Martial Arts Sects Fighting for Hegemony

I feel like it's well written, but there's a lot of bad intentions in the comment section. . Actually, if you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. There's no need to comment like this. .

Author, I would like to make some suggestions regarding the plot: 1: Don't rush to establish a sect. You can first let the protagonist accumulate experience and reputation. It is best for the protagonist to first understand the court and martial arts forms in this world, and describe the relationship between the court and martial arts, so as to expand the world view, and then establish the sect. 2: After the sect is established, you can focus on describing how the sect operates (such as economic income, etc.). Don't let the chivalry value be omnipotent and determine everything! This is very important! 3: There is no need to have many apprentices, just 3-7. Try to make each apprentice unique, such as different personalities and different martial arts skills (some are good at swords, some are good at boxing, etc.). If possible, you can find an ambitious and utilitarian apprentice for the protagonist and let this apprentice sneak into the court. 4: Make the theme clear, martial arts is martial arts, don't turn it into fantasy halfway!

The protagonist needs to go through a process of change. Not every modern person is born to be a hero and can be domineering and arrogant. The protagonist of this book in modern times is just a kind-hearted and relatively straightforward physical education teacher.

Objectively speaking, the idea is very good, Goldfinger seems to be more reasonable so far, and the writing style is also passable. But I personally feel there are some problems. One is the character creation issue. There is no problem with positive energy, and there is no problem with chivalry, but the protagonist is too emotional - if it is an indigenous young protagonist, it can be tolerated - it gives people the impression that he does not know how to advance or retreat, and does not understand the situation (referring to the part where the protagonist returns to Chengdu for interrogation). This kind of writing can easily give readers the impression of being sharp-tongued and strong-willed on the outside. Such protagonists are often unlikable. Moreover, the protagonist has many secondary speeches (recalling the names of martial arts while practicing martial arts, and the knight must say "how to do it in broad daylight"), which is really confusing. The second problem is the structure. I feel that the author can't tell which plots should be spread out and which plots should be kept as brief as possible. For example, in the interrogation section, where several supporting characters discuss the robbery of the protagonist's escort agency, it can be written freely, but some subsequent things about the Iron-Blooded Changhe Gate can be omitted at all. Because the protagonist does not know what those supporting characters talked about, and assuming that the subsequent plot needs these clues to promote, does the author need to write these clues again (inform the protagonist through the mouths of others)? Assuming that the subsequent plot does not need these clues to advance, then why did the author write these? The third is the issue of details. For example, in ancient times, children called each other by their cousin names, nicknames, or nicknames. What the hell is Xiaoyi? Calling it this way always feels very dramatic - like reading an urban novel. Also, if the protagonist encounters a disaster and returns home, won't the protagonist's sister come out to meet the protagonist? It's really outrageous that the main character insists on seeing her when they have to eat. The appearance of supporting characters also needs to follow basic logic. Furthermore, when the protagonist returns to Chengdu, he is timid about being close to home and has complex thoughts that are difficult to understand, right? With so much energy, do you still have the heart to compete on stage? A good novel must start with details and carefully analyze the logic of the characters' behavior. The fourth issue is the rhythm. First of all, the main plot is unclear. I didn't know what the protagonist wanted to do for a long time. If the main plot is to improve the martial arts level, then doesn't the protagonist plan? Maybe the author is afraid that the golden finger is too big, and the protagonist has a lot of low-level martial arts at the beginning. Shouldn't he give up some low-level martial arts at this time, such as abandoning the stick and sword to focus on boxing, and accumulate chivalry points to exchange for intermediate and high-level martial arts? Shouldn't we brush up on the chivalry points on the way back to Chengdu from Jinya Restaurant (the financial pressure will be reduced)? You all know what kind of behavior can increase chivalry points, but what are you doing if you are still indifferent? Just take a bunch of low-level martial arts disciples? Secondly, returning to Chengdu may be a large part of the main plot. What about the conflict? What about urgency? The protagonist actually competes with his sister-in-law in the street? Does this plot make sense? If you step on your sister-in-law's reputation and rise to the top, will you still do it? It's not that you can't compare, but the most important thing is that it shouldn't be in the street, and you have to consider what significance this plot has in promoting the main plot, and whether it conforms to the logic of the protagonist's behavior. It's been a long time since I've posted a long review. I really like martial arts, so I can't help but be a little verbose. The above is purely my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't comment.

Is it true that no one has written about martial arts? This kind of quality can be recommended.

It's finally finished. I beg the author to return to historical writing and stop writing about martial arts.

For the author's next book, you can refer to the new book "King" with a title similar to the author's last book "The Road to the Mediterranean Overlord", and write an imaginary Western history. His last book "The Road to the Mediterranean" has similar results to the author, and the subject matter is the same. The author's writing style is no worse than him. People are now at the top of the monthly ticket list, and his monthly income is hundreds of thousands. The author has written a Western fantasy history, which is definitely a hit.

I feel that relatively original martial arts like Baihuaquan are better. There is no need to use the martial arts in Jin Yong's novels, and it is not a fanfic of Jin Yong's novels. Martial arts ≠ Jin Yong.

This book is called Sect Fighting. I thought it would be a tyrannical protagonist, but after reading dozens of chapters, I found that the protagonist is just a fool with a strong sense of justice. He thinks about how to be a chivalrous man all day long, and he keeps instilling in several apprentices how to use swords freely and walk in the world. As long as the road is uneven, there will be no peace. No matter whether you can fight or not, you have to step in and get hurt...,, Honestly speaking, readers who like traditional martial arts will not hate this book, but readers who want to read a book that is self-centered and self-centered, and who want to see the protagonist upgrade and kill everyone will probably be disappointed.

The beginning of the book is quite good. I really don't know why so many people are venomous when they see a paragraph that doesn't suit their liking.

The author should write Western fantasy novels, and can continue to write stories about Rome in BC.

Leave it alone, it will poison you to death. Don't read down until you see Chapter 94, where his father and more than 100 bodyguards were found out. It was the female sect leader of the Iron-Blooded Changhe Sect who was sent as bait to be killed. Then something outrageous happened. The protagonist's father was sent to be killed, but he could actually say "I don't blame you" to the person who was the bait. After saying that, he could kneel down and lick the female sect leader in various ways. After reading novels for so many years, I have seen cuckolds explain their forgiveness by saying they have no feelings, but this is the first time I see him being forgiven for killing his father without any special reason.

Damn it, why are you writing martial arts novels like Xin Haiyue 1 😭? Historical novels are obviously written so well, hey! Waiting for half a year in vain. Slipping away.

The author should come back to write history again.

I really didn't expect that an author who has written several books could be so bad at writing and plotting. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I thought the author thought he was an uncle in his forties who had never read online articles and came here to practice writing.

It feels so poisonous, mainly because the protagonist is weak, self-confident, righteous, and nosy; But the protagonist also has an arrogant attitude. It's uncomfortable to watch.

The writing is very good, and I like it as an old bookworm! I hope you stick to it and don't be a eunuch. Write well and accumulate fans. If you write so well, you will definitely be able to get ahead!

I really can't stand it after reading a hundred chapters. To create a sect, you need to register for an official examination. What the hell, it's embarrassing in capital letters. . I feel worse and worse, and I'm not far from entering the palace...

Frankly speaking, I was a little surprised when I found out that the author switched from writing history to writing martial arts. I won't feel disappointed because I also like martial arts novels. Of course, I hope the author can continue to write about history, especially ancient Greece, ancient Rome, and even Mesopotamia (Sumere, Archid, Assyria, Babylon, and Persia). There are really too many dynasties that can be written about the rise and fall of dynasties, and no one has tried to write about the starting point. You don't need to judge too early, just keep your eyes open and see how the author writes this martial arts novel.

Seeing that he accepted his sister as his disciple, Zhang was poisoned and died. It's simply a mess of ethics!

Chapter 3: Don't you think it's weird to call your parents "Mom and Dad" in ancient times?

The story is great, I want to read it! Big cheers for the author

It's very well written, and the author writes according to his own ideas!

The author, I would like to make another suggestion: Since I am writing about the martial arts in the Central Plains, I should try to change some of the wording habits I developed when I was writing about the struggle for hegemony in Western civilization.

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Write slowly. I think it's pretty good. Also ask those who don't like it to leave silently. I don't want to find a book that I can read and then be blocked again. Besides. Whether you like a book or not is a matter of personal taste. Don't just say that people don't read enough.

Very well written! I haven't read a traditional martial arts novel in many years, and this one is very good! Come on!

The writing feels weird, not like an old author at all, like a middle school student's diction.

Chapter 80 draws something that cannot be practiced for the time being. The Xiaoyao police station is not as good as the county police station. I couldn't figure out the nine yin and nine yang, so I just assigned a yin and yang attribute. I want to ride on the popularity of subduing the dragon, but I can't figure out that the original Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms is an introduction to external skills, but it was written so that it doesn't have high internal functions. Sleeping with a woman depends entirely on a combination of circumstances to detoxify the body. If it had been written in the 1980s and 1990s, it might have become popular. By the way, the ending outline escapes, the true eunuch. What are you waiting for? Run quickly.

I don't expect the author to be imaginative or anything like that, I just expect the author to have reasonable logic, reasonable plot, reasonable common sense, and reasonable writing style.