Live Broadcast: Taoist Priest, Stop Pretending, You Are Just Cultivating Immortality

When I saw that the protagonist had a hairstyle called Hejie, I didn't want to see it anymore 😭. It's such a pity. I didn't feel anything about it at first glance.

The last live PK in Chapter 24 directly persuaded him to quit. . . . . . Pretending to be inexplicable. . .

Author, please don't mix science and exercises. To be honest, I wanted to give up the book when I saw the name of this chapter.

Taoist priests work hard every day, from morning to night, just like a net monkey

Another opening is that of Infinite Heavenly Lord. Infinite Heavenly Lord is purely a misinterpretation of words and the origin of the word Infinite Heavenly Lord is Buddhism. Taoist priests belong to the Sanqing Dynasty and chant "Supreme Taiyi to save the suffering" and "Supreme Taiyi to save the suffering"

Jumping from 300 meters is not just a viral sensation on the Internet, but it will really alarm the country. Whether it is research or reproduction, think about it, every People's Liberation Army can jump from 300 meters at will, which is better than Captain America.

Nowadays, the online literature is almost rotten. There are not many that can be read. There are a lot of studio articles.

What is the rhythm of your book? There are a few chapters you can read at once, and some are written like snake skin. Do you want to write a fairy tale style or a martial arts style? I am already a cultivator, so I have to use my internal strength. For example, when I went to see my uncle carrying rice, flour, grain and oil, I was still sweating. I still used my internal strength. Aren't you a cultivator? If you don't tell me why you're sweating, where's your magic? When it comes to science, look at what you wrote earlier. What points in the live broadcast revealed science? Did you write this from Flowing Water Studio?

After seeing the latest chapter, let's talk briefly. From the first chapter, the protagonist did not know anything about martial arts before winning the lottery. All abilities are obtained through lottery. If it is a normal modern society, this is normal. However, the author's style of painting the entire world is different, and the logic of the world in the entire book has completely collapsed. First of all, there are many sword practitioners from the Wudang sect, and there are also those who have developed sword skills. If sword energy can be developed through normal practice, it means that the path to practice is open, and there will definitely be a large number of martial arts passed down from among the people. There is no debate about whether Chuanwu can be used for fighting, and it is impossible for someone to practice Taekwondo for several years to become a Jianqi anchor. Second, since martial arts practice is smooth, and the protagonist keeps saying that the master is very powerful, but the master didn't teach him anything, this is too strange.        ，，，， However, the Kunlun Secret Realm suddenly appeared. Your master is a cultivator, and it seems that there are many cultivators. Again, your master is so powerful, why didn't he teach you anything? What's the point of your system? Can't you just let your master teach you and that's it? Fourth, the whole world has changed its style twice in a row. I am really afraid that you will suddenly create werewolves, vampires, the Western Holy See, etc. It seems to me, the author, that there was no outline at all before writing the book. I just wrote whatever I thought of, and just ignored the hot spots when they came up, causing the whole book to be a complete mess.

The latest news is that the country has officially issued regulations that strictly prohibit the use of the Internet to spread religion and conduct online religious fundraising without permission.

This is a Taoist priest 😒. Let's not talk about the morning and evening classes. He has to offer incense every day.

This introduction is poisonous. A three-hundred-meter ladder? Arctic fox? Has a Taoist temple opened in Siberia?

Jumping from 300 meters? Are you sure you are climbing the ladder and not cultivating immortality?

You are crazy about money. You charge for more than 30 chapters. You are really awesome.

Liar, nothing like that purple-robed heavenly master on Kuaishou who went down the mountain to marry a wife

I just want to say, what the hell did I write? It makes me laugh to death, this is also a book

Um, I suggest the author check the information carefully. The main plot of your novel is to spread Taoist culture and then be rewarded and become an immortal. It does not even comply with many Taoist regulations. The description of Taoist robes at the beginning is wrong. Taoist clothing has strict regulations and other symbolic meanings. Especially the protagonist is a professional Taoist priest. This is very dramatic. Otherwise, the setting is a live broadcast of cultivating immortals in the mountains of the city, and there is no need to forcefully insert Taoism into it.

After reading all the chapters, I found that this book has little to do with Taoist priests. You can just read it as a live broadcaster. All the common live broadcast types are available, and there is nothing wrong with Taoist priests.

Do you broadcast live when you rescue people?

This kind of novel can be written to more than 500 pages, which is enough, and it is enough to force people to read it. Ten years ago, I might have been able to read a few more chapters, and more than 30 chapters were already on the shelves. How dare you?

What's going on with today's online novels? Why are there no character descriptions? Why is there no environmental description? Only the plot is left. Is this a novel? Is it the lack of accumulation of new generation authors? Or have readers changed over time?

To be honest, many authors don't know the true meaning of pretentiousness to attract readers. For example, if you write a live broadcast teaching people to learn martial arts, it is best for the protagonist to be an ordinary person with an ordinary profession, neither a Taoist monk (this is really outdated, you want readers to have a sense of identity, how many readers are Taoist priests?), Nor an orphan and beggar who is infinitely miserable.

When I saw chapter 20, I had a feeling that the author would definitely not be able to write it. It was only when I saw the title of chapter 21 that I realized something was wrong. I looked at the time and realized that it was a book written in 21 years, but it is not important. Back to the point, the content of chapter 20 made me feel that the author had no outline at all when writing. He wrote wherever he thought. The writing style was also relatively frivolous and written very casually. The two aspects combined lead to the fact that the author has no control over the subsequent plot of the book. Even the author himself has no idea where the content has gone. The final result is a direct collapse.

A proper studio novel can be written by AI

I listened to most of it on other platforms and spent more than a thousand book coins, all for nothing. I spend my life doing miscellaneous books and wasting my life.

I subscribed for nothing, it's all about dicks and dogs, it's just a sideshow to cultivate immortality, rubbish

In this novel, I sometimes wanted to write something funny, but it ended up being embarrassing.

Brothers, run, Yue Geng Beast! ! !

I talk too much when I'm confronting people, especially if I can't speak. I'm really speechless.

There is nothing interesting about it, just pretend to be live broadcast, and then one or two chapters are filled with barrage comments. No plot at all