Red Mansion Young Master Lian

The writing style of this book is acceptable from the beginning, the storyline is also interesting, and the arrangement of the early plot is not procrastinating and is attractive. The problems came after it was officially released: first, the whole story is almost a straightforward narrative in the third person, and it will be difficult to get into the drama after reading too much; second, as a fan of Red Mansions, I am more interested in the love and hatred of Red Mansions itself, but the plot of Going to Jiangnan is too out of the ordinary, and Red Mansions is dispensable. In order to balance the female characters, the average Red Mansions fans will add some original or so-called historical figures, but this degree is difficult to control, and they will steal the show. If it is just for the sake of revenue, why would you read Red Mansions when there are a lot of excellent starting points? I think the plot from when it was released to meeting Yuanchun is unsatisfactory, and it doesn't outline Xue Baoqin's character. After all, there are too many original characters. Compared with another Jia Lian fanfic from the same period, I personally feel that the plot design of this one has begun to go downhill, and the flavor of the Red Mansion has not been grasped well.

After reading more than ten chapters, I would like to make some comments. The paragraph is too long, please divide it into smaller paragraphs. I don't listen to books now, but the sentence at the end doesn't feel very friendly to those who listen to books.

This book makes the reader's appetite coincide with the first glance. It is actually a fairy grass. Looking at the ups and downs of the plot, the superficial plot is gentle and picturesque, but secretly it is turbulent and the dragon and the tiger are competing. The intensity of the process is rare, and it makes people admire the author's writing power, ideas and even his personality! The ending is so poignant that one can't help but shed tears. It makes readers feel as if they are on the scene and have the heart to see through the mortal world. It is truly unforgettable and unforgettable. It is regarded as a masterpiece!

The writing is okay, but it's too studly, and it's too casual when you meet one person after another.

I feel that Jia She's explanation is far-fetched. As long as he has some ability, he wouldn't have to sell his daughter for money, right? How does this make sense? You really can't even wash him if you want to welcome spring.

Do you accept every woman you meet? ? Is this kind of harem sex still popular now? It was put on the shelves so early, and the writing is verbose.

It seems a bit laborious, there are not many words in one chapter, and half of it is made up of comments and comments.

It's probably a story about a corrupt official's son who, after his parents were sentenced to prison, continued to be corrupt and tried to kill himself, and traveled to the Dream of Red Mansions to continue his corruption and blood-sucking without being sentenced! All souls are sinful, and they are indeed more corrupt when they arrive at the Red Mansion. Thinking about the cycle of cause and effect, this is the accelerator for the demise of the Jia family!

Just one thing, some things really need to be explained. The problem is to explain the whole article and write it as an argumentative essay. Sometimes a plot is watered down for several chapters.

The writing style is refreshing, neither rushed nor slow, and the plots are well connected, making it easy to watch. Moreover, there are no NC operations, and it is not toxic at all. This is a good grass.

Good guy, when I looked at it, they were all fake. They were all good grass and fairy grass. Oh my god, they were all trainees.

The writing style is okay, but there is a problem with the writing method. Red Mansions is about life, so it is best to write more dialogues. The author has written it as expository text, which makes readers feel too tired.

One chapter only has a few thousand words, and I insist that the book pick up a lot of the past content... The writing is not bad, but it feels like cheating on the word count, which makes me a little disgusted, so I will order a chapter every other chapter. After all, your book has made it clear in the previous chapter.

When I first read it, the writing was good, and the criticism of the big-faced baby was also in good taste. It's this golden finger who is both a Tantra and a living Buddha... I can't stand it anymore...

Receive Zhen Yuhuan? Is it because Wang Xifeng and Sister Lin will not die quickly enough in the future? She is a werewolf in the harem fight. As a protagonist with cheats, is it necessary to really care about the so-called resources of the Zhen family? Military power is king...

You're already dressed as Jia Lian, so what's the point of using the entire system? Aren't you wearing red clothes just to pick up girls? Can't you pick up girls without using systematic exercises? Jia Lian is also very good at picking up girls. Once your system of skills comes out, what else is there to watch? When he's strong, he's nothing to look at. When he's weak, he becomes trash. He's useless no matter what.

Please spread the word more. There are many people who like Red Mansion. This book is not abusive, so it will definitely be popular.

The book is good, but I can't stand it. At the beginning, the Dragon Elephant's golden body is invulnerable to fire and water. It would be a pity if you didn't find out about it from the military.

Running account! The characters all have their own characteristics, and the dialogue is perfunctory!

Where did the title of Minister of Industry come from? It makes sense to have the title of doctor in vain. This is an honorary position for Gaen. How can it be possible that he is actually the minister of the Ministry of Staff? Jia Lian is a member of the Rongguo Kingdom and a martial artist. In addition, what happened if Jia's mother did not agree with Jia Zheng's move out of Rongxi Hall? In the past, it was Jia Zheng and Jia She who were useless. No one paid attention to them, so you can do whatever you want. Now Jia Lian attracts attention. If your family is still like this, aren't you looking for help? Jia's mother was the key figure who kept the Rongguo Mansion intact after Jia Daishan's death. She could see the dangerous situation of the Jia family, but she no longer had the determination to stand up again. Now that Jia Lian has risen, the situation is different. Many books treat this old lady as a fool. How is that possible?

After reading Chapter 27, I feel that the soup is clear and watery. No wonder the introduction of my Shanhonglou label has never recommended it to me. It feels like drinking boiled water.

At present, the structure of this book is not obvious yet, but the writing style is quite good, keep up the good work.

The writing style is good, but it's really too wordy. Half of one chapter is narration and explanation. We readers are really not that stupid. You need to explain everything to us in detail. It's really tiring and makes us feel like fools. You force us to listen to your analysis of the plot.

I don't understand. I don't understand. I don't understand. I feel very shocked.

A well-behaved Red Mansions novel The disadvantage is that the beginning and end of each article are pretentious about literary youth Some chapters are interspersed with some unconscious descriptions of literary youth Others are good Worth reading

Yesterday's photo was harmonized again. Why don't we create a group?

65-Year-old Fu Youde returned to Yingtian and immediately sentenced him to death. Zhu Yuanzhang: The golden cup drinks with you, and the sharp knife will not show mercy Yes Interesting Talk 04-19 14:07:07 In 1392, Fu Youde wrote to Zhu Yuanzhang, requesting him to reward him with thousands of acres of fertile land in Huaiyuan, Anhui. After receiving the memorial, Zhu Yuanzhang became furious and scolded Fu Youde: "The salary and rewards given to you are already quite a lot, why do you still occupy people's fields? What are your intentions?" Subsequently, Zhu Yuanzhang transferred Fu Youde away from Yingtian and sent him to the north to train troops. Even if it were seen by an ordinary citizen, Zhu Yuanzhang's actions were all deliberately protecting the greedy Fu Youde. However, two years later, Fu Youde was hastily transferred to Huitian and sentenced to death immediately. So, why did Zhu Yuanzhang rush to death Fu Youde? Is his death related to the Lan Yu case that affected thousands of people? Why did this founding general whose bravery was second only to Chang Yuchun have to die?  Fu Youde, who "surrendered to his master four times" Fu Youde is a subordinate of Xiao Ming Wang Han Lin'er. In 1351, after Han Shantong was defeated and killed, his son Han Lin'er was supported by Liu Futong and others and became the "Dragon and Phoenix" of Jianyuan. Han Lin'er's general Li Xixi recruited troops from all over the country and brought Fu Youde, who was suffering from hunger and cold, into the military camp in northern Anhui. In the military camp, it was difficult for Fu Youde, who was inconspicuous in all aspects, to gain the favor of senior generals. After following Li Xixi for six years, Fu Youde was never reused. Apart from participating in many failed battles, he made no achievements. After Chahan Timur defeated Han Lin'er, Li Xixi's troops, who were responsible for breaking up the rear, also suffered heavy casualties and had to move to Sichuan to avoid Yuan soldiers' attack. At that time, Fu Youde followed Li Xixi to Shu and joined Ming Yuzhen under Xu Shouhui. Although they were both rebels in the late Yuan Dynasty, Xu Shouhui and Han Lin'er did not belong to the same system. Therefore, Li Xixi and Fu Youde have changed their families. However, Fu Youde's characteristic of not being reused is more obvious in Ming Yuzhen. Furious, Fu Youde quietly abandoned Ming Yuzhen and took refuge with Chen Youliang. Chen Youliang and Ming Yuzhen were under Xu Shouhui's command. Fu Youde's move was not criticized by Ming Yuzhen. However, after Chen Youliang killed Xu Shouhui and usurped power to establish himself, Fu Youde and Ding Pulang defected to Zhu Yuanzhang. In just a few years, Fu Youde first defected to Han Liner's rival Ming Yuzhen, and then to Ming Yuzhen's mortal enemy Chen Youliang, and finally transformed from Chen Youliang's subordinate to Zhu Yuanzhang's general. Even though Fu Youde once lamented in public that Zhu Yuanzhang was his true master, Zhu Yuanzhang, who had always been suspicious, must have had his own considerations.  Outstanding Contributions In 1363, Zhu Yuanzhang and Chen Youliang staged the Battle of Poyang Lake. At that time, Fu Youde followed Chang Yuchun in a canoe and fought fiercely in front of Chen Youliang. He was hit by several arrows, but he still moved forward bravely. Xiao Jiang's true colors were undoubtedly exposed. In the subsequent battle to attack Wuchang, Fu Youde led only a hundred men, fought from left to right, and captured Gaoguan Mountain, making great contributions to Zhu Yuanzhang's defeat of Chen Youliang's son Chen Li. After this war, Fu Youde was greatly favored by Chang Yuchun. Among the generals under Chang Yuchun's command, no one could surpass Fu Youde in terms of bravery and prowess. At that time, Zhu Yuanzhang had two generals with completely different fighting styles: Xu Da and Chang Yuchun. However, no matter what kind of battle the two men participate in, they will always name Fu Youde as the forward. It can be seen that in their hearts, Fu Youde is a well-deserved candidate for the fierce general. In 1366, Fu Youde followed Xu Da to conquer Zhang Shicheng. At that time, Zhang Shicheng had plenty of troops, especially thousands of warships. However, he was defeated by Fu Youde in the first battle, leaving nearly a thousand ships behind. Because Fu Youde made outstanding contributions in the battle to put down Zhang Shicheng, he began to join Zhu Yuanzhang's core generals.  In addition to water combat, Fu Youde is also very good at land combat. During the Northern Expedition to the Yuan Dynasty, Fu Youde served as a vanguard officer. He was invincible and invincible. He swept away the Yuan Dynasty's forces south of the Great Wall and almost killed Wang Baobao, a famous general in the late Yuan Dynasty. While heading to Shu to conquer Ming Yuzhen's son Mingsheng, Fu Youde moved south from Shaanxi and captured the mountain city of Chongqing before Tang He, and together with Liao Yongzhong pacified Sichuan. Therefore, in the war to pacify the world in the early Ming Dynasty, Fu Youde made immortal contributions although he rarely held military power. As a result, he was awarded the title of Marquis of Yingchuan, ranked as the 28th founding general in the early Ming Dynasty, and received a piece of iron to avoid death. In 1372, Fu Youde followed Feng Sheng as a vanguard in his expedition to the desert. At that time, Zhu Yuanzhang sent three armies in succession, heading north from Jinlan, Juyongguan and Yanmenguan in Gansu Province. The pioneers of the two armies who "competed" with Fu Youde were Lan Yu and He Wenhui. However, in the end, only Fu Youde achieved great success in seven battles and seven victories, while the other two groups were defeated and fled. When Fu Youde returned from the south, he had outstanding military exploits and conquered Yunnan with Lan Yu and Mu Ying as the head coach for the first time. And after successfully ending the battle, he received another death-free iron coupon. In order to commend his achievements, Zhu Yuanzhang married his daughter Princess Shouchun to his eldest son Fu Zhong, and also asked Zhu Jixi, the eldest son of Jin King Zhu Fan, to marry Fu Youde's daughter, completely pulling him into the royal carriage. Therefore, even though Zhu Yuanzhang, who had always hated officials for squeezing the people, received Fu Youde's request for people's land, he only reprimanded him and did not jail him. Instead, he transferred him to Henan and Shanxi to manage the army.  Fu Youde was sentenced to death However, all changes also happened in 1392. This year, Prince Zhu Biao, who was highly trusted by Zhu Yuanzhang, fell ill and died alone after returning from his inspection in Shaanxi. Zhu Biao's death disrupted all Zhu Yuanzhang's plans. When he selected Zhu Biao's son Zhu Yunwen as the successor to the throne, he had to embark on the path of eliminating dissidents. Less than a year later, the Lan Jade case broke out, with as many as ten thousand people implicated. But when the Lan Yu case came to an end, Fu Youde was not implicated, but remained firmly on the Diaoyutai. Therefore, the Lan Yu case had some impact on him, but not much. The real cause of Fu Youde's tragic death ultimately lay with Zhu Yuanzhang and himself. In the early Ming Dynasty, in order to defend the royal family, Zhu Yuanzhang divided his eight sons into border towns. Among these vassal kings, Jin King Zhu Fan and Yan King Zhu Di are the most intelligent, and they have been fighting against the old Mongolian and Yuan tribes all year round. During Zhu Biao's lifetime, vassal kings from various places did not dare to blatantly claim the position of prince. However, after Zhu Biao's death, the situation changed.  As the legitimate son of Empress Ma, Zhu Fan has the most radical ideas about the position of prince, and his voice is also the highest. More importantly, among the vassal kings from all over the country, Jin Wang Zhu Fan was the strongest, and even suppressed Zhu Di for many years. Therefore, if Zhu Yuanzhang wants to defend Zhu Yunwen's power, he must suppress Zhu Fan. Fu Youde and Zhu Fan are related to each other, and they have always held military power. After Li Wenzhong and Xu Da died of illness one after another, Zhu Yuanzhang once lamented: "In terms of general merit, Fu Youde now ranks first." Moreover, Fu Youde was not as stoic as Tang He. During his lifetime, Tang He gave away all the land rewarded by Zhu Yuanzhang to the local people to gain Zhu Yuanzhang's approval. But Fu Youde went against him. After owning a large amount of fertile land, he was still greedy and demanded thousands of acres of private land. Therefore, once Zhu Yuanzhang died, driven by interests, it was difficult for him to guarantee that Fu Youde would not join Zhu Fan's battle to seize the throne. With the cooperation of Zhu Fan and Fu Youde, Zhu Yunwen had no chance of winning. However, Fu Youde was different from Lan Yu. He mostly participated in the war as a deputy general, and his prestige in the army could not be compared with Lan Yu. Therefore, Zhu Yuanzhang would only guard against him, but never took any serious action against him. It wasn't until the Lan Jade case broke out that Fu Youde, as a thorn in Zhu Yuanzhang's eye, once again sent himself to the gallows. At that time, everyone understood that Zhu Yuanzhang was clearing obstacles for his grandson Zhu Yunwen, and avoided him for fear of not getting there. But Fu Youde just drank and chatted with Lan Yu's old subordinate Dingyuan Marquis Wang Bi. Regardless of whether they mentioned treason in their chat, in Zhu Yuanzhang's eyes, it was already treason.  In 1394, 65-year-old Fu Youde was hurriedly transferred to Huitian by Zhu Yuanzhang and was sentenced to death immediately. The entire family, young and old, was pardoned except for the grandson. Fu Youde's death was a major "unjust case" in the early Ming Dynasty. The culprits responsible for this "unjust case" were Zhu Yuanzhang and Fu Youde. Zhu Yuanzhang's suspicion led him to embark on a crazy killing spree, while Fu Youde's lack of political judgment and insatiable character led him to the gallows. If Tang He were in Fu Youde's position, he would not continue to ask for fertile land. Instead, he would spend all his wealth to show his indifference and ambition. He would not go around venting his frustration. Instead, he would stay behind closed doors and refuse to see any outsiders. He will not continue to control the military after Zhu Biao's death. Instead, he will take the initiative to remove his armor and return to his fields, keeping a distance from Zhu Fan. Zhu Yuanzhang once said: "I will drink from the golden cup with you, but the sharp knife will not spare you." Fu Youde followed him for decades, but he never guessed his thoughts and died unjustly.

The writing is okay, and I'm still reading. The biggest problem is that the paragraphs are too long, which is a big taboo in writing novels. The author went to read books by other new authors, and most of the books at the top were 2-3 lines. The advantage of writing this way is that it doesn't waste the eyes. Readers cannot have the patience to read such long sentences again and again.

Historians' mouths are deceitful—a look at the prosperous times  Grassroots History House 03-16 17:38:15 Already followed Related recommendations  Liu Jixing talks about history Interesting literary and historical articles + Follow  The Meaning of the Road Collect Chinese and foreign essences, show philosophical charm, and analyze the meaning of life! + Follow  Shi Haixieying History is not in the altar, nor in hell, bring all history back to the world + Follow  Cold Weapon Research Institute Eighteen kinds of weapons, proficient in all + Follow  War Chronicles The true story behind the war that can withstand verification + Follow  Favorite History Introducing ancient and modern Chinese and foreign history, peek into the details of the sea of history + Follow  This is war The only professional tactical analysis account on the entire network + Follow  We share the beauty of the moon Share with everyone and create wonderful pictures, texts and videos + Follow  The wind has a long eye Pictures on the left and history on the right, history and geography are indistinguishable + Follow  Shanchuan Literary Society History lecturer and writer association member Welcome to Shanchuan Space, cook wine and discuss history, talk about ancient and modern times + Paying attention to history is like a little girl who is constantly being dressed up. The longer the distance, the more difficult it becomes to distinguish the true from the false. If you want to distinguish between the false and the true, you need a pair of sharp eyes to point to the essence! So who is dressing up history? In addition to the ruthless years, there are also historians who compile history. Official history is taboo for the venerable, while unofficial history is often mixed with personal emotions and intertwined, making it dizzying and difficult to tell the truth from the false! In recent years, various time-travel dramas have emerged one after another. Many friends who are girls at heart have chatted with me and always want to ask if time-travel could be achieved, which era would be the best? And I always answer in a very ignorant way: Just live in the present. If you travel to any time in ancient times, you will never survive more than two episodes!  Some people think, weren't there several prosperous times in ancient times? If you travel to the prosperous times, you can't be wrong, right? Indeed, history always moves forward in the alternation of governance and chaos. Great governance such as Wenjing, Zhenguan, Song Renzong, Ming Renxuan, the prosperous era of Kangxi, Yongzheng and Qianlong, among which the most praised ones are none other than the prosperous era of Renzong of Song Dynasty! There are four general criteria for historians to judge prosperous times: 1. Stable life; 2. Economic prosperity; 3. Cultural prosperity; 4. Population increase. As far as these four points are concerned, the Renzong Dynasty barely meets the requirements, but the living standards of the people at the bottom are not considered! This makes no sense! Historians commented on the prosperous age of Renzong: the world was full of Yongxi, the wilderness was peaceful, scholars and farmers were happy in their work, and the civil and military were loyal and good. But what is the reality? Let me analyze it in detail!  As we all know, the Northern Song Dynasty suffered more defeats than wins in its foreign wars, but even during the Renzong period, known as the prosperous age, the military was in a mess! In 1038 AD, Dangxiang Li Yuanhao proclaimed himself the emperor and founded the country. The country was named Daxia. In order to be recognized by the Song Dynasty, he launched wars one after another! Song Xia fought against Sanchuankou in the first battle, then fought against Shuichuan, and fought in Dingchuan Village three times. What was disappointing was that the Song Dynasty was defeated in three battles, losing dozens of generals, tens of thousands of soldiers, countless grain, grass, horses and baggage, and was even forced to sign an unequal treaty with Xixia! The losses of the war and the annual gifts to Xixia will undoubtedly be passed on to the people! Since the battlefield was on the border between Song and Xia, it naturally did not directly affect many civilians, but it increased the burden on farmers. This is really not what a prosperous era should be like!  As for the economy, in terms of total GDP, the Renzong era did reach its peak, with the highest income reaching 44 million yuan, dozens of times that of the peak period of the Tang Dynasty! However, if the national treasury has money, will people's lives be better? Uncertain! A true wise king knows how to hide wealth from the people, rather than drain it and fish for it! In the Song Dynasty, land annexation was serious and collusion between officials and gentry was rampant. Often, powerful and wealthy households had more land but lighter taxes, while poor people had less land and higher taxes! In an era when emperors and scholar-bureaucrats ruled the world together, the scholar-bureaucrats, as a privileged class, did not have to pay taxes. Here comes the question. The tycoons and scholar-bureaucrats who control most of the society's wealth either pay light taxes or don't pay them at all. So what supports the high GDP? The answer is of course the poor farmers! That's why the literati wrote: "The crawling child, the hunchbacked centenarian. The hungry woman chirps even more, her face is shaggy." You can imagine what a miserable picture this is!  Data show that during the 319 years of the Song Dynasty, there were more than 430 peasant uprisings, the highest number in Chinese history! There were more than 40 times during the Renzong era that was called the prosperous age, which shows that people's lives in the prosperous age were no better than at other times! The most praised thing about Renzong's prosperous period is that famous ministers and capable ministers emerged in large numbers, and literati gathered together, such as Bao Zheng, Han Qi, Fu Bi, Fan Zhongyan, Ouyang Xiu, Yan Shu, etc., As the saying goes, the stars are bright! Politically, the king is wise and the ministers are wise, the whole country is prosperous and peaceful, and the literati feel comfortable reciting poems and writing lyrics! This is of course inseparable from Renzong's generous character and the Song Dynasty's system that valued literature over military affairs! But don't forget that education was not popular at that time. It can be said that educational resources were only popularized in a small area, and the vast majority of poor people were still illiterate! For farmers who still lack adequate food and clothing, what benefits can cultural prosperity bring? Cultural prosperity benefits the privileged class of literati, officials, just like economic prosperity benefits the rich and powerful. It supports everything behind them, and it is always the poor people who pay silently! It can be said that in such a hierarchical society, the more prosperous the upper class is, the more severe the suffering of the lower class people will be! The historian who wrote the book was a member of the privileged class. Naturally, he could only see this ethereal prosperity. How could he push aside the clouds and see the suffering of the people at the bottom? What's more, the aloof Emperor Renzong?  However, one thing needs to be explained. The prosperity of economy and culture has promoted the development of science and technology. The emergence of three of the four major civilizations is not unrelated to this. In addition, water conservancy and farming technology have also been developed, and land output has been improved. This seems to benefit the people, but if you think about it carefully, it is not that simple. The increase in land output directly led to the growth of population, becoming the last standard of the prosperous age described by historians! As the population grows, tax revenue naturally increases. In this way, the burden on families has not been reduced, the suffering of the people remains the same, and the living standards have not been improved! As early as the Chunhua period, the Song Dynasty was only half a century old, and the people were already in a situation where "the rich have fields and the poor have no place to stand"! So Wang Xiaobo raised his arms and shouted: "I am suffering from the inequality between rich and poor, and now it is for you to equalize it." The poor people all responded! A massive peasant uprising did not fail to sound the alarm for the Song court. However, faced with such a serious gap between the rich and the poor, the Song court could not come up with a solution. In addition, the "three redundancies" were becoming increasingly serious, and the Renzong Dynasty was already at a critical moment! Although Fan Zhongyan's reform failed, it won a breathing space and bought time for Wang Anshi's subsequent reform! If not, Shu has no idea whether there will be a Song Dynasty after Renzong! Can such a prosperous age be called a prosperous age? Under the feudal system, prosperity was a prosperous age for the upper class, but it was a disaster for the people at the bottom! How can it be considered a prosperous age if we don't pay attention to people's livelihood! If you want to talk about the prosperous times, let's look at the present day!  Grassroots History House Already followed Author: Grassroots History House Related recommendations  Liu Jixing talks about history Interesting literary and historical articles + Follow  The meaning of the road Collect from both China and foreign countries, gather the best, show the philosophical charm and analyze the meaning of life! + Follow  Shi Haijieying History is neither on the altar nor in hell, bringing all history back to the world + Follow  Cold Weapon Research Institute Eighteen kinds of weapons, proficient in all + Follow  War Chronicles The true story behind the war that can withstand verification + Follow  Favorite history Introducing ancient and modern Chinese and foreign history, peeking into the details of the sea of ​​history + Follow  This is war The only professional tactical analysis account on the entire network + Follow  We have shared the beauty of the moon for thousands of years Share and create wonderful pictures, texts and videos for everyone + Follow  The wind has a long eye The picture on the left is the history on the right, history and geography are indistinguishable + Follow  Shanchuan Literary Society History lecturer and member of the Writers Association Welcome to Shanchuan Space, cook wine and discuss history, talk and laugh about ancient and modern times + Follow

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