Six Meridians Literary Sage

With words as the core of the power system, it is very creative, and it can also absorb a wave of goodwill and richness of traditional culture, and it is good at playing. In addition, the plot of embodying the poetic words and even splitting the words is also very good. The design including the six meridians is also very neat. . . However, a good worldview should be "deduced" rather than "set" by the author. The difference lies in whether the entire world view setting can be logically closed. In this book, literature is the bridge between spiritual power and ultimate externalized power, but why doesn't anyone directly transform spiritual power into power, or why no one uses music and the like to replace literature? ——The underlying logic behind this is something you should at least spend one more sentence explaining. Otherwise, the entire setting is as unreliable as a castle in the air. Furthermore, the classification of the six meridians also feels a bit strange. These factions are completely the embodiment of different granularities of literature. According to normal people's logic, one must first know the words, then the lyrics, and then the poems. But here they are juxtaposed, so in the subsequent plot, we should find opportunities to give a credible reason. Finally, after reading two or three chapters, my biggest feeling is that old wine is put in new bottles. Although the world is full of "scholars", to put it bluntly, when fighting, we still use our internal strength and sword fighting skills. Apart from splitting words, there is little expression of literary fighting. For example, my poems can just refute your poems, such as my own poems, etc., And the style of speech is not different from other writing styles. Even the plot is still a classic show-off and slap-in-the-face scene, emmmmmmm. . . .

Come on, Shuazi has read half of it. Let me state in advance that these are all Shuzi's own ideas. Please ignore any inappropriateness. First, I would like to praise the author. The article is very special. It combines text, poetry culture, modern background, and system. This is really rare to see. The fighting scenes are also described with great care, and the plot is quite unremarkable. This is Shuzi's personal opinion. Is it possible to add a little more detailed description of the location during the big scene change? Don't just carry it with a few simple sentences. Readers who read quickly can easily be confused. Also, the fighting scene lacks a little bit of meaning. It's more of a line drawing style. Maybe it would be better if you add some embellishments and blurring. For the time being, these thoughts are better than I thought! ! ! Can you come and give me some guidance on my novel? Quite big! ! ! Q^Q

Here you go, I'm not qualified to give advice as a monthly ticket holder, so let's just give it a try and give a brief review The title of the book is quite domineering, the introduction, and the meaning to be expressed is also very clear Judging from the layout of the first three chapters, the author obviously has a certain grasp of the novel's routines. The plot development and introduction are quite smooth, with no faults and a good sense of immersion. After a concise and high-level introduction, the plot jumps directly into the plot, which is very good. I won't say much about setting, because each has its own audience, and the most important thing for every author is setting. The description of the event is also good and can be seen clearly What are the flaws? What happened in the first few chapters and the characters that appeared were numerous and miscellaneous. Basically, I finished reading the whole thing before I even figured out which one was which and why it happened. There is a lack of explanation for the appearance of characters and the occurrence of conflicts. It feels like names and people pop up out of nowhere. This also makes the first chapter feel like the guest is taking over the role. At first glance, I can't tell who is the main character and who is the supporting character between Li and Lin. The same is true later, the other The sense of lack of main plot mentioned in the storytelling also partly stems from this The fighting lacks setting support. I just feel that I have been fighting for a long time, and until the end, I still don't understand how to win. The ability rules are still empty in my mind. That's probably it. I wish the author will become a god as soon as possible🙏

The setting and worldview are relatively novel, and the author has put some effort into it, but the plot is a bit cliche.

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It's well written, but there are some typos

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Originally it was just for grading, but I found out that the author's creativity is really good. I have seen many works about Yanling, mostly related to prohibition. The author's words, prose, and spirit are all blended together. The creativity is unconventional, and the chapter starts with traditional literature. In an era when novice literature is rampant, the viewing value is greatly increased. It is worthy of extra points. Recommended! Only with culture as the core, the author's writing style needs to be further strengthened, and since there is fighting and aura, it still has the style of fairy tales or fantasy. I personally feel that culture should pay more attention to interpretation of emotions, and verbal battles with Confucian scholars. There is no smoke but it is still exciting! There is also a common problem among novices (I have it too). It is not advisable to force the system structure on readers and should be changed.

I was looking for a book in my spare time and found this one to be good. I would like to support it.

Still not updating? But that's it?

It can be seen that the author is writing seriously, so keep up the good work.

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Have a good rest, it's been hot lately,

You don't need to read further to know that the world view and power system settings are very solid. But in addition to this system, in the first chapter, a character with no IQ caused trouble, which made the protagonist seem unintelligent. There were too many similar plots and it was very cliche. I know the power system is very nice, but the plot and characters are boring.

My head felt blurry when I looked at it, and I felt like I was hitting a hammer here and there.

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