The Road to Becoming a God Starting from the Dragon Clan

To the author Current progress Chapter 18. Since I started reading this book, it is certain that the author's subject matter is relatively new. It is a good idea to fill in the unknown domestic situations based on the original work of the Dragon Clan. However, it also has relatively large shortcomings. It is similar to the plots of chapters 14 and 18, which are a bit too middle-of-the-road. Let's talk about chapter 14 first. The situation you described will not occur during law enforcement. Arbitrary arrest without any direct evidence? The shouting of the restaurant owner next to me was completely out of character, and it had no connection with the following chapter, and the real number was superfluous. As for the Chapter 18 police call, unless you call the regional police directly, the first thing you need to do is go to the 110 alarm center and then dispatch the police. It is impossible to deal with embarrassing situations like Chapter 18. If you don't understand the law enforcement procedures, you don't need to write it. As for the shepherd dog issue, to be honest, it's just a secondary feeling. Such people do exist, and patriotism is correct, but your description, emmmm, is a bit hasty, and it feels like a dream back to ancient Internet articles. It will be very unpopular when written like this, and the content of these two chapters It can even be said that you can completely omit most of it and move it to the next chapter. If you want better results, you don't want to copy words just to hold back the text. Good creativity also requires continuous practice and improvement. The continuity and fluency of the article cannot be guaranteed. How to make readers like it?

The Dragon Clan... Has its own path to becoming a god, and yes, it's the path Herzog took.

To be honest, the end of Qin Shihuang's Mausoleum was particularly bad.

If you don't have such deep skills, don't play deep and it will look uncomfortable.

The writing is much better than some novels. 👍👍