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The first game world is well written, but the setting of this reincarnation world is a bit confusing. It is mentioned at the beginning that you ascend after reaching level 10. Shouldn't a normal ascension take the body of the first world with you? Just ascend to the second high-level game world, right? After all, this is a game world. Your reincarnation is just a fresh start. The first account is not dead, so why start again? From your article, players from the Galactic Empire can also enter the game. From the article, their time should be 1:1. Could it be that they also played in the first world for a few years to reach level 10 and then reincarnated? Starting from level 1 again? Isn't this too unreasonable? However, the article is still very well written, and the plug-in is quite powerful, but it is not as perverted as the current system Wen Yidao 999. The real world is also well written. There are no plots where you can't forcefully pretend to be a slap in the face if you don't have the ability. You can eat as much as you can. The protagonist also has self-awareness! , I see that it is generally OK now. Except for the setting of reincarnation, everything is pretty good!

Give the author some advice to try to minimize some real-world conflicts. I have read many books of this type, and I have discovered a pattern, that is, if there are many pressing matters in the real world, they will fail miserably!

Don't look at it. The time difference cannot be brought back by the cultivation level. You need to re-cultivate it.

I'm very disappointed. The first few dozen chapters felt pretty good, but the further you go, the more disappointing you get. There are fewer and fewer player roles in the subsequent chapters, and the game becomes a one-man show for the protagonist in the eyes of readers. The protagonist has the aura of a harem and destroys the Novice Village for the sake of women. It is true that he ruined the meal after dinner. Although there is nothing wrong with the protagonist's personal interests, he would exchange the lives of a bunch of unrelated people for the future of his subordinates and women. But many readers play games and have guilds, which is really disgusting. Players are not the fourth natural disaster. Most of the novice villagers are working hard to move bricks and upgrades, and they are all wage earners. The protagonist goes to stir up trouble in the world, but it turns out that aliens are the invaders who invade the world, and the protagonist is the savior. It is true that he wants to curse people.

The author should read more about Taoist Master Huang Ting, starting from Daoguo.

This book is no different from many books of the same type, but the writing is worse than others. It was mentioned at the beginning that in the first low martial arts world, one can only cultivate to the tenth level of the day after tomorrow, and then one can only choose to ascend to a high martial arts, fantasy, fairy, and knight-like world. You have to stay in the first world for so long and practice those martial arts and martial arts to perfection, but you don't need to add experience points. You even claim to have to experience it yourself, and then return to the real world to practice better. But in fact, he also said in his own book that he gained insights after adding some experience. So why don't you practice knitting? If you gain some insights today by adding some points, you can still practice as usual when you return to the real world. Moreover, when you level up and brush monsters, go to a more advanced world, and use those skills to practice, aren't they better than the skills you use in a low-level world? Don't talk about the advanced world's techniques, you can't understand them. When you go to the high-level world, you won't get such advanced skills. You will only get the basic skills of the high-level world. But the basic skills of the high-level world are better than those of the low-level martial arts world, right? Then you have to stay in this low-martial world for so long. I think after you go to the high-level world, you can stay in the novice village of the high-level world for a long time, but you have to stay in the low-level martial arts world for so long. Of course, this author may not have compiled the outline well. After all, I have seen many chapters saying that there are many book friends in it, and some review authors have participated, which proves that the author is quite responsible. Maybe there are many details that have not been taken care of. The above are my suggestions.

It's cliche. If one map is the highest, you'll have to start over again if you change the map. You'll get tired of reading, but there is a real body in the first place. In addition, other players cannot be like you. Don't worry about lifespan. Others are just playing with lifespan.

Seeing the protagonist's younger brother abandoning him, to be honest, it's easy for him to become a demon or be dragged down by Diti. Huang Ting's book was very well written, but unfortunately, the two consecutive books were both super Fudidai demons, which turned out to be neither popular nor popular. How many people abandoned the book because the protagonist had a younger brother or older brother. . .

If you can't bring back your real-life cultivation, what's the difference between you and re-editing poisonous writings? It can't be popular. You can write invincible writings in reality and use it as a resting place. Or the real world is the strongest world. There are a lot of bosses from ten thousand years and era bosses. You still have to practice hard despite the time difference. You can't bring it back. The contrast is too big and it's too poisonous.

To put it bluntly, why do people hate the Virgin Pig's Feet? Because capital and public knowledge have been feeding the public poisonous chicken soup, encouraging the public to sacrifice and endure hardship, while they themselves enjoy happiness and happiness. Say one thing and do another! Just like the Buddhist brainwashing masses in feudal society endure oppression and suffering and enjoy happiness in the next life! They are all cancer!

It's really a desperate rush. There's a time lag. Before I can use it, I'm just talking.

There are a few things that make it uncomfortable to watch. The first is that each world starts from scratch, and it is uncomfortable to create a game world by yourself. The second is that the protagonist keeps trying not to upgrade, and does not go to higher planes to learn better things, which I did not expect. Generally speaking, the setting of the game world does not match the world travel you want to write...

What novels are there nowadays that have an IQ? It's only written by great gods, and the things written by the author who is obsessed with the street are just beyond the imagination. I think adding some mentally retarded issues to other people's novel world will make a good-looking novel. It's hard to laugh to death. There is nothing wrong with relying on previous experience, there is no innovation at all, the logic is messed up, and you still think your writing is pretty good? It's so funny. You can know 1+1=2, but not 2-1. If you want to imitate the matryoshka doll, change the time, place and characters, and it is a new novel.

If you really can't write it, you can use some mythological novels as a copy. Don't fight for the dragon every time you go to a world. It will make you want to vomit. One or two of the same script is enough. You are the third one. Do you want to finish a book with a routine? Isn't it delicious to cultivate immortality? Doesn't it feel good to be a god? Why do you always want to be an emperor? Could it be that you can still be the God of Haotian in the end? Just have the title of Ziwei Emperor. Cultivate more and stop these messy dragon fights. I'm really pissed off. It started so well before, but now the writing is like shit and I can't fucking hold it in. The author, say it yourself, are you angry?

It's so disgusting, you're married to someone, and you're still having sex with someone else. We've only known each other for a few days.

The protagonist's younger brother has become a direct disciple and someone wants to kill him. It's a bit awkward. The main reason is that the senior brother has already reached the third level of skin training. How can there be competition among several muscle training people!

The second world is really straightforward. Either it is original or it directly enters the world of Uncle Jiu. Even if the world system is used, the plot characters must at least be changed. Just change their names and the rest are the same. Isn't this a weirdo?

Brother again? It can't be the trumpet of Yao Monk Hua Wuque! ! !

The writing is too bad and dry. Although the settings are very good, it's a pity that writing a diary doesn't require any settings. Isn't it enough to be able to record?

This book is imitated from Daoguo, but the imitation is not perfect. From the beginning of Daoguo, as long as one travels through time, the whole person will be integrated into that world. The protagonist of this book always feels a layer apart from the world, which feels a bit fake.

The connection between the main world and the game world is not good, it's a bit messy.

The protagonist said he would not marry a wife, but then he married her again. Can the author please stop letting himself go? Can you be more trustworthy?

The beginning is a bit like that of the demon monk Hua Wuque's "Huang Ting Taoist", and the setting is also a bit similar.

Just read it as an ordinary astronomy, don't think about players or anything, if you look at it this way, the writing will still be okay.

Come on, author... It's very well written. I was so happy to see it. Only when you are happy is you really happy.

I didn't feel anything when I read it. There was something wrong with the description. I kept repeating one thing several times.

I've been writing about games, but where are you in real life? ? ?

Time 1:300 It looked too dramatic, so I gave up.

High EQ, let yourself go, low EQ, no longer a human being

Why does Pig's Knuckle think of attacking in the same way only after someone else has to attack first, just to mix up the word count?