I Loaded the Strategy System

I hope the author will make a good outline, and the relationship between the characters and the basics of the characters should be good. The setting of the heroine in the previous book was good, but when Fei Yi was about to appear, the heroine was too active in asking the hero about Fei Yi and showed strong interest and enthusiasm. From the beginning of this paragraph, I felt that this book There is something wrong with the book, and the relationship between the characters later is a little bit wrong. There will definitely be problems when it is written like this. Again, I hope the author can grasp the basics of the characters well and not let the characters make unreasonable actions. Let the readers feel that the characters act based on their own ideas and personalities, rather than puppets controlled by the author with strings.

Morning.

I couldn't speak in the last book, but now I can complain. Why did the author suddenly become a eunuch? !

No more, I cut it too decisively

I said, can the author continue writing the previous book? I think it is very good and there are not many flaws.

I don't really like the male protagonist, but the rest is fine