Quickly Travel Through Time with the House

The work is good and the plot is compact. However, there are many typos, lost words, and omitted words. I hope the author can review it carefully.

If you want to make progress, you have to listen to everyone's opinions, so it doesn't matter if you give more opinions. I hope I can see my own strengths and weaknesses from everyone's opinions and make progress.

Can you add an ancient exile or escape story? Love this style. There are only a few works outside, so few! Not enough. 🌹

I've been a little stuck lately. I'm thinking about the plot every day. I can only update it once a day. When I save more articles, I'll update it twice a day.

The plot of the story is compact, I like it very much, I hope to check it carefully and reduce typos.

This is actually a fast-travel novel, (I wouldn't have known it if I hadn't read Chapter 19). From the resume, I thought it was a girl who traveled through the old era and started a counterattack journey. Also, I felt that the pace of the first world was so fast, and it was gone in just 19 chapters. It felt like there were a lot of things that were not explained clearly. I didn't even know much about the personalities of her two children, and it ended? I feel that many people's personalities and images are very one-sided. There are no specific examples or anything like that. I just know that her children are very well-behaved. How are they so well-behaved? How well-behaved is it? And the matter with her parents has not been explained clearly? The first world always ends in a hurry. Also, I didn't even see many emotional lines, but it felt very baffling that Qi Yunfeng and Lin Tong were together? ? ? Although the old era was very direct, this is too direct. Personally (note, it is a person, please avoid trolling) I still hope that the author can write more detailed events in the future, otherwise it will feel very distorted. I hope that the image of the characters can be enriched in the future, otherwise it will feel that the substitution is not enough. Finally, cheers to the author! (ง •̀_•́)ง (The above are all personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it, you are right if you criticize) (PS: Why does the author like to add an exclamation mark after every sentence? Is it a personal habit? Personally, I still prefer to end with a period, which does not mean that you cannot end with an emotion. Instead, I feel that ending every sentence with an exclamation point is a bit too exaggerated, but I have gotten used to it, and I have developed a magical skill that can automatically treat exclamation points as periods! Wow, wow, wow, I am so smart and narcissistic. JPG)

I can't say it's not good, but it feels like the clear soup is lacking in noodles. It's a pity to abandon it, but the food is tasteless... And can you check the typos before posting? Sometimes there are too many typos and I want to abandon the article.

The author is great, waiting for your second part

It already has 150,000 words, and the collection has barely grown recently. Is it because no one has read it?

I've opened a new book, let's see how it goes

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