Nostalgia: Starting from the Siheyuan

I got the era and background wrong and still wrote it

There is a problem with the plot. Pregnancy before marriage was not allowed at all in that era, let alone Beijing. Not only could you not get a household registration, but you would be paraded through the streets if you were found out.

It was still a great work in the early stages, but it became miserable later on. The timeline was messed up, several heroines were gone, and the jump was too fast, so I couldn't recover.

Everything else is pretty good, but the timeline is too confusing

The most outrageous thing is that Xu Mingming was the third one to come. At that time, both Liu and Yu were confirmed to be pregnant, so Silly Zhu picked up Xu. It turned out that Xu's daughter was already born several months ago, but Liu and Yu hadn't given birth yet. It was so weird.

I have read N books about courtyard houses, and none of them are based on modern thinking. They are all compromises without any independent thinking! Although that era has its contemporary characteristics, if a modern person traveled back in time and still felt offended, why would you write this? Wouldn't it be better if I just watch TV?

You didn't even understand the timeline, so you just wrote history. I'm speechless. In the 1960s, did you engage in small business and buy a facade house?

Silly Zhu was tricked voluntarily, but you couldn't get rid of it unwillingly. You might as well be the original protagonist and write a stupid story.

The author should find a class. Really, what the hell did you write? It's frustrating enough to watch a TV series, but it's even more frustrating to write a fanfic.

The author doesn't know anything about history, so he dared to resign and go into business in the 1960s. At that time, it was a small teahouse, a public-private partnership, and the policy was that he was not allowed to go it alone, even if it was to open a breakfast shop. If you do it yourself, you have to do it secretly. Once you are reported, you will go to jail.

I have read so many Siheyuan, and this is the most poisonous one I have ever read.

I really don't know what I'm writing about. During those turbulent ten years, I was full of speculation, buying several houses and storefronts, and raising three women. We will see more trends later. And there is no such thing as a system, so my head has been lost countless times. Also, when did electronic watches enter China? Did you go south to look for business opportunities? Was there any business for you at that time?

This protagonist is a loser, right? Even after being scolded by Jia Zhang, he couldn't even reply. He's a loser.

The writing is quite interesting, but the timeline is too confusing. Mrs. Long is still alive, Jia Gen has not grown up yet, the little bastard is not dead yet, and the educated youth will only go to the countryside and not return to the city. At this time, it is illegal to sell things privately, and the public-private partnership will not allow private individuals to open shops, let alone go to sea.

When will there be a function to block works?

No, where are the children of Liu Lan and Yu Haitang? Why did you write about Xu Huizhen?

The protagonist is cowardly and constantly expresses emotions, and is more like a fool than Sha Zhu.

The timeline is wrong, and I opened my own factory in a special period, alas,,,,

What else would the reincarnated He Yuzhu do if he didn't move out of Qinman Siheyuan quickly? He had to leave here no matter what, otherwise sooner or later the pill would

Take the 1960s and write it as the 1990s. It's really poisonous.

Yan Jiecheng: He Baiwan (Director He) I want to open a small restaurant, and you will be the chef. It will benefit you, so don't know what is good and what is bad. The author can write such a plot.

This time traveler is even more stupid than the original Silly Pillar. He seems to be written in a shrewd way, and his behavior and actions have the air of a second-rate fool.

Since ancient times, comments have produced talents. Reading comments is better than reading books. I felt depressed after reading the author's book, but I got better again after reading the reviews. Thank you guys in the comment section for saving me.

It's frustrating and silly, too depressing to watch.

The timeline is disordered, the story cannot be connected, and the chapters are confusing I will finish this book until I am poisoned to death.

Awesome, it's pure garbage. You have to write about a conversation with Qin Huairu before you can write about him. If you don't want to ignore people and cut off the relationship, it's easy to write garbage every day. You can also write a lot

2B works, no brainers, the sentences are quite literary.

I have suffered from cerebral thrombosis for many years and cannot write this text.

What kind of dog competition stuff are you writing about? I have read hundreds of Siheyuan, and this book ranks among the top three in terms of disgustingness.

It's a hodgepodge of the 6780s