Everyone Online: the Age of Lords

The subject matter is interesting. It's difficult to write about hegemony. It's best to write about hegemony in a way that's not so white. If it's too white, it will have a certain impact.

Zhang Liao must be at least a legend... After all, he entered the martial arts temple

Brothers, if you have favorite civil servants and generals, you can leave their names on this floor, and I will adopt them into the book (mainly there are too many famous civil servants and generals in Chinese history, so it is difficult to choose. 🤓)

Come on, your writing is much better than mine.

The author makes a recommendation, changing the name of the reborn item to: Tampering with the real parallel line, The effect of use is: rebirth to the anchor point set before death. The anchor point can be set by yourself from the time of traveling through the new world to death. Usage requirements: Get the box before the death time and open it (or kill other people who open the box. "In this case, you must get or destroy the item from that box" ) and deal with the real goal that led to his own death to form a closed timeline, thereby tampering with the truth.

Come on, come on, come on, come on!

I like this kind of game to compete for hegemony, and rebirth to seize the opportunity, and some new things appear. It is best to write more plots related to the previous life.

I read the first two chapters and they were well written. Come on!

Personally, I suggest that the treasure chest should have something like a guardian beast, otherwise a person with no talent or virtue can rise up even if he gets a treasure.

In the ancient Ming Dynasty, it took four months to walk from Guangzhou to Beijing. How many years would it take to expand Kyushu more than ten times? There are no trains and telephones. How can we rule such a large territory? It takes four or five years to transport grain, collect taxes, and walk. It will be 10 years after we return together. I will transport grain to the capital when I am 20 years old. When I return home when I am 30 years old, I find that others eat my food, sleep with my wife, and beat my son. Is this world normal? Playing games makes me stupid

I always feel that something is missing. I just thought about the aborigines and the forces they represent, as well as the foreign lords. They will definitely have a place in the later stage. There are many more races than there are people. It is impossible for three people to kill everyone.

Brother author, I recommend you to read a very old novel, probably called The Princes Struggle for Hegemony in the Future. I think some of its ideas, idea settings, and war descriptions will be helpful to your novel. There are currently a lot of bugs and poisonous points, and the recent content is very soft in terms of perception, and it lacks excitement and plot development. The protagonist's personality is a bit more like a virgin at the moment. The protagonist was the lord of a state in his previous life and still had the goal of blood hatred. Now he looks very childish. The author has written this book well, and I think it should have good grades. The beginning was attractive, but now the presentation of the work is unsatisfactory. The author can share some small settings and ideas with us for discussion. This way you can make fewer mistakes and consolidate some readers. Come on, author. (Ps: Advice from an 8-year-old bookworm)

The outline of the generals was not designed well. Guan Sheng must be a little stronger than Hu Yanzhuo. Hu Yanzhuo fought dozens of rounds with Jin Wushu when he was sixty or seventy years old. In the end, he was hacked to death. At this time, he still had at most 70% of the strength of his prime. Jin Wushu could fight Yue Fei for nearly a hundred rounds before losing. If the peak level is 79, then Yue Fei should be around 80. Think about it, Guan Ling learned his father's sword skills from his uncle.

Is this a eunuch? There has been no update for three days.

I don't know if the author has considered the difference and importance of generals and commanders, because now I don't see the importance of commanding troops. This is a novel about hegemony. It also seems that the main considerations for summoning characters are fame and popularity. Of course, this is a common feature of this type of novel, and this book is not a historical novel. The author's balance and evaluation of the summoned characters are still very good. However, in my personal opinion, regardless of romance, novels, or history, Lu Bu's overall strength and performance are not at the level of an immortal, and he does not have any substantial title. According to the strength positioning of the current generals, I feel that Guan Yu and Dian Wei are relatively legendary, and Zhao Yun should be positioned as a royal guard. Personally, I think that there are many generals in the Three Kingdoms, which is partly due to their popularity, but more importantly, there are no leading figures.

It's hard to bear it. If you raise it once, it will die.

Give the protagonist a hook Talent: Command: The officers under his command are blessed by command, and every 1 point of command points increases the basic attributes by 1%.

Awesome, the investment was indeed right, and it seems that I have a good vision. Are most of the authors writing now and not even depositing their manuscripts?