This Trainer Is Just a Little Too Strong

The author's writing skills are really poor. Let's count a few problems with this book. 1. The word count is too low. The data must be written out in full in each chapter. You just released the data of this elf in the previous chapter or two. Why do you still release it? Do you think the readers are all Alzheimer's? Can't you just put a few ellipses and write out the new skills or level changes? 2. The writing is so poor that it barely portrays the protagonist himself. My current impression of the protagonist is that of a gold-fingered tool man, not to mention the supporting characters. None of them are worth watching. They are all tool men who praise the protagonist. The only help the protagonist can give to his teammates is to give Liu Bin a few evolution stones, and all the protagonist's initial teammates have withdrawn from the environment. 3. The battle writing is really bad, as if you are watching a turn-based Pokémon battle simulator, or a text version. The protagonist's Pokémon has so many specialization skills, so just fight those few. In the early stage, every fight is about iron walls, slamming, and rock blockades. I can memorize the routines, and you are fighting against the back of a meat pigeon. 4. The routine is too old, and the routine of pretending to slap people in the face is like when Internet literature first appeared 20 or 30 years ago. High emotional intelligence was the Renaissance. Before the fight started, it was really awkward to say "You can't beat me, otherwise I am the strongest," and the dialogue between the characters was also very awkward. Jiang Hao stood on the player's seat and said: "It seems that my prediction was not wrong, so I said we will face each other in the end." "I have never been wrong in my predictions since I was a child." Jiang Jing said curiously: Oh, really? " "How about making a prediction for this game? " Jiang Hao said confidently: "My prediction for this final is that I will win and you will lose! " Jiang Jing laughed after hearing this: "It seems that the only time your prediction was wrong was today. " Jiang Hao shook his head and affirmed: "No. " "I believe many people think you will win. " "Because you created a miracle yesterday by defeating eight elves with three elves. " "It will still be the case today, but it is a pity. " "I am different from them. You have never fought against a dragon trainer. " "Today I will let you understand what a dragon trainer is. " Is it awkward to read the original text of this chapter? Everyone should say these words before starting the game. 4. Setting issues, I have been changing the settings and patching myself. For example, in the beginning of the game, each person played once, but the teammate assigned to the protagonist, Terra University, changed to an arena system so that the protagonist can lead them Damn, because of the importance of resources to trainers, people with money in their families have trained elves in advance, but it turns out that the elves raised four or five years in advance are only one or two levels higher. 6. In order to weaken the protagonist and prevent him from going to a good school, this is what most people criticize, giving up the emperor just because the signing fee promised by Xiamen University is high. I don't mean to insult anyone. I don't know if the author went to university. If you graduate from university, you will find that platform is really important. People will value you more only if you are on a better platform. And you are the protagonist. As long as you have the ability, Xiamen University can give you everything that Xiamen University cannot. Are you afraid that the school will not train you if you have the strength? 7. In terms of cultivating elves, the upgrade and evolution of elves are completely numerical. Now that the protagonist lineup is close to level 50, how can the new elves catch up with the level difference? If the protagonist is like this, your future opponents will only play 3v3. Is there any need to cultivate new elves? , Everyone can play the game with three elves. 8. Goldfinger, the protagonist's plug-in is to improve the talents and levels of the elves. Now what's the point? I don't see the use of the talents. The skills are all specializations, and you don't need them. You only use a few skills every time you fight. It's said that talents are easy to level up, but I don't see it. Isn't it all upgraded by Goldfinger? Everyone the protagonist beats is level-crushed. Goldfinger can change a characteristic or something in the early stage, but it will be useless in the later stage. 9. The last and most important thing is that the author does not correct it at all. It's not that no one raised the issue. Many people said it in the comment area. For plot issues, forget it if you don't change them. Maybe your author has an outline. Can the data issues be revised? I've posted a post about simplifying the data issues before. At that time, an operations officer asked everyone to give feedback to the author, and I hope everyone can give the author more opinions. I thought it was good at the time, and I can listen to everyone's opinions. Maybe now. It's been almost a month, and nothing has changed. Really nb. The operation officer said that the author's last book was a stand-alone book. Is this book still planned to be a stand-alone book? Let's leave it at that. I hope that the author will go back and read the book he has written twice more and correct any typos. If it's okay, check the comment area and see what the readers have to say. It won't do you any harm.

Don't write me as a command trainer or an author. An elf trainer trains, cultivates, and modifies elves. When fighting, he uses an outsider or a look to remind him when the battle is unfavorable. He also concisely points out inappropriate battles and arrangements for coordination when there are too many elves. Then after the battle, he summarizes and points out inappropriate battles, and then conducts elf training to overcome difficulties, instead of shouting out skills to make the elves move. There is a strong flavor of game animation, giving people the impression that he is an elf commander.

The reason for not conquering Bangira is that he is in a heavy position with Boss Cordora. You don't have any tactics in this book. In the battle, you go up one by one and replace the next one if you die. There is not even much written about attribute restraint. Mega elves directly jump to level three to crush those without mega. In the later stage, elves that cannot be mega will have no effect. The protagonist can even have more than 6 mega elves at once, so why not all mega elves?

I still think it's too outrageous to write about talents in elves, and there aren't many elf novels that are really popular right now that write about talents. The elves themselves are representatives of miracles, and the inherent meaning does not mean what they originally expressed.

With a few megas at hand, even the kind of Lese who treats elves as tools and blames the elves for losing can also get mega. What about bonds? In co-writing, the protagonist needs to be bonded to become mega, but the others are free to do so?

After entering Dragon Nest, you chose Yaya? Really awesome! Say goodbye to this

The author lacks knowledge about elves. He didn't use a lot of interesting knowledge and just pushed the rhythm without thinking. It's not that the elf writing is not popular, but the writing is really stretched. He didn't pay attention to the information about the elf world and just wrote to make up the word count. To be honest, the protagonist is really weak. He wins every time just because the author used a back door. I really can't see how he is better than others.

If you like reading cool articles, read it. If you like Pokémon, please listen to my friend's advice and stop reading this book. It has changed a lot of settings and made many mistakes that will raise your blood pressure. I won't say anything else, it's just an urban cool article wrapped in Pokémon skin. I'll withdraw it first.

I have never understood how a high school that is ranked among the top 16 in the country is called a trash school locally, and there are three schools in the city that are better than the one the protagonist attends. There are three top eight schools in the country and one top 16 school in the country? They are not that powerful in Beijing, Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen, right?

What to say about this book? All I can say now is that the author should play the Pokmon game first, or go to some theme websites to learn about the Pokémon's moves and characteristics before writing this book. A pet that is pure physical attack and human shield has suddenly become a special attack pet. You always use that light. Don't you know that there are earthquakes, sharp stone attacks... These physical skills with a long range? I won't explain why good features turn into rubbish. It's speechless. Especially in today's update, it's surprising that Jujin's slam hit a ghost-type mini-Q. Author, if you don't know how to write about combat, you'd better not write a general summary. You always like to use other types of impact attacks that are not of your own type. Old iron, you are a steel type, so you are not ordinary!