I Have Been the Head Catcher at Liumen for These Years

Well written, so far there are no poisonous points, please update!

I feel like the martial arts are written in such a way that they are powerful but not very powerful. What is so powerful is the indestructible magical power of the Vajra, which allows the protagonist to kill the inborn without any effort. Of course, this kind of innateness does not have magical powers. But I don't know if the Tathagata Palm is too weak in the later description, as well as Xiao Li's flying knife. These martial arts are directly and systematically taught to the protagonist. Nor does it focus on describing the mysterious improvement. Let's just say that Xiao Li's flying knife is a unique skill. It can unite the energy, energy and amplitude of the whole body into one, and the great power can be concentrated into an ordinary flying knife. It is normal for the weak to defeat the strong. This kind of thing can only be cultivated by a genius who is selected from a million. It has that mysterious feeling that since the protagonist cannot make great progress in martial arts, he can only rely on the system to reward his skills. And the unparalleled martial arts such as Tathagata Divine Palm are not just ordinary attacking palms with great power. Understanding each palm technique is not only a kind of artistic conception, but also a kind of enlightenment. The skill itself will improve by leaps and bounds. Let's talk about the last pose of Tathagata Nirvana. When you look at the name, you can initially understand that even if a strong enemy attacks, it can explode like the disintegration of a demon. It will explode in an instant and multiply its skill by dozens or hundreds of times to kill more and more enemies. Return against the odds! This is the origin of unparalleled martial arts. Every style is not easy to learn. If you don't understand that kind of artistic conception, you will never be able to learn it in a lifetime, and you will go crazy. People with strong skills will detonate all the skills in their bodies and die. However, the protagonist does not need to use his own perception system to directly reward the mastery. In addition to the possibility that the protagonist will use the Tathagata palm to cross the boundary to kill the enemy, his own understanding does not seem to be improved, and his skills can only be improved by system rewards. Moreover, Tathagata Divine Palm is the supreme magical skill of Buddhas, and learning it will not improve the amplitude of the Vajra Indestructible Magic Skill. This way of writing is really difficult to describe in one word. It may be like the same person practicing the same skill. Some people have gone to heaven, while others have difficulty walking on the earth. So I want to express that I want to give the protagonist various magical powers. Can you describe in detail the various mysteries that the protagonist has after being passed down by the system? Can you tell me what the protagonist's own insights are, how much the realm of his soul has been improved, and how much it has added to his body. If he can use one more skill to produce 100% power, he can still emit several times more power. This is the power of magical power. There are people who have hundreds of years of skill and can't defeat people who have decades of skill. Why? This is the gap.

Very well written! Whether it is the top ten villains or the leader of the Five Mountains Sword Sect, they are all described very well, their plots, calculations and IQs are online, and their characterizations are very well done. Especially Dongfang Bubai's appearance, the characters are created very well!

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the writing is good. It is not the kind of mindless and refreshing novel, but has a rigorous reasoning concept. The protagonist does not act awesome right from the beginning, and others are fools. How can I put it, it has the style of novels written by Gu Long and Wen Ruian. As long as the author keeps it going, this book's performance will not be bad.

Shangguan Yan

The plot is well written, but there are too many martial arts and they are too complicated. It is better to specialize in a few, or combine several martial arts to create your own martial arts.

Inconsistency: The author thinks it is true.

Starting from the top ten villains, it is pure intelligence. Especially killing all the servants of the village and sending them to the Five Mountains Villa is basically a loss of intelligence. There is no way to pursue it. It will basically collapse. Come on, author, see you again👋🏻

Personally, I feel that the Bronze-rewarded Fengshen Legs already contain peerless lightness skills, and the Snow-Woothing Steps that follow are not as strong as the Fengshen Legs.

Good books, I'm here, 🙂

Come on, it's rare to find such comprehensive martial arts novels that you can read now, come on＾0＾~

The biggest poisonous point of this kind of novel is that after only completing a small task, you get a huge reward. This is an insult to the reader's IQ!

I just read the introduction and want to complain! The Fengshen Kick itself is a top-notch light skill! Why do you think Nie Feng is called the God of Wind?

When I saw the chapter table of contents, I almost didn't want to read it. It was because you found the jade seal that you were promoted to the Bronze Catching Block. The emperor in your book couldn't afford it, or he was still promoted to the Catching Block. It's a systematic promotion method.

The previous system prompts that the poison is not deep and is acceptable. But in your second flower-picking thief case, how could you arrest someone alone at night? If you were gold and silver, that would be okay, but you have only been in the Six Doors for a few days! Leaving aside the issue of trust, can you alone guarantee that the criminal will be caught? In case the flower picker hasn't come out yet. Were you discovered first and treated as a flower picker? Maybe you can't beat the flower picker, and the flower picker picks the flower picker and throws you into the bed of the official lady. The next day you were treated as a flower picker. Can you tell me clearly? Furthermore, from ancient times to the present, there have generally been no accidents, and cases have been handled by more than two people. They are afraid of having someone to rely on if something goes wrong, and they are also afraid that there are witnesses who can't tell clearly if something goes wrong. This case of yours is purely for the main character to stand out and make people look embarrassed. Finally, you didn't notify your superiors before taking action and only reported it afterward. The Lord Shen simply let it go. If everyone in the Six Gates is like this, then do you think Shenhou can control the Six Gates? The subordinates didn't know what they were doing, and they probably died without knowing how they died. So what should we do if we hold them accountable afterwards? He is not qualified to be a leader at all.

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Okay, don't follow the example of the author of "My Days of Working in Jinyiwei". The writing was so good that it suddenly became toxic. I estimate that at least half of the people have stopped reading it. I regretted subscribing. It was a waste of money.

The contract has been sent and the status will be changed on Friday. If you want to invest, hurry up and get on board.

I saw that the Seven Heroes town was abandoned and the imperial seal was stolen. I asked you to come out to catch the thieves. You went to mind your own business and watched the martial arts competition. There is a problem with the basic logic. I came to it because of the two words "Putou" in the title of your book.

I always feel like a hammer in the west is a stick in the east.

You good guy has gained the same fighting power as Xiaoao Jianghu. He can fight the eighth level of innateness the day after tomorrow. Even in fantasy, no one can challenge you beyond the level. Also, Gu Long's martial arts split mountains and cut off currents, and the Nine Yin Manual is just a master's martial arts. Go watch the appearance introduction of Master Jin's Nine Yin Manual.

I watched it without thinking about it.

It's hard to describe how powerful martial arts is, and it's even harder to describe martial arts with different worldviews. Who is better among Jin Yong's Taixuan Jing, Gu Long's The Great Compassion of Yin and Yang, Huang Yi's Illustrated Book of the God of War, Liang Yusheng's Secret Book of Bodhidharma, and Wen Ruian's Amazing Shot? No one can know clearly, because everyone's understanding is different, and this does not include the martial arts in other martial arts comics or novels. This thing depends on personal feelings. The difficulty of writing comprehensive martial arts is cognition. 1. The division of martial arts and the strength of the original characters. 2. The division of the main background and the focus of description. 3. The arrangement of the main villain. (It cannot break the world view in other original works) 4. What type of focus is the description of the novel? (There are those who are happy in the world, there are those who are in the officialdom, there are those who establish sects, etc.) 5. This is the most important thing. Don't forcefully arrange to show off, don't use a halo of wisdom, don't be unable to walk when you see a woman, don't have fighting scenes with only martial arts names, don't dig holes without filling them (hate this the most), don't randomly improve the protagonist's martial arts if you are not invincible.

To be honest, it may not sound very nice. It's understandable that you give gold fingers, but it must be logical. After completing the task, you can give me martial arts and improve my understanding. Don't just add the whole thing to a few years. Are you sure you won't be arrested and sliced ​​into pieces? The fact that you learn martial arts quickly can be explained by your good understanding, and that your internal strength grows quickly can be explained by absorbing other people's energy or taking drugs. If you just add it directly, wouldn't it be obvious to people who are several ranks higher than you?

For the sake of plot, intelligence is forcibly reduced. The female head catcher was put into dangerous situations several times.

Everything else is fine. In ancient martial arts, have you seen the one where the protagonist put on his pants and ran away? No matter how exciting the writing is, there should be an iron law that cannot be changed in any era and background. Just like everyone knows that ships cannot run on the road, women in ancient times cannot write like you do. The biggest problem is that you are writing the original book that everyone has read.

The author wrote about the Indestructible Vajra Kung Fu incorrectly. The Indestructible Vajra Kung Fu requires one to become a golden man. Only by practicing it to the Great Perfection can one avoid transformation. Furthermore, the Indestructible Vajra Kung Fu can make up for the gap in skill. Cheng Shifei and Zhu Wuwu have very different skills, but don't they both lose every time they fight?

What kind of book has he written? It can be included in the top 100 worst novels of the year.

I really can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 190. I thought you would make progress as the author, but it's still the same as the beginning, full of loopholes, no logic, no sense of substitution at all, and it's getting more and more outrageous. I can only wish An well 😅

After reading Chapter 10 of 25 Years of Kung Fu, I didn't see the internal skills and mental methods...