Zhutian: Sign in to Become a Soul Beast a Hundred Thousand Years in Advance

It feels a bit like licking a dog. Books are fine. Just be careful.

My book was about to get a 404 because of my lesbianism. I learned from the pain and decided to revise it. Readers can stay and see the results. The milk cat will not let everyone down 😢😢 I wrote about lesbianism before, but with the education of love, I have changed my ways and now I have changed everything 🙂

I haven't read much, just a few poisonous points The protagonist has a bird named Zhizhi, who has been with the protagonist for many years. He died in order to wake up the sleeping protagonist. Part of the soul after death was reincarnated as a human without previous memories. After the protagonist found her, he took her back, and later she married someone else (if you read it correctly, that's what it is, it seems that she was allowed to pursue happiness) When Tang San was born, the protagonist turned his humanity into fruit and made Tang Hao simple. This is not the point, the point is to become a woman. I haven't read the rest of it. I thought the previous ones were okay. From Zhizhi is Dead to Zhizhi, I don't know why I wrote it that way. I might as well just write Zhizhi to death. I was poisoned

The writing is good, but Zhizhi is a bit uncomfortable😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😣 I hope the author will open a new book about Zhizhi's living life. Thank you.

I subscribed just to scold you. It started off well, but within ten chapters it started to feed me poison, right? Giving away a girl, right? If you're so awesome that you can't continue writing, you're forced to gain buffs and become someone else's son, right? But if you're so awesome, you still have to play house, right? There is only Douluo in the world, right? What a show.

The kind of person who went to Zhizhi and was fed arsenic to the point where his soul was shattered.

You're so powerful and you don't want to conquer all the worlds, but you still play house with Tang San, right?

The beginning of the early stage was well written, with elves, but when Tang San came out, it was too bad. I felt that it was following the plot of Tang San, which was not good. Please tell me about the later stages.

The author got a head start, and after ten chapters he found a junior high school student to write for him.

Harem, scumbag, disgusting and vulgar, I really don't like it. God-level start, everything that follows is stuff from the toilet. The kind that no one can watch without thinking!

I was in a good mood this morning. I saw this book recommended and clicked on it. The previous writing was pretty good, but the part about Zhi Zhi's amnesia was immediately persuaded to quit. Do you know how it felt to put yourself in the novel? I don't want to read novels these two days 😐

The purpose of raising fan points is to scold you and give a piece of advice to those who come after you. The first ten chapters are very good and nice. Don't read it from chapter 11 onwards. I'm afraid that my brothers will get upset. It's no different from the original work and I found myself a father.

The daily guide book is extraordinary.

Am I the only one who feels that this little bird is superfluous? I feel that the protagonist has been dedicating himself for no reason. Alas, I feel like I have had enough of it.

Let's enjoy it together

Go away, pure love, I am really speechless. The protagonist also thinks that the girls in the book are too miserable. Give everyone a home. Qian Renxue, Zhu Zhuqing, with their heaven-defying halos, moved their little hands to pinch out soul rings.

After the first ten chapters, it's basically the same as the original work.

The novel has collapsed. Who will collapse if you don't?

It was okay in ancient times, but not anymore

The plot of the ancient times is quite interesting, but after seeing Tang San appear and follow the plot of the original work, I couldn't stand it anymore! No way, give up!

Brothers, I have always been known as the Shennong. I finished reading the free chapter today. The "Zhi Zhi" character at the beginning of the book turned out to have nothing to do with the little girl "Tits". In the end, "Zhi Zhi" met the protagonist after reincarnation.

What are you writing about? In the early stage, you were just a spectator, but in the later stage, the boss waved his hand and changed the world.

The pattern has opened up hahaha. I love this type of character who is very powerful at the beginning. I think it's quite interesting. Although I haven't watched the original version of Douluo Dalu, I found it quite interesting while reading the comments and the article. The imagination is too big. The protagonist doesn't need to defy the sky, he can just force the clouds into the sky. I'm really looking forward to the future world of fast travel🤣🤣

Spending money to watch a bad ending makes you feel suddenly and speechless

Let's change the writing. What's going on behind the scenes, whether it's erotic or erotic, can't I continue writing?

(First let me tell you how I felt about watching it. It was quite good. There were plot memories to support it so I wouldn't be confused. It also added some settings that made it feel good and interesting. The beginning of the Divine Tree was really awesome. I almost became the second Willow God. The beauty of the "female heroine" was really loved. In addition, Haotian Douluo's second Tang San was indeed a third. It made me laugh. The elves gave the blessing and thought that there would be a third party. It looked pretty good. It feels like it's just plain. The rest is quite bland.) Hey, the setting is good but incomplete. The plot is also a bit cliche. For example, various texts are about Zhu Zhuqing Qian Renxue and Shrek's Eight Monsters. They follow the main storyline of Douluo every day or change it. I thought that the sacred tree was a guardian spirit beast at the beginning or had its own route. I didn't expect a clone. Zhizhi's character creation is quite good, but for a close friend (the sacred tree and Zhizhi) the story is too little. After all, friends will not be angry because of your lateness. I didn't expect to write it to death. (I thought there wouldn't be very few Zhizhi scenes in this book, but it turned out to be all about reincarnation and the possession of three souls.) The elf setting is really suitable and novel. I thought this book would have four or five hundred chapters at least. I didn't expect it. I didn't expect (the elves did not participate in the disputes or the elves did things on behalf of the sacred tree). There is also an old man betraying the elves. There is no explanation or purpose for the divine tree falling into a deep sleep (tens of millions of years ago, I have less than 10 skills, and I have never seen any magical powers). There is also a sense of helplessness on the other side of the mountain. It is a pity that two people who like each other have withdrawn because of some things and are not together. Dai Mubai is even more outrageous (licking a dog is not like licking a dog, it is like a pervert) There are so many settings that you have to add, or you can make up a history. Don't make readers love and hate at the same time (the character settings are very good, but there are too few written) From the dialogue, add some jokes or dialects, what's wrong? It's so weird. Waiting too much (no need to be restrained) and not becoming a god or fighting. It's just a bit watered down or difficult to change. It can be seen that the original intention was not like this and it became a bit anxious later. The author also explained it, but I don't accept it. My rice is not so easy to earn. Damn author, don't get caught by me, otherwise Qian Renxue's ass will be your end. O. O.

You are too much of a bookworm, right?

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