A Trip to Rebirth Campus

Come on, author, I think the writing is pretty good.

Is there any friend who would like to give me some advice? Please 😭

Why don't you write anymore? It makes me not want to write anymore.

Generally speaking, I read it very smoothly. The writing style is not as awkward as some books, and I don't feel awkward. But since the elementary school period is intended to be a transition, I don't need to write in such detail. I still want to see the life of junior high school. Come on!

Personally, I suggest you write it in parts, rather than putting it all in the main text volume. The division into chapters will appear planned.

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Brother, your writing is too sloppy, and it even sounds like a self-complaint. There is no specific plan for the route, but the urgency of just starting out. Although I am also a novice, I also write modern novels and campus. These days, I start from high school or college. Things in elementary school are no longer touching because the psychology of the children around me is very simple.