Entertainment Starts from the Heart

The author writes very well, I love this feeling 😍 but the pace could be slightly sped up. Looking forward to the day when Tang Su knows Su Tang's identity! It must be a single heroine! Come on 👍

This author is not a good person at first glance. The name you picked up 🤔🤔🤔

To my surprise, the plots of the guests in the cabin were very interesting and I liked them very much, but the plot in the studio surprised me. It is the best written in this aspect among the many heart-stirring fan novels I have read.

I really can't understand the logic of the protagonist at the beginning. I exchanged my soul with a stranger and felt good about myself. I had a new life and gave my parents a good son. Don't you think this idea is too selfish? Have you considered what your parents think? For parents, the best thing is for their children to live peacefully. The protagonist's idea of ​​replacing him with an excellent son is ridiculous. The nurturing kindness he has received over the years cannot compare to the glorious future in a different world, and if a stranger repays his nurturing kindness, can he be any more shameless? Isn't this just as ridiculous as the topic of letting clones do the work and enjoy themselves a few years ago? I have no objection to the fact that the protagonist was sent to another world due to force majeure, but it is ridiculous for the protagonist to say that he has found a good son for his parents. He is really upright and upright. A person who originally had no problems was described by the author as being unfaithful and unfilial. It is disgusting and disgusting~

Order one and I will withdraw it after saying a few words. I don't plan to read the three hundred pictures you have now. They are too watery. Listen to my advice. The word water has no eternity. I looked at the catalog and saw only a vast ocean in front of me...

Very well written, with a signal feel. I happen to be consuming Signal 4 recently. So it feels good to look at. Finally, Fang Chen style YYDS, one man and two men also had a good time.

When I saw that Chapter 122 was released, I found that it seemed like only 3 or 4 days had passed? If I continue writing at this speed until the 30th day of my heartbeat, will I have to write 800 or 900 chapters? The writing is good, but the pacing is too slow if you like it well, and the writing is too watery if you like it. Here I recommend the author to read "The Behind-the-scenes Boss of the Entertainment Industry". The heartbeats in it are really well written and impressed me deeply, so I would like to recommend the author to read that book and learn about other people's plot progression rhythms. I am a pure reader, not an advertiser.

Put a cover for the heroine. Is this the avatar I used?

This book should be renamed "Start with Heartbeat, End with Heartbeat", and there is no need for entertainment

The reason for joining the heartbeat chapter in the previous chapter, author, are you serious? I know what you mean is that the male protagonist wants to be more cautious about his relationship. But are you sure that the male protagonist's behavior in the show was prudent? When I saw this, I wanted to call the male protagonist a scumbag. He was happily eating dog food, but what I saw here was just like a scumbag.

It's too watery. The plot of nearly 250 chapters has only progressed for a month. There are also system tasks, and they are always releasing poison.

After reading more than 80 chapters, I don't feel like dog food at the moment The male protagonist has only a hint of thoughts about the female protagonist that he is not even aware of. The performance is still wavering between the two girls. He has gone away from the original idea of ​​a gangster and feels like a scumbag.

Fangchen style, always charming

Suggestions for new authors~ If you have any suggestions for this book, please comment here~

After reading dozens of chapters, I can't let go of Li Shuyao. I feel that Tang Su and Li Shuyao are more suitable for each other. I can't stand it anymore when I think of all the interactions with Su Tang in the following chapters 😂

The behavior of the protagonist in the latest chapter is a bit incomprehensible to me. Why did he go for a walk with Li? Are he really going to cast a net on both sides? There are things you can do if your stomach is full. Li said you were going for a walk and you went? And in front of Tang? This character design is a bit different from the beginning. I don't have any objection to the way you wrote about the harem. It's quite jarring to write about a single female protagonist. I've been following you since you first wrote it. I liked it very much. Now I can't understand it more and more

The writing is good and the characterization is good. But the plot is too slow, too clumsy, the main plot is too slow, and the story is sweet, but I always want to write about the other two female guests. I know you want to skimp on the word count, but it's too dissuasive.

The writing is very good, the IQ of the characters is online, and the image creation is also good. But the progress is too slow, almost 90 chapters have passed, and only 2 episodes of the program have been edited, and the guests have only been getting along with each other for 2 days. It was written in too much detail, which made my eyes tired when I read it, and then I went to browse the table of contents and was very upset. For this suggestion, you can refer to "From Amateur Lover to Entertainment Superstar", although the author is already a eunuch

I quite enjoyed watching it, but the introduction was seriously inconsistent with the content, the sugar index was too low, and it made me uncomfortable to watch. After reading the introduction, I thought it was a glimpse of the kitchen that was anecdotal, and then I fell in love with her or Fang Chenshi at first sight. As a result, I only saw one Chen Yichen. Originally, my relationship with Su Tang was supposed to be so sweet that I twisted like a maggot on the bed, but ended up spending a lot of time talking about getting along with another woman, and then came back with a few love words to try to appease Su Tang's little mood. This didn't make me feel sweet, it just made me feel a little disgusted. Of course, the male protagonist is not with Su Tang yet, so you can give it a try, but I came here to read the book. When I read the introduction and the first few chapters, I had already identified the female protagonist as Su Tang. However, when the second female protagonist appeared, I felt that there was always a third party interfering in my love. I only like the sweet love between two people.

It's a bit outrageous. Why do people from male and female groups come to participate in the show? To be honest, if nothing else, can idols fall in love? Isn't this all given to me before I even debuted?

It's outrageous, it's only been more than ten days since there were more than 200 chapters.

Large customized keyboard delivery novel (dog head)

The watermelon part is so poisonous. One of the employees selling melons, I thought she was the boss? Employee, I am only responsible for sorting out whatever melons you buy. Whether they are good or bad is none of my business... I secretly sell rotten melons to you. There is something wrong with your brain.

It seems that abandoning the book is the right thing. The author should think carefully about it and combine romance drama with entertainment, instead of writing about bullshit keyboards. I skipped reading a lot about keyboards and abandoned the book directly. The romance part is okay except for being too trivial.

If it's a sweet love, you shouldn't write about senior sister

The writing is quite good, especially the front part. In my opinion, it can be said to be a masterpiece, but the water in the back is in the wrong place. The detective cabin in the front should continue to be written, and the water should be directed to the audience who eats dog food, the gamers, or the people who listen to the music, not the keyboard. I can't wait. Although the keyboard is a large chapter, I always skip to read it, and go to the back to read it directly.

The ending is too fast. I can write at least another hundred or two hundred chapters to follow up on engagement, marriage, travel, and a new love variety show.

The writing is very good. Find a job in a factory.

I wrote more than 80 chapters in two days. I don't know how many days it will take to write the next two to three hundred chapters.

It feels too watery. . And the male protagonist is too salty