Narrator Three Kingdoms: Total Collapse

I hope the narration will not bring out my personal feelings

I would like to make a personal comment. I hope the narration won't be too emotional (don't talk too much, just like a task machine), otherwise it will look a bit poisonous. Also, be careful not to collapse the character

I don't know what's so cool about it, exposing all the people's voices nakedly. I can't stand it, everyone has secrets, big or small. Parents, partners, brothers, friends and even children all have their own little secrets. All right! I can't stand it myself.

Author, what you write is not a narration, it should be called a complaint. There is a big difference between the two. To take the simplest one, the narrations in some historical films I have watched are all summaries or transitions. In the middle of the plot, a sentence appears inexplicably, which makes people feel strange. , And how could the narration appear during a famous historical scene? Take the simplest story of the Taoyuan sworn brotherhood. What you wrote is that the narration suddenly jumped out when the Taoyuan sworn brotherhood was formed, and the general narration would only jump out after they had become sworn brothers, similar to "In the XX year of the Eastern Han Dynasty Liu Bei, Guan Yu, and Zhang Fei became sworn friends in Taoyuan, and this was the beginning of the three-man struggle for hegemony." This type of narration is called narration. What you wrote is only two words of "complaint." Maybe my expectations for your book are too high, which made me feel a little bit toxic and I came out to complain, because I saw someone in the comment area said that he was an old bookworm, and said that your book can be a god, so he has such high expectations.

I don't know what to say. Let's just say that the author is playing tricks on us readers. It doesn't work. I feel like the author hit the platform editor with a feint. 😰 After all, your ending is not even a eunuch or a bad ending. It ended so quickly. It flashed my waist. Damn it, it was put on the shelves without a word. It ended in 3 chapters. Let's say it's a money scam. It doesn't count. After all, 3 chapters are not much. It feels like the author's name. Anyway, in one sentence, awesome, no more to say.

Narrator, can you please not be emotional?

If the narrator reminds me like this, all the strategies in the future will be useless. Victory depends entirely on the strength of the troops. People like Zhuge Liang, Guo Jia and Turtle can go home and farm honestly.

The author may not have understood the attractiveness of the Three Kingdoms at all. Your way of writing has completely eliminated all the attractiveness. No wonder you can take daily detoxification

Don't fight for hegemony, the Yellow Turban and Western Han camps, isn't it okay to meet in the canyon? 🤓

Zhao Yun wrote like s? When fighting Zhang Liang, was Zhang Liang so good at Jiangzhi? And the gain effect is 300% so nt? Directly write Zhao Yun as unpleasant.

Too cheap🙂

What's going on with this name? Because Mao was normal in the front, but started to change in the back, and the characters were forcibly changed, that is, Liu Bei was written in the front, and Liu Xuande was written in the back.

I think this novel is okay. Why did you start a new book?