Extremely Skilled Swordsman

Now that it's on the shelves, let's talk about your opinions about this book before it was put on the shelves. There are very few books about DNF that can be written. I would like to express some opinions in the hope that this book can be written better. First of all, the first point that still makes people feel uncomfortable is the position of the protagonist. First of all, the identity is set as a time traveler of unknown origin. In theory, there is no past fetters, and it is possible to join any camp. But the protagonist is extremely awkward in his choice of camp. Being abandoned and forced to join the empire was a helpless move, but the subsequent series of shapings were very strange. He obviously had no strength but was obsessed with anti-empire all day long. He has not been cleansed. He repeatedly described that he had modern people's three views and was not used to the corruption of the empire, but he took the empire's pay, lived in the empire's house and cultivated bonds with the people of the empire as a matter of course. He looked comfortable and had no intention of rebelling. If you really can't stand it, you might as well have gotten some opportunities and run away like the female ghost sword in the game. Even if it is stiffer, it will save you as much discomfort as it does now. Second point, in order to resolve the above-mentioned contradictions, the author chose a way that could not be worse - forcibly lowering the villain pattern, and legitimizing the protagonist's service to the empire through worse comparisons. As a result, Messiah gradually turned into a group that served the interests of small groups from the beginning, caring about the country and the people. In the end, he actually directly proclaimed himself emperor and summoned the devil of the abyss. A low-level rebel turned into a terrorist, and I don't know how the people's support came from in the past. The third point is that neither the male protagonist nor the female protagonist is used for breeding, so it is really not advisable to appear for no reason just to let the protagonist save the beauty or make a fool of herself. The fourth point is that the power growth system of the article is too rigid, everything is to serve the female ghost sword system given by the system. The only few trainings the protagonist has are to satisfy the pre-requisites for learning skills. Once satisfied, he can use them. It's cool to shock people from other worlds with Arad's skills, but just one repetitive highlight cannot support the weight of an entire book, and it can easily leave the protagonist with the impression that he doesn't want to make progress. Those are the only comments I have made so far. Next, some personal suggestions are given. First of all, regarding the issue of camp formation, it is okay if the emperor really exploits the common people for his own selfish desires, but at least let him show some righteousness, such as using his mouth to exaggerate the threats of neighboring countries so that he has to use the power of the whole country to become stronger, and also explain to some extent why this resentful emperor can still have the foundation to rule. Otherwise, it would be difficult for ordinary people to explain why they have to live in this country even if they don't protest. Now that the therapist related to the protagonist has escaped, and the Messiah has also taken jujube pills, I guess it will be the protagonist who shines. If you are not good at writing emotional dramas, then try to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, fight more and chat less. It is best to use more detailed descriptions of action scenes instead of shouting out skill names directly, or to develop your imagination and combine the original skills to come up with some new moves and unexpected uses to surprise readers. And even if you want to express what skills you have used, calling out the female ghost sword's lines when she uses skills is better than calling her name directly. Finally, the difference between writing a novel with a female protagonist and a novel with a male protagonist is not as big as imagined. Even the female protagonist should be more mature. It is completely a stereotype to repeatedly dwell on gender, appearance and body all day long. At least the handsome and sassy queen style of Nv Gui Jian has not been seen in the protagonist so far. On the contrary, the wavering moodiness and unwillingness to endure hardships are not less reflected. What is left is that he can show a straightforward and reckless attitude when facing good-looking women. Can this really take on the responsibility of the protagonist and the title of extremely accomplished? Continue to follow up and subscribe to some chapters for the time being. I hope the author can improve it in subsequent chapters.

As a former DNF player, I personally think this book is very well written. It is a pity that the author failed to finish the book in the end. But there's nothing we can do about it. There are fewer people playing DNF now, and most of the people who come to see it do it because of their feelings. To be honest, I have read all the author's DNF fan novels. I remember when I read the first "Swordsman", I was still in junior high school. Now that I have graduated from college and am working, I can be considered an old reader of the author. I don't know if the author will write DNF fan novels in the future. Alas!

Sir, I would like to give you a suggestion. You can add some elements of the demon world and go to the demon world that Lin Wu has been to. The moon and moon of the Demonic Swordsman made me unforgettable. Ah, why did my Yueyue 😭😭😭😭😭 run away after meeting the scumbag Lin Wu. 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Finished painting! Protagonist image www

The author should reflect on why fewer and fewer people are watching the "Dungeon Series". On the contrary, the first "Swordsman" is the pinnacle. We are not here to see big-breasted women. We want to see a fantasy continent that makes people feel real, can arouse empathy, and can make people cry. Instead of touching breasts every day 🙂

Tonight the pearly color will bloom with the full moon. Tang Dynasty—Zhang E's "Full Moon"

I suggest you write a book about Ghost Swordsman. You don't have to worry about others saying it's irrelevant. Everyone will just accept it. After all, Ghost Swordsman has the largest base. Then the new book can write the story of the protagonist traveling to the continent of Arad as a player. It can be combined with the original story starting from Loland and going all the way up. Everyone will definitely like to read it. For details, you can refer to the setting of Super God Mechanic.

Seriously, the last few chapters have been really outrageous. The protagonist goes on patrol and is Jiaika's enemy. Jiaika wants the protagonist to stay far away from her to prevent herself from being exposed. It is extremely unreasonable to teach her. Could the protagonist be charming? Okay, just think she's soft-hearted. The following is even more outrageous. A character who has only appeared in a few chapters has no emotional foreshadowing. He has not been with the captain for as long. Your teammates take care of you so much. Are you no more educated than Jia Yika? Jiaika is benevolent and benevolent. The protagonist is as good as dead🐴. He also hates his teammates. You just turn your elbows outward like this? The protagonist is charmed? It turns out that Jiayika is a person who gives away tools, sword skills, and opportunities to explode. Is that reasonable? What else is more reasonable than cheating on the protagonist?

The protagonist's IQ has a lot of room for improvement

I can't accept a male changing into a female. I can accept that it was a female in the beginning.

I have some suggestions about the heroine. Don't marry someone else. There are very few people who appreciate literature when you marry someone. Lily is fine, but it's better to have a little loli. However, it is recommended that there be no female protagonist. I haven't watched it yet, but if the main character has a stronger character, there won't be a female lead. To be gentle, just lie to a little loli. Bai Lianhua just goes to lie to men, but of course she won't have a real relationship.

Transgender is not unacceptable, as long as you don't get married, it's fine. The key is that the protagonist is like a retarded person. He is so uncomfortable that he is forcibly demoted. Is this time traveler a fake? My previous life was all in vain. Even if you write according to the 05 version, it will be more comfortable than this.

Over the years, the writing styles of other authors I follow have improved to some extent, but you are the only one who is still standing still, and even feels like he is regressing.

Suddenly I realized that these are a bit too much. If you don't like watching it, don't watch it. What's the point of discriminating against women? I didn't see you scolding Yggdrasil.

While scrolling through the list, I suddenly found that the title of this book was okay. I clicked on it and read the introduction. Oh! Female, sexual transformation. OK! Goodbye, keep brushing

I can't help but cry when I think of the movie I watched all night long. I must try my best! ! !

I don't understand what the protagonist is doing now. It's hard to describe his character and brain. He has no goals and no clear main line. He shouldn't be anti-imperial. After all, he seems to be living quite comfortably in the empire.

I'm the author of The Demonic Swordsman! One of my favorite books ever. I didn't expect that there is a number in the starting point!

The protagonist is like this, I love you so much

The author's path has become narrow. The book about the Ghost Swordsman and the Gun Master was actually pretty good, but it started to go downhill later on. The Priesthood book was okay, but now I really don't want to read it after reading the introduction.

Kwong Re has said before that his next book will probably be about sex change. Why do some people still ask... Is sex change bad? A new viewing experience 🤫

Having watched Demon Swordsman, I have seen some changes First of all, the DNF theme has fewer topics, fewer people play the game, and the audience is constantly shrinking So when it comes to skills, characters, and tasks, it almost needs to be described from scratch, instead of like before, readers will naturally understand it after just a little mention There is a contradiction here, and die-hard fans of DNF will find the description too verbose. If you don't write more, newbies will not understand it For example, the description of Wave Breaker is very difficult. I personally find it difficult to materialize it in the game Secondly, the theme of "game skills causing chaos in ordinary alien worlds", I personally People feel that it is no longer novel, and there are very few high-quality works of this kind It seems that people nowadays are tired of the ability to "destroy heaven and earth", and descriptions of pure power cannot arouse the inner fluctuations of readers Finally, the characters The character of the protagonist of the Demon Swordsman has admirable loyalty and is quite distinctive. On the one hand, a good book has a good plot, and outstanding characters must also account for a part The author has a deep understanding of DNF. These are very useful materials, as long as It is possible, the method of use is a bit simple Let me just imagine, a certain city guard said: "Did you see the cow with the big top? Three years ago, he was robbing the forest of Graca... No, this was just released last year..."

Gods and ghosts are really at their peak.

The boss of Guangre has finally opened a new book, and with tears in his eyes, he just happened to be re-reading Swordsman of the Demons and Demons this week!

So far, my senses look good, and I'm not embarrassed because I'm the heroine.

Do I have to write about a certain profession? Couldn't we write about the protagonist becoming a certain NPC, or the monster lord of the dungeon, for example, traveling through time to become a sealed bone BOOS, traveling into a pineapple cube, writing about the journey of the king and his guardian knight, etc. There are also ice zombies and headless knights. In fact, being reborn as the magic sword Apophis is also quite attractive.

A ten-year-old fan came uninvited and finally returned to the tainted milk powder series again, which made me cry.

It is recommended to understand Chapters 166~168 before reading the book. You shouldn't risk your life for a girl you haven't met yet. The protagonist is a lustful and silly virgin.

I abandoned this book before I saw it on the shelves. The reward money can be regarded as a supplementary vote for the ghost swordsman back then. I didn't expect it to get worse the more I wrote. If you don't seek progress, it's not bad to at least stay the same.

Read every dnf related book 😁, please improve it