriend in the author's pen name

No more new books? ? ? ? It's still a bad idea to take it off the shelves. . . . .

Come on, hope it ends well.

I haven't read it yet, but after looking at the catalog and introduction, I personally feel that doing one thing and choosing a direction should be unknown whether it will lead to success or failure! The reward of the protagonist's golden finger choice should also be unknown. This is interesting, or if you choose a better one, there will be corresponding risks soon, otherwise I really feel that it is not interesting at this time.

How to put it, since you can get the top prize in the Song Dynasty, you should also know that status is very important. You can't be the head of Liangshan and call your subordinates brother. This should be changed, and you can't just say: everyone has their own opinions. Rules are rules and cannot be broken. The boss is the boss. How can a boss call his subordinate brother?

I heard that the author is a young lady? Is it true?

Great author, come on! When will updates be added? All three recommendation votes are given to you!

By the way, is the author's girlfriend really that cute? 😏

Journey to the West has the highlight of cultivating immortality, Red Mansion has the highlight of beauty, and Three Kingdoms has the highlight of famous generals fighting for hegemony. Tell me, what are the highlights of Water Margin?

The beginning is well written, at least the current characters can stand up. The plot is also quite compact. If you stick to it, you should get good results. Come on

I. . . . You. . . Come over here and let me see if the cut is clean. You!

To be honest, I don't have too many poisonous points at the moment. I hope this cute bird girl can continue to do so.

There is a problem, but it's not poisonous. I really think it's pretty good. Come on

Come on, come on, it looks good, it will be on the shelves soon

It was recommended, please write it carefully, it looks good.

It's so interesting to write, please come on, author.

It's gone, it's gone, it's cut, now it's time to serve the queen in the palace

Either a eunuch or a bad guy 😭😭

The book is very good! It's just not enough, come on!

The writing is very good. Keep up the hard work. . . . I'm waiting to see. Code words quickly. The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. . .

The main reason for the bad reviews of the system is that the system tasks are too confusing. Originally, when we first came to the village to establish authority, new rules and regulations were just introduced, but at this time, the protagonist was asked to save people... I have been a volunteer and have personal experience. No matter how good a policy is, as long as it is not adhered to, someone will still do some bad things.