Lord of the Legions of Azeroth

To be honest, the writing is pretty good, but the fire extinguisher army was so evil 😅 that I didn't feel like reading anymore. I'll wait until the author changes something and come back to read 🤔

Everyone I saw made me want to play games and go to Goldshire and Jerrod's Landing for a walk.

It is indeed different from other Warcraft fans. After writing more than 20 chapters, I didn't see a single heroic character. In some writings, these three popular sisters are almost available. Keep up the good work and see what difference you can make.

I saw a good article on World of Warcraft again, please cheers for the author.

No one thinks that the fake Ashbringer can't kill a bear with one sword, right? No way, no way, if you really meet the orc Dreadlord, don't you just scrape your body and wait for death? I went hunting and took a fake ashes and a bunch of people to chop down a bear for a long time. I laughed to death.

A few suggestions This suggestion is my opinion after reading the author's chapter on level division and the previous chapters 1. I think if you want to write a good fanfic of Warcraft, you should try to grasp the balance between the game and the novel. After all, the protagonist in the novel has traveled to a real world of Azeroth, and it is not reasonable for the various things in the game. The author finally made some corrections based on his own understanding of the phenomena and settings, such as the strongest catapult in the tribe, the 16-grid magic bag, etc. The former is recommended not to appear, and the latter you can change the "grid", which is a very game-like measurement, into cubes. 2. Looking at the title and system settings, you can also see that this book is not the kind of set where great power is attributed to one person. Road, but the setting of a large number of character groups such as legions. Since you plan to write this kind of thing, I actually suggest that you don't divide the levels in such detail. Junior high school, master, grandmaster, hero, legend, hero, demigod. This kind of big fish eats small fish level division should be the characteristics of the writing style of killing monsters and upgrading (that is, the final great power is unified). The purpose is to allow readers to directly understand You will feel the thrill of upgrading the protagonist. Since you have already written about the legion, it is best to write about the vaguer level division. Otherwise, at the end of the writing, high-level characters will fight against each other, and it will easily get lost in the upgrading process of killing monsters. Then the setting of the legion is very accumulated. It is better to have an upgrade system. 3. Economic system! Economic system! Economic system! Let me say important things three times. Although it is difficult to write well (more than 95% of the books at the beginning have no economic system at all, and the value of various items depends entirely on words), but the author does not ask you to write a novel of the type of legion development, but the economic system must not collapse. The era of Warcraft is similar to the Middle Ages, but with the bonus of extraordinary power. You can go to Baidu to look at the economic system of the Western Middle Ages and combine it with your own understanding to modify it

The following is the explanation that I personally think will become a poisonous point or characteristic: First, the dialogue methods of each race in World of Warcraft are different. I have never written Western fantasy before, and I have been looking for a position now. It will gradually get better, so everyone should be merciful first. Secondly, regarding the protagonist's ability, I deliberately set it to be random, because in the World of Warcraft plot, the Holy Light is like magic and can do many things and cannot be trapped by the skills in the game. In addition, the protagonist does not believe in the Holy Light, and he cannot condense the Holy Light himself. His light power is forcibly infused by the module, which is equivalent to installing a source in the body. Whether you drink from this spring water depends on your personal preference. It is possible to learn the corresponding skills in each method.                                                                                                                                   Furthermore, the skills that the protagonist has learned are not only the holy light type, but also other abilities of the melee type. After all, the paladin is also a melee profession, so it is not surprising that he can learn related skills by killing monsters. Third, the protagonist's little niece is a genius magician. Although her settings cannot reach the heights of Jaina, the little girl has her own advantages, and that is the Legion module plug-in, which may even be able to release magic without chanting a spell. (In the whole book, only the uncle and nephew can open this kind of cheat, the others will only enhance it) Fourthly, a complete world cannot only have limited characters in the World of Warcraft plot and game, so I will create some original characters and try to let them have their own little stories. (Careful book lovers can find that there are many small characters in this book that will be found in the game. As for where they are, it's up to you. Maybe they will be rare monsters?) Fifth, there is still the problem of characters. I originally planned to use plot and game characters for the protagonist's elite team of 100 people, but after screening, I found that there were too few people who met the standard. I only found a dozen people on the Alliance side, and even fewer on the Horde side, only a few. (The rest will be filled with potential bosses in the dungeon) Therefore, I urge all book friends to recall their memories and help me introduce teammates suitable for both camps. The condition is that Black Gate appeared 25 years ago, is young, has high talent, and does not affect the main plot. Any race is acceptable. (Because Queen hope summoned the Forgotten to occupy Lordaeron and join the tribe relatively late, there will be no undead in the elite group of the protagonist. Another important reason is that the Four Scarlet Beauties may come. I try not to arrange this kind of reconciliation plot to give the protagonist a headache. Please note that this article does not include a harem) For the time being, this is all the author can think of. If anyone has something unclear, you can mention it in it. I will answer it when I see it. Thank you everyone.

Too little and not enough to watch. Keep it up and watch again. Come on.

Just reading the title, I thought they were part of the Burning Legion, taking over the leadership of President Sa through hard work.

The duel arena should be over soon. You can use brute force to challenge levels. Is it full of garbage? None of them have extraordinary abilities?

Author, hurry up and write, it's not enough to read.

It's my favorite style, come on, I'll give you all the votes.

In addition, no orc who has experienced World War I and World War II has clean hands. The blood of the Draenei and the blood of the Alliance, no matter what evil you commit, you will naturally have to bear what kind of retribution.

Tie Zi, I don't think your legion's name is right, I'm going to kick your ass!

Well written, congratulations to an old World of Warcraft hunter! Can you write more! Not enough!

You are a paladin, and you want to create a dk cover without giving our great lord face.😁😁🤭

It's so embarrassing to write. Have you never played World of Warcraft? I suggest you play it before writing.

It's so white. It's so embarrassing to watch. I really admire this person who wrote the book.

I found an embarrassing thing while checking the information and bragging The 21st year of Black Gate, Mograine just forged the Ashbringer In the summer of 19, you still have one year to witness the birth of the Stratholme copy The 6th year of Black Gate, Mograine touch The corpse obtained the Dark Crystal In 20 years, the knight lords instilled it and obtained the Holy Light Crystal In the past two years, major events have happened frequently, and there is no room for you to grow. You can only avoid the obscene development Please proofread your outline timeline.

. . Warcraft novels are rare, please encourage them.

Makabaka, aba aba!

. . . It updates so diligently, but its popularity is so low.

The protagonist has all three skills. How come he doesn't have any protection skills? How awesome is the anti-rider skill?

Very few people write about Warcraft nowadays. Anyway, support the author. In addition, the author's writing style is a bit immature. Some plots are handled too casually