The Return of the Perfect Ten Evils

Now I have basically forgotten the original text. I didn't expect that all the major tribes in the original text died because of the birth of Shanbao, and Xiao Hong, Zhu Yan and the four of them were so oppressive when they first appeared. I think the protagonist is so strong and the character is not strong enough (of course it is much better than some invincible games that are awkward). Maybe there is too little interaction. I don't know if there is no dialogue or introduction with other people, or it is a bit empty and there are no twists and turns. Many descriptions are taken from the original text hh. In addition, I feel that the progress is very fast. In the original book, Shanbao fights, several major tribes fight, and the Virtual God Realm is described in great detail. There are many stories. This book feels a little fleeting. It may be that the author planned it in this way. I feel that the level gap is too big and it is not easy to interact, so the focus is on the subsequent stories. I am not sure. It's not a question of whether there is enough water or not, it's a question of a lot less, so the number of words in each chapter can be a little more! ! !

There are twenty-five young men running amok in the Nine Heavens and Ten Lands, and internal fighting is better than external fighting. You have done a great job in fighting foreign lands, but you have a personal enmity with me. Sooner or later, I will stab you in the back. Foreign lands support each other, form teams to clear the jungle, and engage in healthy competition. The Red King fakes his death for an era, and all races have no fault. An Lan shouted for help, and the kings of the foreign lands risked their lives one by one. Demon King Pu only has a remnant soul left, and Foreign World is trying its best to help him return to his peak. I'm afraid of comparison!

An Lan: I'm going to die, but what should Yu Tuo do? 😭 Yu Tuo: Not to become an immortal emperor, just to wait for your return in the world of mortals! 😭

After reading these chapters, I feel a bit bland. Since the Battle of the Border, it has become a lot duller. This is why some people have stopped following it. It feels like a transitional chapter, but it is also very long. It can be said to be like a daily chapter, but it is too slow to advance the plot. Speaking of the daily chapters, I prefer the interaction with Liu Shen, but there is basically none. I hope to add more. There are some ideas that the author can refer to. Now that I have written this, compared to the plot of the original work, a lot has been changed. I think that the subsequent plot cannot be like the original work, and major changes need to be made. Now that there are protagonists and Liu Shen, and the plot of Zhetian Shengxu is added, the scale of the later liquidation and even God can be made larger (compared to the original work). For example, the supreme being in the past time and space of the great liquidation (quasi-immortal emperor) will come out to participate in the liquidation in the future, and the immortal emperor will participate in the layout and calculation. You can write some enemies with distinctive personalities. A good book should not only have a good plot, but also have good character creation. Fan fiction and pig-foot square character creation are all included in the original book. They are well described, and the same goes for the enemies. Zhaizhu's new book "Zhao Li Sheng" just a few chapters depicts Zhou Qiyun with a heroic temperament, which makes people unforgettable for a long time, and the same is true for the perfect An Lan. The author's writing style is good, and he does not focus on the description of spiritual practice, but focuses on the character creation and plot. At the same time, there is not only the weird clan in the sky, there are other Immortal Emperor-level forces, who sit on the upper reaches of the Long River of Time for the purpose of higher-level status, fishing for eternity, and participating in the reckoning. The scale is enlarged and the vision is broadened. Although the book "The Digging of Bones" at the beginning is a mindless and cool book, it became popular because he raised the original work to a higher latitude and became popular because of the great struggle in the world, the overthrow of reincarnation, the involvement of different supreme beings in the settlement, and the layout. However, when I read it, I felt that the power of a pig's foot or an immortal was involved in these layouts. I was a little speechless when I read it, but I don't deny that people jumped out of the original work and created their own ideas. I think the author can also write like this, jump out of the original book, and write his own. Just like the plot behind the Primordial Gate, although it is a bit watery, it not only supplements the original pit, but also digs a new pit. In addition, it is recommended to write less descriptions of practice and more plots. In addition, the author is not taught to write a book, 😁 is just a display of his own ideas, which can be used as a reference. This will be more enjoyable and more attractive. This book can be said to be my favorite perfect fanfic. It satisfies a lot of ideas. I hope the author can write it well and not write too many bland plots or make it messy.

Real perfection The details are perfectly controlled, with the atmosphere of the original work, a different Xiao Shi, a Xiao Shi who is not desperate, and a Xiao Shi who is not aggrieved. After reading the other two books, I dare not read the perfect ending. Shi Hao, who can't bear to accept it the most, hopes that he will always be the Xiao Shi of Shicun in your book. I once shed tears when I read it carefully. Forced by life, I can only vote for one monthly vote, come on! Wugui Huo Ling'er Bury the Immortal. Remember the Ruthless Emperor The Divine King in White

This book is considered the best of the three fanfics. In "The Counterattack of the Blocking Sky Next Door", the protagonist Liu Yunzhi really pushed the reader's IQ to the ground and rubbed it. The quasi-immortal emperor can actually simply kill the immortal emperor. What a cosmic joke, what the hell, it disgusts me to death, bah.

In the invincible flow, the protagonist is supposed to embark on the road to invincibility, but the author drags the pace and makes the protagonist and Liu Shen fight to the death in a low-end game. The author doesn't think such a plot is exciting, right? Do you think it's exciting and exciting to fight for blood at the level of a true immortal? In the original work, true immortals have no status. They are just the starting point of the immortal path. Once Shi Hao becomes a true immortal, he can kill the quasi-immortal king like a chicken. Now the protagonist has to restrain himself when trying to fight a quasi-immortal king. If you want to beat him to death, at least you have to fight with a creature at the level of the immortal king. Looking at the results now, the ten evil spirits and Liu Shen have lost their strength again and again. The plot is dull and not interesting. How can it be possible to see the bright moon through the clouds and enter the eighteenth level of hell and never recover🙄

I finally made up my mind to delete this book, and I feel very emotional when I think back on it! Back then I had been following Chen Da's books, and The Three Parts of Shading the Sky was my favorite fantasy novel, bar none! When the Holy Ruins ended (for the first time), I felt extremely anxious. It was an indescribable feeling! There are many regrets in my heart that cannot be resolved! Suddenly I saw a few Zhetian fan novels, and I followed them with the intention of making up for my regrets. Among them are Dragon Horse and Reversal, which are well written. Unfortunately, the process is good, but most of them are unfinished! The author of the ten evils is the author of reversal. The advantage of this author is that he has a great imagination and can fill in the original book with his own ideas. The shortcomings are also very obvious. The main reason is that the climax part is very dull, the arrears are more serious, and he can ask for leave at any time. The most important thing is that his words do not mean what he says, which makes people speechless. If people don't believe it, they will not stand! So don't continue!

Now is not the time for you to slow down the pace. If you go to the Immortal King, the pace will be slower. It is reasonable, and the realm of the Immortal King is divided into many levels. But a true immortal realm is as level as an ant. How long and how many chapters have you dragged on, and the more you read, the more you will get frustrated.

Willow God

So what can a willow tree and a thunder spirit produce, and it's not a lightning strike tree? 😏😏😏

The writing is very good. I originally thought that the protagonist of the Ten Evils is the Ten Evils, but later I realized that the author is really planning to gather the Ten Evils in Shicun and let them regain their glory. The writing is very interesting, but there are too few plots in No. 10 Recently. I suggest adding more. I hope that on the road to No. 10, The protagonists will be more holy, and it will be more satisfying.

To be honest, the protagonist is indeed invincible at the same level of strength, but his own strength cannot keep up with the enemy at the beginning. So far, he has not returned to the realm of immortals, and the weakest enemy is the immortal king. The protagonist's strength seems to be stagnant, and even a descendant of the Immortal King can be bullied at will. I hope he can recover quickly, and instead of asking for an Immortal King, he can at least recover to a true Immortal/Quasi Immortal King within a few days. The protagonist is currently in a place ruled by five immortal kings. As far as the supreme realm of humanity is concerned, he is really no different from an ant, which makes him feel a little uncomfortable.

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It can be renamed "Perfect and the Strongest Nanny"

It looks good, but I still hope that there will be a few popular female protagonists. After all, if you have the strength, there is no need to become a monk.

That's it, where's the update? ? ? ? You haven't even had an orgasm yet, how can you still mess around? Do you want me to abandon the book?

Come on, author

This book is very good, and the number of updates is sufficient. Why are there so few subscriptions?

Damn it, I want to make a comment on your new book, Double Eyes, but you want a lower limit of 500 points. You are too shady! I wanted to continue to support you, but I was scared off!

The first one in the hearts of perfect fans. Although there are some flaws in it, it is much better looking than others.

I ordered them all and found a good fanfic, the writing is really good

With the amount of updates you do, you can't get a single vote in a month. What do you want me to vote for?

Is the author breaking the news? If there is an update, the remaining monthly passes will be yours 😊

Good guy, after the investment failed, I realized that the author didn't finish it.

Brother, you should update it quickly, it's not enough🙁

Congratulations on finishing this book🌸 From the beginning of this book, it has been almost 448 days, 2.06 Million words, and an average of 4598 words written a day. Let's support the ending according to the original idea.

Finished spreading flowers! 🌹

There's so much nonsense, why don't we fight?

It looks good, but it's short. I posted this just to see if I have a title.