Douluo: Lingtian Peerless

Tell the truth! When I read it earlier, um... It was pretty good. The main character was aloof, except for showing his smile to Bibi Dong, and the rest was just like that. But the heroine you wrote actually has 7.8 Harems, which are obviously not equal to the protagonist's personality. You can read the plot written by the author and what he wrote about the heroine. If you can't stand it anymore, see you soon.

It's so disgusting to watch. Tang San and Tang Hao can't die no matter what, the author can always drag out some people to help Tang San Poseidon's divine light directly increases by ten levels. I'm really speechless. Why can God Shura control the destiny of the mainland? Don't care about other gods? In the end, was it a direct gift to the god? Will Poseidon die immediately?

First, the resources in the world of Douluo Continent are really too rich. It can be seen as a fantasy world where the world's resources have been utilized for a short period of time, rather than a fantasy world where various resources have been over-utilized and have become scarce; Second, the fighting skills of Douluo Continent can be said to be in the novice stage, or in the development stage, and appear to be very rough; Third, regarding luck, Tang San's luck can be said to be unparalleled If the protagonist hadn't awakened the two martial spirits that can dominate and suppress luck, he wouldn't be qualified to fight Tang San. You can imagine how helpless their opponents are for the protagonists in various books who are getting stronger and stronger; Fourth, regarding the background of the world, all people with strong luck are actually chess pieces, and the chess players are always those who are on top. Isn't it the same in reality? Although the country's macro-control will make a large number of people become successful in people's eyes, some people will go bankrupt because of it. Therefore, the people who dominate the world will always be those who are superior, and Tang San is no exception. Otherwise, he died in the original work, and he can still be saved?

Personally, I don't like it, so don't criticize it. As far as the current situation of this book is concerned, just choose one of Bibi Donghu Liena as the heroine (or accept both). At most, add Qian Renxue. Others are unnecessary and best not to accept girls. Don't accept girls just for the sake of accepting girls. Otherwise it will become toxic, and given the current situation and the character of the protagonist, it will not develop into a big harem. The protagonist is neither lustful nor philanthropic, and is even a bit indifferent. How can such a character have a harem? If this is the case, it can only be said that the character of the protagonist has collapsed, or the plot has been written incorrectly. Of course, if you force the whole feeling of adversity, I won't say it, but this way it will have a clear feeling of having a harem for the sake of a harem. The protagonist may not have jumped by then, but this book will definitely be considered a trap. I don't know how the book will perform, and I don't know what the impact of writing like this will be. Even if writing like this will become more popular or become more popular, it will not affect him from jumping.

The protagonist is set to be 2 years younger than Tang San, and the pace is too fast. This fast pace feels like following the plot, just one line from the original work. Why not give the protagonist a few more years to lay more foundations and consolidate his background. The pace can be slowed down a little, and some other dungeons can be written, such as research on soul beasts and martial spirits. And since the protagonist wants to unify the continent, it is okay to spend more time developing connections and power. Even if you take over the Wuhun Palace, you still need to cultivate some direct descendants of your own.

Decisive to kill? Laughing, what kind of person can be decisive in killing in the true sense? People who don't have any weaknesses, when they see Yan killing the Blue Silver Emperor, they think that the protagonist will just cut Yan in half, but in the end they just beat him to death? Laughing, is this worthy of being called decisive in killing? Never underestimate your enemy. Who can have too many trump cards? The Blue Silver Emperor can be said to be a very important trump card for the protagonist. After it was destroyed, I thought it would be cut in half, but in the end, it just fainted? In the sofa novels I have read in the past, this kind of person will be beheaded instantly by the protagonist. This is considered the best. The more cruel ones will probably be cut into dozens of pieces.

No matter how hard I fight, I can't kill anyone. To be honest, it's boring.

Qian Renxueduo really didn't ask you to write it like this. The protagonist clearly knows that all this is not cherished. If a mother-daughter apprentice takes in all the three beauties of Wuhun Palace, there won't be so many things. It's a pity that Jin E Douluo and those few worshipers are there. The relationship between mother and daughter is not handled well at first, and then the protagonist knows it clearly but doesn't stop it. Is it so happy in the end?

It's too poisonous, family members, please evacuate immediately. How does the protagonist know about the Ice and Fire Eyes? How does the protagonist know if others don't suspect it? And Bibi Dong is a time traveler. If you tell a story, you will believe it and cry. Many places are unreasonable and a bit poisonous.

Readers who hate Tang San, don't read this. It's really disgusting to arrange opportunities for Tang San even if he can't be beaten to death no matter how hard he fights.

As long as you cheat Tang San, we will be good friends

Many cities in the Wuhun Palace have sub-halls where you can awaken your Wuhun. It feels particularly unreasonable for a child to wander around for a year and go to Wuhun City to awaken.

In the later stage, if there is no lineage that slaughters all the Qianjia, it will be very poisonous.

Qian Renxue😍

Fast-paced and not brainless, it brutally tortures Tang San and kills his master. Singing the death knell for the hypocritical, selfish and double-standard duo...

Qian Renxue

It's already written about the Human Emperor, writing a fan story that goes too far will only make people feel bad, nt, I won't send you goodbye.

This book almost poisoned me to death. Bibi Dong's original book was about destroying the world, but now it's too whitewashed.

Come on, the heroine Qian Renxue and Hu Liena are doing well.

God of Poseidon and God of Shura only paid attention to them in the Killing City and the Vast Sea Cosmic Barrier. Read the original work carefully. Tang San is not worthy of such attention now. There are so many planes, and there will be many more geniuses than him.

Really, the author doesn't know what he thinks, you are smart, hehehe

What about the third or fifth update that the author mentioned before 🤔

I love Bibi Dong the most~ Can you love her more?

Ye Lingling is written as Ye Lenglen😅

There is no Qian Renxue as the heroine. Why is there still a plot about the Angel Ninth Exam? I am convinced. What do you think?

Awakening the soul power of a domain can increase it by 5 levels. Even the swordsmanship is greatly improved. Is this setting reasonable? In the original work, awakening the soul power of a domain does not improve much.

Don't you know if you can't let your guard down at critical moments? You'll easily get scolded this way.

Today's update will be in the evening, around 22:00.

The writing is a bit disgusting, although Douluo fan fiction is like this, but this kind of plot with no emotional line being inexplicably included in the harem is too disgusting. Even a teacher who has been a teacher for so long? The author also said that he wrote this novel based on his own wishes and did not want to please readers. This author is also disgusting. I feel like there is no positive energy after reading it. Just read the free part 😅😰😰

I still like Catwoman and Vixen sleeping with each other, it's so comfortable and their butts are big