Ultra Wanderer

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The original name of Uranus has been changed to Moranos, thank you for your suggestions 😁😁😁 Originally the name Ulamos was taken from a mythical character, but considering the setting, the first word was changed.

The reference for converting Ultraman into age on earth comes from Tieba... See the picture below for details:

GHurry up, hurry up, do it faster!

I plan to write an original arcana for the protagonist. The arcana that the protagonist transforms into will have some structures like Mebius, such as a timer, and the overall color will be mainly blue, silver and red, like Zero. While retaining the Menbi Cat head, add two inconspicuous small head darts (you can take them off if you don't look carefully). The overall color scheme is like the phoenix form of Mebius. Now I am thinking about what to call it...

I decided to change the name of Original Ao. The following is the plan. Friends passing by can help me see which one is better. 1. Chaos Kaios (The meaning of chaos is related to the following plot) 2. Kreis (taken from Roman mythology) 3. Uranus Uranus If you think of others, you can also mention them, (It feels a bit like crowdfunding to write a book. Anyway, I haven't signed a contract, it's only about 60,000 words, and I can still change it.)

Description of the plot: This Zeta is the Zeta from other timelines, and the wooden fish in Trigari looks like the one in the Membius plot. I think, since we want to 'pay tribute', let Zeta come out first and play together. I feel like I will be a lot happier with him around, because I want to be bushi, after all, I still need to grow. Also, should I write down the combat power level? 🤤 Explanation: The protagonist will go to the world of Zeta later. But the current Zeta has no memory related to the protagonist. My setting is that after changing the original plot, a new parallel world will be generated without affecting the original world.

Kill the pigeon (´-ω-`)

After all, I am still a novice. Other big guys are said to have more than 2,000 words and more than 10 pages. I am the same as them with more than 3,000 words. There is still room for improvement in breaking chapters and so on. It seems that there is still a lot to learn... ... Then the amount of information at the beginning does seem a bit overwhelming, too much... Digging holes for the plot behind you, Every time I write, I think more about scene transitions, because the way the scenes in the original drama are expressed is different from the novel, and when adding them to the story, sometimes I still can't express the effect I want... Well, that's it.

Update quickly, it smells like cat-colored Ogg, but what color is the Ultraman that the protagonist transforms into? Then Mobius doesn't sound very good.

Superman Aguang

Author, the emotional description of each character can be more detailed, and you can study the legend of Tiga

I plan to write Black Trigger, the plot is getting more and more interesting.

The writing skills need to be improved, you can read Ogg and Ultraman Battle Chronicles

Quietly add to bookshelf, dive and wait for updates 🙂

Author, when you write the dialogue, it's best to add who said it, what kind of expression it was said with, etc., Otherwise I won't be able to tell who said it.

Author, the description of fighting should be more detailed, and the description of emotion should also be more detailed, it would be better.

The author is great, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly

I finish coding a chapter every time...

Just the bond will kill one generation after another

The author is great. How many chapters are updated a day is too little.