I'm an Amateur Superstar

Well, after reading Chapter 11, I have some problems. 1. It is song writing. The biggest poisonous point of this genre is writing and singing now because it is illogical. A mid-level song will take at least a week from inspiration to writing lyrics and music. 2. When selecting songs, the author may not directly copy blue and white porcelain, rice fragrance, etc., But he cannot just copy whatever is popular. For example, given the current situation of the protagonist, the author can copy a song called The Ordinary Road, because the ordinary road. In fact, his production level is at the upper-middle level, mainly because of the feeling of the person singing, and he can also write a little bit of pure music. 3. Then there is the matter of being hacked. To be honest, if he is all fabricated and the protagonist has really never done anything, he can call the police directly. After all, the contract has been terminated, and he can ask the police to make a notice. Wouldn't it be better to clear the protagonist? If you are afraid of being banned, arrange for the protagonist to have a rich second-generation friend from a company worth 100 billion, so that the protagonist has resources and can obtain channels through this friend. It is no problem to work alone. 4. Then there is the problem of a song's data. To be honest, without a company, it is impossible for a song to reach the first place on the list, because the first place in this kind of data list is bought with money. Not only that, they also ask the navy to brush the data. For an independent artist without a studio who still has dirty information, it is difficult to reach the top five, let alone the first place. I suggest that it is better to stop at seven or eight.

It's well written. As for some poison points, it doesn't matter to me because of my high poison resistance, but I still want to give the author some suggestions. 1. Don't become omnipotent, otherwise it will be too fake. 2. Don't write about the harem. Although some people like to read it, and some don't care, if you want to write a long story, it is best to write a single, and it is not easy to collapse. (I don't like to read it myself) 3. If the emotional line is not well written, just downplay the emotional line. 4. Updates can be made quickly😏😏

Give me a reward, even though it's only one yuan 😏😏😏

Well... Here we go again! Let me talk about a few points here, well, it can't be counted, it's mainly to satisfy my own selfishness 1. For some hot songs that have their own traffic, it's not that I don't want to write them, but I need to set up a suitable occasion. For example, for example, a large live broadcast platform releases a music creation competition with Chinese characters as the theme. Well, at this time, the protagonist can think of copying a song with rare characters, but how to write it specifically? Well, let me imitate it "Hey, this music composition competition is actually based on Chinese characters." After thinking for a moment, "I can copy a song with rare characters, but the quality of this song... Let's listen to other contestants' creations first." He said and put on the headphones. Ten minutes later, the protagonist slowly took off the headphones and listened to the outside world. The cry of cicadas came from the tree, and the protagonist not only lamented, "For the first time, I thought the cicadas' cries were so beautiful. It turns out that for a song to become popular, in addition to its excellent quality, it can also rely on peers to set it off." 2. In this genre, love songs are often sung in front of ex-girlfriends. It's not that we don't write, but we have to change our thinking. Think about it, under normal circumstances, ex-girlfriends think that the love song sung by the protagonist is for her, and then feel that he is not worthy, or that the toad wants to eat swan meat, but we can change our thinking. As follows "This song should be written for his current girlfriend. It's a pity. If we hadn't broken up at that time, this song should have solved my problem." Hey, do you feel better after seeing this? Well, that's it, it's too long and my hands hurt when I write it.

Thank you so much for so many questions and such great advice. I would also like to share my thoughts on these issues. As the first contract letter I wrote, I found that my words often couldn't keep up with the ideas in my mind, and I really felt the dilemma of being short of words. 1. Regarding the speed of song writing, you raised it very well. I am indeed aware of this problem, so I am also consciously controlling it. The first song was finished in one go. Luther practiced it over and over again that night. The second song "Dislocated Time and Space" was inspired by Luther's reflections on the scene of two lives while sitting in a taxi. Haha, although it is 5 minutes faster than the 15-minute record of Li Zongsheng's song "Across the Ocean to See You". The third song, Stars and Sea, was written and completed in this lifetime as Luther had performed it in a concert in his previous life. Moreover, these songs were all sung by Luther, the music king in his previous life, so they should be very familiar to them. Of course, it seems that I still didn't explain it clearly when I wrote it. I will pay more attention to it in the future. Thank you for reminding me. And I will try my best to slow down the song writing speed. I hope everyone won't scold me for delaying the plot and word count. 2. Regarding song selection, it's really hard to agree on. I made a long song list and listened to it every day, thinking about which plot it could appear in. I can't guarantee that every reader who likes my books will like every song in it, but I can guarantee that every song in it is my favorite. Hee hee, isn't that a bit unreasonable? For example, I once wanted to finish this song. Maybe it was because of some related incidents. I couldn't stop crying every time I listened to it. However, some readers found it indifferent, which bothered me too! Therefore, my original intention is that I will recommend the songs I like to everyone. As for whether readers like it or not, I can't control it. The Ordinary Road is great, but I won't write about it because this song appears so many times in other books! I will avoid this kind of song and hope to present you with songs in the book that are equally good but rarely appear in other books. 3. Regarding being hacked, I wanted to write about it as a conflict in the book for the next period of time. I want to cause the bumpy growth of Luther and don't want him to solve it easily, otherwise he will develop a little too smoothly. As for how to clear his name in the end, having someone around Luther will be the key now. I dare not spoil it, so please forgive me. 4. It's really difficult to get ahead on the leaderboard, so I'll let them climb up slowly. After all, Luther himself can't think too hard! Luther had noticed the importance of publicity and had the idea of ​​setting up a company or studio, but he didn't have the capital or the time. Now Luthor is still adapting to the new world, saving his own funds and connections. If all aspects mature in the end, I will let the song reach the number one convincingly. Thank you very much. You not only pointed out my shortcomings and problems, but also made good suggestions and expanded my thinking. Some of my ideas coincided with each other. Good friends are hard to find and need to be cherished. I don't know how to express my gratitude to you, so I just keep writing and keep writing seriously to express it silently, okay? I look forward to your continued criticism and corrections in the days to come. Thank you in advance! Not much to say, let's go code!

Good guy, the ending was unexpected.

Come on, post a 100,000-word summary. Of course, no matter how good the suggestions are, they are only auxiliary. If a book is to be written well, it still depends on the ink in the author's belly. Besides, I am not actually an old bookworm. I have only been officially exposed to online writing for six years. I am just an ordinary reader. I have also written novels, so I can understand the difficulty of writing. But if To put it bluntly, the suggestions I give are only "what I want to read", so I definitely don't take them seriously. At most, they are just some of my own opinions. Of course, my suggestions also have strong limitations. If you want to truly write good articles, you need to read more, see what other readers like and read, know how to innovate, and hone your writing skills, so that you can truly write good articles.

When you have time, post what needs to be posted and go directly to the topic. 1. Outline, but this outline is relatively simple compared to the general outline. You only need to write the main plot and important branches. However, these events need to be separated by a longer timeline to write about other things. Why not write in detail? Because once you write in detail and one of the steps is wrong or poorly written and you want to correct it, then you need to read and rewrite most of it, which is very troublesome 2. Memes are divided into two types, making meme and making meme. Let's talk about meme first. In fact, meme is easy to say. It only needs to be used at the appropriate time and some not-so-old meme can increase the interest. After all, this kind of book is mainly for entertainment, and then it is to create meme. What does the effect mean? The simplest and most direct thing is to add some catchphrases, habitual actions, etc. To the protagonist. For example "Luther, who do you think can win this boxing match? It must be the black man. Look at that Japanese player who had a good life. His mouth was smashed. Let me tell you, if that Japanese player can win, I will call you dad." 3. Don't limit some things too much to a few points. To put it bluntly, most readers read this type of article just to relax. What you write is like a short essay. No matter how good it is, no one will read it. 4. Characters. For a novice, basically I don't expect to be able to write something particularly good, as long as I don't write out of character, but I have to know how to make the best use of the characters. You can take a notebook or create a document to write down the supporting characters that have appeared before. In which chapter does his name appear, open it when necessary? If it matches and the plot makes sense, just use it, so that your overall view will not be too confusing, and it can also reduce the time spent on naming. Then there are the names that I really want to complain about. One name is Gao Fei. Those who have read your novel know that he is a person in it. If you don't know, I thought he was meowing a dog. 5. Plot, those poisonous plots, I won't go into details, everyone knows it, but do you often run out of things to write in the middle of writing, or think of two ideas, but it is difficult to connect the two ideas, what should you do? Read more news, because the news can tell you that the forest is big and there are all kinds of animals and horses, such as "Recently, a man in a certain city put the car on his shoulders and carried it home because he was drunk." Sentences like this are everywhere. You need to know how to use them, and then you can find a suitable time to write down some embarrassing, angry or interesting things that happened around you. For example, am I not giving advice to your novel now? You can completely assign the protagonist the identity of an online article author, and then write about it. You must know how to discover and use it. 6. Plot, this is what I want to complain about the most. If other people's books are like a rough sea or a fast river, then yours is like a pool of stagnant water, the kind that doesn't move at all. Apart from the feeling of being discouraged, the whole novel gives me the feeling of two words, bland, don't be so limited in your thinking, let go, it is not an online novel, not the real world, say something difficult to understand, and make it break away from reality while being close to reality. What does it mean? It is built on a foundation without errors such as logic and values. After others see it, they may think it is unbelievable and magical, but if they think about it seriously, they think there is nothing wrong with it. Do you understand? Of course, this stuff requires practice and concentration. As long as you want to go further on the Internet writing path, or if it becomes your retreat after failure, you can always do it slowly. 7. Entertainment, again, think more openly, be more imaginative, and write more. It may seem incredible, but it really exists in reality. Examples "In order to make this movie, Luther also went to Hengdian to look for actors. This place is Hengdian. , To be honest, it's really magical. How magical is it? Hmm... Have you ever seen a Japanese emperor handing cigarettes to the imperial guards of the Ming Dynasty? " It's just a metaphor, but this thing requires people's knowledge and ability, um... Again, take your time. 8. To be honest, I personally don't recommend writing this. If the writing style allows, you can add some personal things of your own. As long as you understand the specifics. 9. I have seen the above mentioned in this book. You have to write 100,000 words now. If you change it now, it will be easy to make it nondescript. That's about it, I will add more later. Also, in the afternoon, I may write an autobiography for a character in your book. If you are interested, you can read it {"NickName":"Dou Gong","UserId":132437476}

Will there be new books published? Tell me if you can.

I also opened a book, but it's been so long since I've written it that I've lost all sense of the plot, which is really uncomfortable. _(:зゝ∠)_

Come on, the writing is good, and the early visual inspection is okay. Just don't be addicted and read the inside. I will follow it. I recommend investing in it. The updates are awesome.

It's 40,000 words, and I'm itching not to post something, so let's summarize it 1. Nowadays, in the Wenzi genre, it's actually very difficult to write based on the classics. The main reason is that the routines are almost written based on the classics. It's very difficult to write new routines. To be honest, this question Those who are ready to write a debut novel are either stupid or confident in their writing skills. From the contents of the first 8 chapters, it can be seen that the author belongs to the former group. To be honest, I personally suggest that the author reworks the contents of the first 8 chapters if he has time. It is really quite poisonous. 2. The main thing is the author's writing style. I divide the writing style into three categories: realistic, relaxed, and sandy. Most of the writing styles are relaxed, and at the same time, it is the most suitable. The author's style is realistic. To be honest, this style of writing is not popular in this subject matter. Plus the author's current writing style, well, it is still very difficult to become popular. 3. For novels, poisonous points are unavoidable. No matter who it is, I said that it is useless even if Jesus comes. I also divided it (only represents my personal opinion) The first level, some professional knowledge errors, such as the author indiscriminately giving diseases to patients with depression (manual comedy) almost no one cares about. The second level, the routine is too old, such as having a sister who is not your biological sister, etc. It doesn't matter as long as you have some poison resistance. The third level, I don't know how to put it, for example, in City God, the system directly gives money to the protagonist's card, the supporting characters are disgusting, and the poison resistance can be seen The fourth level, this is easy to say, real divine farmers such as Timgou and the Holy Mother can be seen The fifth level, humiliating China First, the second level is unavoidable, the third level, With the author's current writing power... I can only say that I should try to reduce it to the minimum, and never appear in the fourth level. 4. Character design. The author's current character design can only be regarded as quite satisfactory, neither good nor bad. For example, Gao Fei, this character can be designed to look like a Northeastern man who speaks like a scumbag. It's a pity. 5. I guess the author doesn't have an outline, the update is so slow. Well, that's it, I'm tired. {"NickName":"Dou Gong","UserId":132437476}

Writing it on the spot and then giving it ten minutes or something is too poisonous.

Why did it break again? {"NickName":"Dou Gong","UserId":132437476}

It was a year ago since your last update.

It's really only been half a year 🙂

October is almost over, haven't you published a new book yet?

I wrote 14,000 words in more than a month

Ok, it's been a year plus two months.