Survival in the Forbidden Land: I Can't Hide My Identity as the Sword God

I don't want to say that what I wrote in the front is okay, but the word count in the following is completely misleading. If it's either "words" or "some words" and "it seems like", the words in the following are completely misleading.

Are you kidding me? Attack the city once a day, and each time the monster level increases by one step. The first day is to practice Qi, the second day is to build the foundation, and the third day is to build the golden elixir. Tell me how the protagonist held the savior in the previous life. It is estimated that all the saints will come out in less than a month. The so-called S-level treasure chests are so awesome, but the results are all rubbish.

Stop talking crookedly. The more you look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes.

The more I read, the more something is wrong. The writing on a good subject becomes worse and worse.

Brainless and confused, all three defenses in the first life failed and the country was destroyed long ago. Even if it is immortal, it still only has one-tenth or two-tenth of its combat power. How can you play for ten years? There is also a savior who commits suicide, and the whole article is full of nonsense. I've been talking about making up the numbers.

What kind of thing is it written about? It's a good subject matter, but the more I read it, the more confusing it becomes and I'm confused. . .

What? Is this writing about treating people as fools?

The subject matter is good, and the idea is also good. Fight to protect the country. Unfortunately, the writing style is a bit immature and the expression technique is a bit exaggerated. It is a pity.

First, 😠

Ah, this must be the inspiration from Tomato's brainless article. Tomato is a bunch of brainless people following suit.

You write well, don't worry about them

Personally, I felt offended. There was nothing wrong with it at the beginning, but after just a few chapters, it started to crack. I started going high and went low. I shouldn't say that I just jumped off the building.

Well, generally speaking, the quality is not high. A bit inconsistent with the character. The sword god in the world of cultivating immortals is reborn, maybe for the second time. No matter how young you are, your accumulation should be there, but you can't see it at all.

In the final analysis, he was reborn because he was too useless in his previous life. The male protagonist is very useless.

If you want to see this thing, don't use your brain.

How dare you write this introduction? Millions of people are reading it?

The setting is too brainless. How could ordinary people in the previous life be able to defend such an awesome monster? He also said that the savior died on purpose last time. No one with any brain would say this, okay? There is only one day from choosing the savior to the time the monsters attack the city. Even if he finds the savior in one day and can give him those awesome hot weapons, he still has to know how to use them. How can we move these hot weapons inside? You have to build the city yourself. This kind of setting is better than this one.

Is it the same book I read? Why is it that Home Guard is viewed as a time-travel drama?

There is really no need to set it up like this at the beginning, just select it directly. There are several layers of matryoshka dolls, which is really not that exciting.