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Author, the number of words in Transformation is hundreds of times worse than yours. 🔨🔨🔨🔨🔨

Can the Three Dark Giants come out? ?

Come on, it's from the last book. Quick update

There needs to be more words, at least 3,000 words. This is too short.

There must be foreshadowing when the monster appears. The shock of people seeing the monster should not just be the shock of the protagonist. The friend must write about the government's response and the military's attack on the monster and the process of its destruction. This must be written in full, otherwise it will be like a simple novel, and it will be incomprehensible.

I recommend a book to you, called The Legend of Tiga. He describes the fighting process, people's reactions, and the military's reactions very well. You can read it once a day, at least 3,000 words, all of which must be described. Originally, when monsters suddenly appeared in reality, people's reactions were not written at all, and they were all written about the protagonist.

It is necessary to describe people's sense of despair when the military is destroyed, it is necessary to describe the destructive power and terror of monsters, and it is necessary to describe hell on earth. Only in this way can it be a good Ouwen.

Will Guvira appear in the next chapter of the author? Watching this is like watching a tokusatsu drama 🤫

Writing about one mind and one body, it seems that the human body cannot use Ultraman's power. It must be transformed before it can be used. This is more like Ultraman possessing people, and people use Ultraman's power to fight monsters. Watching Ultraman, I prefer that the protagonist is Ultraman himself. Of course, this does not mean that the writing is not good, it is still very interesting to watch. This only represents my personal opinion. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The author, his writing skills need to be improved. For example, when the protagonist hears Trigga's voice, he should write about his surprise and confusion, and when the monster appears, he should write about people's shock, panic, and confusion.